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T-bone
12-29-2004, 05:12 PM
The Separatist leaders were now assembled in the darkened Mustafar conference room overlooking several massive red waterfalls pouring down into streams of molten currents. The general feeling in the air was that of nervousness and fear. Even Wat Tambor's perpetually expressionless face seemed to radiate anxiety. They didn’t like being there. They didn’t want to be there. But they liked being alive and unfortunately being alive meant being on Mustafar for the time being.
The eclectic group had already been relocated from system to system a number of times and the process was starting to grate heavily on them. The last world they fled to, Utapau, was the recipient of an unexpected Jedi visitor so they had to move yet again to a less popular place. There was not a more reclusive planet in the galaxy than this hellish conglomerate of molten rock and lava. Surely no one would think to look there for the fugitive leaders.
As soon as Lord Sidious contacted them to let them know it was safe to return to their home planets, they would have to remain in hiding. Many people wanted to ask them many questions about many things but it would soon be irrelevant. Lord Sidious would soon be in control of the galaxy, they’d have protection, and more importantly, more power and a stake in his new empire. A few more days on Mustafar would surely be worth the inconvenience.
The group sat at a long grey table looking either at each other or outside the large windows. The lava outside created a reddish tint in the room that seemed to move and radiate like phantoms circling in the dark. The tiny President of the Commerce Guild, Shu Mai, whose head just barely was visible over the table due to the large chairs, broke the silence.
“Have you had any further contact with…him?” she said, looking in the direction of Nute Gunray, who had now taken up the role as leader of the group in Count Dooku’s absence. They didn’t like to talk openly about Darth Sidious. They didn’t know much about him, but they knew that Count Dooku called him his Master and now he was dead. They also knew that at the moment Sidious controlled their fate so they had no choice but to trust him and Gunray.
“No! A thousand times no!” he snapped at her. “Stop asking! Don’t you think I’m as worried as you?” In truth, he was even more worried. He had been dealing with the Sith long before his peers in the room even knew they had awakened from their long hibernation. Never in their wildest dreams did they ever think they’d see the Sith of ancient legend return, nonetheless have private dealings with them. “How did it ever get this far?” Nute thought to himself.
Shu Mai stared sternly at Gunray, then looked to Rune Haako who sat next to him. Haako kept her gaze but she could see he too was afraid. She moved her gaze back out the window at the sea of red. “I don’t like this,” she thought to herself, “Not one bit.”
It was at that point that a red light appeared on the hologram detector sitting at the center of the table accompanied by a dull audio alert. Everyone in the room shot up in their seats and Poggle the Lesser fumbled his ornate cane to the burnished floor. Full attention was now focused on the center of the table as the Separatist Leaders saw bluish flickering lights begin to emanate from the holoprojector. A humanoid shape tried to form but there was some trouble with the reception. Wat Tambor reached out and turned a few dials trying to improve the transmission. In a few seconds, the Separatists found themselves looking at a clear holographic transmission of Sith Master, Darth Sidious.
For Nute Gunray, this was nothing new but for many of the others in the room it was a heart-stopping experience. They had all kinds of preconceptions of what an actual Sith Master would look like, and this was nothing like what they had imagined. Some had mentally pictured images of tall, powerful looking men in flamboyant attire. Others imagined that a Sith Lord would be muscular in shape and perhaps young in years. Darth Sidious wore a simple dark, hooded robe and appeared to be wrinkled and pasty in complexion. His appearance itself did not impress them. However, when he spoke, apprehension filled the room and even Rune Haako, who had seen Sidious before, had to look down at the floor after a few seconds.
“Greetings, faithful friends,” he began. “Your time and patience has served you all well and your period of waiting is almost at an end.” He was a man of few words, little time, and had no use for small talk. He quickly went straight to the crux of the matter and the answers to everyone’s questions.
“Everything that is occurring throughout the galaxy is proceeding as I have planned,” he continued. “The new government will soon be in place and you will all have a role to play as a reward for your contributions. Before long you will be returning home to your new positions which I shall assign you.”
The Separatists felt a bit more comfortable both with this Sith Lord and also with their current situation. Perhaps the Sith were not so bad after all. If Nute Gunray and that metallic Separatist General were to be believed, Darth Sidious would soon be in control of the entire galaxy, so it was in their best interests to ally themselves with him for better or for worse. It was an exceedingly astute political strategy. There was a slight pause and then Sidious continued.
