For constructive criticism:
Well, the audio quality deffinetly needed some work- some thing were hard to hear, the audio of the different voices was not especially consistent sounding to each other, and (though this is a matter of artistic preference rather than hard fact- I.E. It may just be me) the music and several sound effects seemed to be mixed too low. And the dogfight could have used a good deal more audio- it didn't sound like the ship was being chased or hammered, but barely touched.

That said...

This is one of the cleverest, wittiest fan audio works I have ever heard. It was fairly well-acted, and EXTREMELY well-written. The banter was lots of fun, the holo-drama argument especially, and even though the plot was rather simple, it kept moving with generous doses of humor that didn't seem at all out of place. So while the mixing could stand a bit of improvement, I really enjoyed the episode, and my compliments to your writers!