“I am sending my apprentice, Darth Vader, to assure your safety as well as give you transit from Mustafar when I deem it safe,” Sidious proclaimed. The Separatists were previously instructed by Gunray not to ask direct questions and to only speak to the Sith Lord if and when he specifically indicated. They sat quiet and San Hill turned to Po Nudo who was sitting next to him and gave a comforting smile. Everyone in the room felt the same reassurance. Everything was going to be fine, and soon.
Nute looked a little closer at the Sith Lord. Something was different about him. He looked older somehow. His face seemed more wrinkled and his hands seemed worn. Perhaps it was just the transmission. Haako didn’t seem to notice anything different so Nute let it go. There was no need to add more anxiety to the already uneasy group.
Outside the conference room, a lone Neimoidian guard stood. He was clearly not expecting to meet anyone or anything on this desolate world and felt his presence was just a formality. Nute Gunray was a nervous being by nature and always liked to have guards stationed wherever he went. Gunray lost a little faith in Battle Droids after the battle of Naboo and the failed occupation of that planet long ago. The situation that erupted on Geonosis only widened his distrust. Having one of his own around made him feel more comfortable and the job paid well.
The guard took a look down the long, dark hallway and instead of the usual view he had seen many times, he thought he saw something move. It wasn’t anything he could immediately identify. It was more like a shadow. He squinted a bit and took another look but saw nothing moving so he paid it no mind, happy for the diversion from the monotony of standing outside the room for far longer than he would have liked.
He took yet another glance outside the large window closest to him to watch the hypnotic lava pour down. The moment he looked back to the hallway was the same moment he was knocked off his feet by a fast-moving blur of black, white and blue. The last things he remembered seeing were his own legs on the floor next to him. Then, after another flash of blue and white, everything went dark before he could make a sound.
“Lord Vader should be on the surface as we speak,” Darth Sidious continued. “I take it you will see to his needs. He is the only other you can trust, now. You will be safe under his protection.” With that, the hologram flickered out and almost immediately the table came to life in stark contrast to the atmosphere before the brief but encouraging communiqué.
Inside the conference room, everyone but Poggle the Lesser seemed to still be elated about the news from Darth Sidious. Poggle was always inquisitive by nature and he put his full trust in Dooku who was now dead. Who would this new apprentice be and what kind of relationship would they have? He had heard nothing of the super-weapon plans he gave to Count Dooku on Geonosis for safekeeping. He did not like not knowing the whereabouts of those plans. If they were to fall into the wrong hands, not only could that weapon be abused but also he would not be credited with creating it. The Geonosians had a certain amount of respect for weapons since it was their main industry and Poggle felt especially close to that project.
“This is good news indeed,” said Passel Argente, the first to speak after the transmission ended. “At last we are getting something back for our service and dedication.”
“Yes,” added San Hill. “I feel much more secure now that I know this Sith is definitely behind us. We’ve deposited our credits in the right bank for sure.”
Similar small talk continued around the table amid congratulations and words of support for each other and their organizations. So much so that no one realized that a dark-robed, hooded humanoid figure was slowly entering the conference room from the bottom of the stairs leading up to where the table sat. The hooded figure walked up the steps slowly and ominously until he reached the top of the staircase where he halted. It was Nute Gunray who first noticed the eerie figure.
“Ah, you’re, uh, here. Good, good,” he said out loud. The entire table looked over and took him in. All they really could see was a dark humanoid shape. The man’s dark robe was simple, his hood up and where a face should be was just darkness. Perhaps it was some trick of the light. It was quite dark on this world and the room was not well lit.
Anakin Skywalker, now the Sith Lord, Darth Vader, surveyed the room and its occupants. He remembered their faces. Some he recalled from when he and Padmé were on “trial” after being captured on Geonosis. Others he knew all too well. This would be a day he would remember for a long time to come.
Just then, Vader heard something behind him, far down the corridor. Actually, he more than heard something; he felt something as well. It was a presence of sorts but it was dull, like an echo. He turned around and looked back down the stairway and into the corridor and the light hit his face just enough to reveal his features, although the Separatists could only see the back of his hood. The blue eyes that his wife used to gaze in every night were now gone, replaced by yellow orbs surrounded by a ring of red and filled with a black pupil that seemed devoid of all life. After a moment, he remembered why he was there and decided to ignore the presence for now. He used the Force to close and lock the door to the room without moving, then he slowly turned his darkened gaze back to the table full of Separatist Leaders.
“Yes. I am here,” Lord Vader said as he started to walk towards the table. It was at that moment, two things happened that threw the room into disarray. The metallic casing surrounding the head of Wat Tambor was torn off and flew across the room, and Shu Mai’s coiled necklace began to tighten until she could not breathe. Both Wat Tambor and Shu Mai grabbed at their throats but in seconds they fell to the floor unconscious.
Before they hit the floor, however, a sound was heard amid the din of confusion: the unmistakable sound of igniting lightsabers. Within seconds, Vader was on the table swinging and twirling a red lightsaber in one hand and a blue one in the other. When all was said and done, Passel Argente, Po Nudo, Rune Haako, and San Hill were dead. All were sliced in two from shoulder to torso except for San Hill who was cut from ear to ear, leaving half his head on the floor near the rest of his body.
At the head of the table, Nute Gunray shivered in his seat while Poggle the Lesser, sitting to his right shook his head with his mouth wide open. He knew something had to be wrong somewhere. Everything was too perfect with this plan. He knew the ancient stories of how the Sith were not to be trusted but didn’t listen to his intuition. Perhaps this Lord Vader left Gunray and himself for some purpose, though. Maybe he would listen to reason. There was no more time to think. Lord Vader spoke.
“You. Lesser,” he said calmly as he appeared to float from the surface of the table back to the floor. “Do you know who I am?”
“You are Lord Vader, sent by Darth Sidious to protect us…I thought,” replied Poggle in an unusually shaky Geonosian dialect. His mouth was not made for speaking Basic but Vader understood some of the language and could follow the conversation. He knew that Poggle understood him, and that was the important part. A one-way conversation suited him just fine because it was to be a short one.
“You sentenced me to death by execution. Don’t you remember?” Vader added as he lowered his hood. Poggle looked at him and immediately understood what was happening. He would not be able to talk his way out of this and didn’t try. He could try to fly his way out, though. Poggle took flight and tried to make his way toward the door but Vader was one step ahead. Poggle fell to the floor twice before he made it over the table.
Nute Gunray was still frozen in his chair. He was bubbling with anger and fear all at once. He knew that face as well and remembered him from the execution ceremony and subsequent battle on Geonosis. He had thought this fellow was a Jedi, but then again, so was Count Dooku once. Anyone can fall from grace, it seemed; even a Jedi, not to mention a Neimoidian Viceroy.
“What do you want from me! I will give you anything!” screamed Gunray, clearly rattled and afraid for his life.
“You have been trying for years to kill my wife, Neimoidian slime.”
“Your wife? I don’t know your wife! Leave me here! I won’t breathe a word of this, I promise!” Nute said as he burst into tears.
“Oh, you definitely won’t be breathing a word of this. In fact, you won’t be breathing ever again,” Vader replied and in one quick motion snatched Gunray by the neck and brought him face to face. All Nute could see was the yellow and red of Vader’s eyes. They seemed to drown out all other surrounding colors.
“Look at me, worm! Look at my face!” Vader commanded. Gunray complied. Nute felt something sticking into his torso and looked down. It was a lightsaber hilt with the sword end jabbing him in the ribs. It wasn’t ignited…yet.
“This is for Padmé Amidala,” Vader whispered loudly saying her name slowly. Gunray’s eyes grew wide as he finally realized whom Vader was talking about. Then, the familiar snap-hiss of a lightsaber igniting sounded and Gunray felt something hot in his chest. The lightsaber ran him through at close range and his life dripped away second by second. Darth Vader held Gunray’s face close to his the whole time, making sure to hold his dying gaze.
When the life was drained from the Neimoidian, Vader threw the body into the wall at the opposite end of the room with the Force. Darth Vader was not finished with Nute Gunray yet. He lifted the body from the ground, suspending it in mid-air, arms and legs spread out wide and in a criss-crossing motion, he quartered the body of Nute Gunray.
As the pieces fell to the ground, Darth Vader once again sensed a presence outside the conference room but now it was much stronger and he knew it well. It was the presence of his former master.
Poggle the Greater
12-29-2004, 05:25 PM
Wow. style_emoticons/<#EMO_DIR#>/huh.gif
Is that from a real source or fan-made?
I'm hoping it's real because the lightsaber slicing is brutal!
I'm hoping this is how it pans out to show how far gone Anakin is at that point...
jedijaybird
12-29-2004, 05:40 PM
Anyone got a pair of underwear I can borrow?
Darth Darthy
12-29-2004, 06:50 PM
Either you've been taking some creative writing classes or... wow.
T-bone
12-29-2004, 06:55 PM
Hey thanks - no, I just get inspired sometimes. Hope you all enjoy it!
Razorback
12-29-2004, 07:15 PM
That was kickass! style_emoticons/<#EMO_DIR#>/smile.gif
T-bone
12-29-2004, 07:16 PM
hey cool - thanks.
Poggle the Greater
12-29-2004, 07:57 PM
This might have been posted in the Webdoc thread way back but the one called Pick-ups & Reshoots has footage from that scene about 75% of the way through it.
The trick is you have to play it backwards to see it in correct motion.
You can see Anakin coming aound the table to who looks like Nute and then whirling around slicing everything to ribbons.
That is going to be an amazing scene!
T-bone
12-29-2004, 08:00 PM
post some screencaps, baby style_emoticons/<#EMO_DIR#>/smile.gif
Poggle the Greater
12-29-2004, 08:08 PM
Originally posted by T'bone@Dec 29 2004, 07:00 PM
post some screencaps, baby style_emoticons/<#EMO_DIR#>/smile.gif
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I would be happy to right now if I wasn't so computer illiterate!
I'll get my girlfriend to do it when she gets home tonight unless some other fine person here would give it a shot in the meantime...
It's literally about 75% into it and it's footage being played on a monitor backwards.
The way everyone picks apart the webdocs frame by frame I'd have figured someone would have picked up on this!
The footage has lines in it but you can clearly see him start spinning and slicing the room and you see the holograms on the Mustafar conference table.
From the looks of it the trailer shot of Anakin turning with the close up of the yellow eyes is at the end of this footage. After just mass killing a room full of people this makes perfect sense! style_emoticons/<#EMO_DIR#>/smile.gif
T-bone
12-29-2004, 08:12 PM
yea i remember it - i'll see if i can make a few.
T-bone
12-29-2004, 08:13 PM
just so you know, as with the Mace thing I wrote, I wasn't going for accuracy here, just my own vision of what I thought might be cool to see.
T-bone
12-29-2004, 08:16 PM
i just watched it again.
i can't tell what's up in that.
either nute pops up from under a table early on or he falls down at the end.
some looks reversed but some might not be - who knows.
i can't see who he's whackin.
Poggle the Greater
12-29-2004, 08:21 PM
You can't make out whose seated and getting killed but I seem to make out a battle droid run up behind Anakin and surely getting cut down without him even skipping a beat.
I'd guess that's Nute ducking under the table.
I guess that means Anakin wipes out all the lesser guys,we get the shot of him fully consumed with the Sith eyes and then he turns to slowly finish off the last guy,Nute.
Makes sense he would savor the slow walk to finish off Nute as a personal vendetta.
Nute ducking in vain is a moment of dark comedy in an otherwise grim scene I'd bet.
Pretty much exactly what you wrote so you must subconsciously know more about things than you thought. style_emoticons/<#EMO_DIR#>/smile.gif
T-bone
12-29-2004, 08:23 PM
It looks like he falls actually. Maybe he's dead and just standing there - then he falls? Maybe Anakin ran him through or something and he's just standing there shaking?
It looks more like a fall than a duck and Anakin doesn't seem to interested in him.
Poggle the Greater
12-29-2004, 08:28 PM
Watching it again you could be right.
Maybe he just blazes through the room spinning and cutting and then as he stops we see bodies falling and sliding apart ALA japanese anime like Ninja Scroll.
Know how they have a slice and then after a moment of silence you see the body cut in two and fall apart?
That would also give great weight to the shot of him turning around with the consumed eyes.
A lot of people are believing the trailer shot is of Anakin right before he goes into the room and kills but this pretty much confirms it's after the fact.
Razorback
12-29-2004, 09:19 PM
I think people are going to be mighty impressed by how nimble that Christensen dude is in this role. I look forward to watching all his moves in slo-motion on my DVD. style_emoticons/<#EMO_DIR#>/biggrin.gif
Good job!
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jom
Some neat ideas there T.
Keep it up! I love their emotions on the 1st site of a Sith Lord style_emoticons/<#EMO_DIR#>/smile.gif
Darth Palpy
12-30-2004, 06:26 AM
Its a little violent in places but well written...damn, STILL five months to go !
Darth Vegas
12-30-2004, 07:07 AM
Originally posted by M. Perror Palpy@Dec 30 2004, 03:26 AM
Its a little violent in places...
I don't think the movie much less violent, if any less violent at all. Especially this scene and what follows after it.
Good read T. style_emoticons/<#EMO_DIR#>/thumbsup.gif
pudooku
12-30-2004, 09:40 AM
Sweet T,
Illuminated the day at work... style_emoticons/<#EMO_DIR#>/smile.gif
The "This is for my wife..." concept is great, I never thought of Vader still wanting revenge on Nute Gunray for those things, you kinda just think of him as a puppet of Sidious by then.
Really good read.
Pudooku
T-bone
12-30-2004, 09:56 AM
Thanks all!
They are fun to write. It must be about 1/100th of what a regular author feels like playing around in the SW Universe. Man, it's fun.
Emperor Palpatine
12-30-2004, 12:36 PM
This piece ties nicely into the fact that Anakin has a difficult time letting things go and accepting change.
T-bone
12-30-2004, 12:38 PM
Yes I guess it does. He has a lot of anger in him from things in his life like almost being killed numerous times, having to hide his marriage, someone trying to kill his wife multiple times, his mother's death, he's mad at himself for things, etc.
Emperor Palpatine
12-30-2004, 12:44 PM
If only Anakin would have heeded Shmi's advice on Tatooine...
<div class='quotetop'>QUOTE</div><div class='quotemain'>"You can't stop the change, Annie, no more than you can stop the suns from setting.:[/b][/quote]
Well, it's pretty obvious he ignored this statement. Anakin said he wouldn't fail his mother again in death, and he wouldn't have if he would have listened to her.
T-bone
12-30-2004, 03:57 PM
He was too old...yes...too old to begin the training!
Hartter
12-30-2004, 08:48 PM
Nice T'Bone! You know Vader is gonna go Japanese steakhouse on them fools. One thing I can't wait to see (personally) is Nute Gunray go down sniveling. He's the most loathsome baddie in the entire saga!
maddog62
12-31-2004, 01:36 PM
Hay T-Bone, I am going to petition GL that he should give you the right to do E789 insted of Supershadow because at least your imagination had me going for a little bit. Great work buddy, I was highly entertained.
T-bone
12-31-2004, 01:48 PM
LOL!!!!
Um, thanks.
Otis_Frampton
12-31-2004, 02:02 PM
Wait just a got-danged minute . .
. . T'bone isn't Supershadow???
-Otis
maddog62
12-31-2004, 02:05 PM
There is a giant difference in
TALENT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!
Otis_Frampton
12-31-2004, 02:28 PM
I know. I was . .
<span style="font-size:12pt;line-height:100%">KIDDING!!!</span>
-Otis
T-bone
12-31-2004, 02:30 PM
* reveals himselef as Supershadow...
maddog62
01-01-2005, 12:27 PM
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO.................. ............
Poggle the Greater
01-01-2005, 07:06 PM
Super Shadow Bone style_emoticons/<#EMO_DIR#>/tongue.gif
T-bone
01-01-2005, 07:33 PM
<span style="font-size:36pt;line-height:100%"><span style="color:red">I am your Supershadow.</span></span>
Poggle the Greater
01-01-2005, 07:35 PM
nooo.....that's impossible!!!!
*searching my feeling to see if it's true*
BillyMidKnight
01-01-2005, 10:50 PM
It would be a cool idea if people wrote their idea of what should happen in ROTS and then when the movie comes out compare the two and see how much of your vision was the same as GL's own
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Emperor Palpatine
01-02-2005, 12:25 AM
<div class='quotetop'>QUOTE</div><div class='quotemain'>I am your Supershadow. [/b][/quote]
Excellent. This idea will be forwarded to Lucas.
Poggle the Greater
01-02-2005, 04:41 AM
Originally posted by Chancellor Palpatine@Jan 1 2005, 11:25 PM
<div class='quotetop'>QUOTE</div><div class='quotemain'>I am your Supershadow.
Excellent. This idea will be forwarded to Lucas.
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[/b][/quote]
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Dustman
01-02-2005, 06:40 AM
Lol style_emoticons/<#EMO_DIR#>/chortle.gif supershadow is "THE" source for all your informational needs. Wlhat will he do when its all over? Oh yeah direct episodes 7, 8, 9..... what a putz style_emoticons/<#EMO_DIR#>/rolleyes.gif
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T-bone
01-02-2005, 01:25 PM
ok ok - enough of supershadow hijacking my thread!
did you like the fictional piece?
Dustman
01-02-2005, 03:42 PM
Actually T-bone, I thought that what u wrote was really good. So good that I thought that u had your hand on a copy of the book. Very well written.
maddog62
01-02-2005, 09:30 PM
Originally posted by Chancellor Palpatine@Jan 2 2005, 04:25 AM
<div class='quotetop'>QUOTE</div><div class='quotemain'>I am your Supershadow.
Excellent. This idea will be forwarded to Lucas.
<div align="right">Quoted post</div>
[/b][/quote]
Sorry T, this is some funny crap here. ROTFLMAO Happy New Year 2005.
Obi-Stu
01-03-2005, 07:04 AM
Very well written, a good read.
Where's the next one?
Emperor Palpatine
01-03-2005, 11:46 PM
You should do a sequel to this, T'bone. Write about some low-life citizen who finds Mace Windu's body on the streets of Coruscant. They could deliver the body back to the Jedi Temple, only to be struck down by Anakin, who, by this time, is in the process of exterminating the Jedi Order.
T-bone
01-04-2005, 01:00 AM
I think you mean a sequel to the other piece I wrote.
Obi-Stu
01-04-2005, 01:11 AM
I think another piece will be fine, doesn't matter how or where it fits in...
T-bone
01-04-2005, 01:15 AM
I don't know if I have the time or energy but if I can, I will. These things just happen in creative spurts.
Obi-Stu
01-04-2005, 01:29 AM
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Emperor Palpatine
01-04-2005, 06:42 PM
<div class='quotetop'>QUOTE</div><div class='quotemain'>I think you mean a sequel to the other piece I wrote. [/b][/quote]
Sorry. I posted this in the wrong forum. style_emoticons/<#EMO_DIR#>/blush.gif
T-bone
01-09-2005, 11:22 PM
Tis ok - thanks for the good words.
darthgym
01-10-2005, 09:23 AM
I certainly enjoyed it. Of course I would probably enjoy a steaming pile of doggie doo on the city streets if someone pointed at it and said, "Look! Bantha spoor!"
Not that I'm comparing your work to Bantha spoor or anything. style_emoticons/<#EMO_DIR#>/ok.gif
bigsllim
01-10-2005, 10:22 AM
Excellent read. Humble newbie approves. It would be an excellent way for the real scene to go down.....
....we shall see...
T-bone
01-10-2005, 10:26 AM
and you shall see...
something different - that was just my little alternate vision.
Ali Arikan
01-11-2005, 07:33 AM
This is great stuff. Loved it.
T-bone
01-11-2005, 08:55 AM
Thankyouverymuch
Jacen Solo
01-11-2005, 02:23 PM
The whole time, I thought that you had perhaps gotten your hands on a copy of the book and posted that scene here. My jaw positively dropped when I learned you had written this! T-Bone, can I be your apprentice?
<span style="font-size:36pt;line-height:100%"><span style="color:red">DARTH LUUKE ... the evil clone of the one whose father was Darth Vader</span></span>
I agree with Dustman, Nute Gunray is one of the characters in Star Wars I hate the most. It will be nice to see him go, and the way you've written it is really cool. Especially when Anakin called him "worm" ...
T-bone
01-11-2005, 03:03 PM
Hey - thanks!! I admit it ws really fun to write all that stuff.
I'm glad you enjoyed it.
T-bone
01-17-2005, 03:31 PM
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do the bump
JediNicky8
01-17-2005, 04:15 PM
Ok...just to be different...That sucked! Just kidding, great work T, hope to see more in the near future! style_emoticons/<#EMO_DIR#>/biggrin.gif
T-bone
01-17-2005, 04:20 PM
Hehe - thanks!
If you didn't like it for real, that's cool though.
DarthDuff
01-22-2005, 02:46 PM
Originally posted by T'bone@Dec 29 2004, 04:12 PM
The Separatist leaders were now assembled in the darkened Mustafar conference room overlooking several massive red waterfalls pouring down into streams of molten currents. The general feeling in the air was that of nervousness and fear. Even Wat Tambor's perpetually expressionless face seemed to radiate anxiety. They didn’t like being there. They didn’t want to be there. But they liked being alive and unfortunately being alive meant being on Mustafar for the time being.
The eclectic group had already been relocated from system to system a number of times and the process was starting to grate heavily on them. The last world they fled to, Utapau, was the recipient of an unexpected Jedi visitor so they had to move yet again to a less popular place. There was not a more reclusive planet in the galaxy than this hellish conglomerate of molten rock and lava. Surely no one would think to look there for the fugitive leaders.
As soon as Lord Sidious contacted them to let them know it was safe to return to their home planets, they would have to remain in hiding. Many people wanted to ask them many questions about many things but it would soon be irrelevant. Lord Sidious would soon be in control of the galaxy, they’d have protection, and more importantly, more power and a stake in his new empire. A few more days on Mustafar would surely be worth the inconvenience.
The group sat at a long grey table looking either at each other or outside the large windows. The lava outside created a reddish tint in the room that seemed to move and radiate like phantoms circling in the dark. The tiny President of the Commerce Guild, Shu Mai, whose head just barely was visible over the table due to the large chairs, broke the silence.
“Have you had any further contact with…him?” she said, looking in the direction of Nute Gunray, who had now taken up the role as leader of the group in Count Dooku’s absence. They didn’t like to talk openly about Darth Sidious. They didn’t know much about him, but they knew that Count Dooku called him his Master and now he was dead. They also knew that at the moment Sidious controlled their fate so they had no choice but to trust him and Gunray.
“No! A thousand times no!” he snapped at her. “Stop asking! Don’t you think I’m as worried as you?” In truth, he was even more worried. He had been dealing with the Sith long before his peers in the room even knew they had awakened from their long hibernation. Never in their wildest dreams did they ever think they’d see the Sith of ancient legend return, nonetheless have private dealings with them. “How did it ever get this far?” Nute thought to himself.
Shu Mai stared sternly at Gunray, then looked to Rune Haako who sat next to him. Haako kept her gaze but she could see he too was afraid. She moved her gaze back out the window at the sea of red. “I don’t like this,” she thought to herself, “Not one bit.”
It was at that point that a red light appeared on the hologram detector sitting at the center of the table accompanied by a dull audio alert. Everyone in the room shot up in their seats and Poggle the Lesser fumbled his ornate cane to the burnished floor. Full attention was now focused on the center of the table as the Separatist Leaders saw bluish flickering lights begin to emanate from the holoprojector. A humanoid shape tried to form but there was some trouble with the reception. Wat Tambor reached out and turned a few dials trying to improve the transmission. In a few seconds, the Separatists found themselves looking at a clear holographic transmission of Sith Master, Darth Sidious.
For Nute Gunray, this was nothing new but for many of the others in the room it was a heart-stopping experience. They had all kinds of preconceptions of what an actual Sith Master would look like, and this was nothing like what they had imagined. Some had mentally pictured images of tall, powerful looking men in flamboyant attire. Others imagined that a Sith Lord would be muscular in shape and perhaps young in years. Darth Sidious wore a simple dark, hooded robe and appeared to be wrinkled and pasty in complexion. His appearance itself did not impress them. However, when he spoke, apprehension filled the room and even Rune Haako, who had seen Sidious before, had to look down at the floor after a few seconds.
“Greetings, faithful friends,” he began. “Your time and patience has served you all well and your period of waiting is almost at an end.” He was a man of few words, little time, and had no use for small talk. He quickly went straight to the crux of the matter and the answers to everyone’s questions.
“Everything that is occurring throughout the galaxy is proceeding as I have planned,” he continued. “The new government will soon be in place and you will all have a role to play as a reward for your contributions. Before long you will be returning home to your new positions which I shall assign you.”
The Separatists felt a bit more comfortable both with this Sith Lord and also with their current situation. Perhaps the Sith were not so bad after all. If Nute Gunray and that metallic Separatist General were to be believed, Darth Sidious would soon be in control of the entire galaxy, so it was in their best interests to ally themselves with him for better or for worse. It was an exceedingly astute political strategy. There was a slight pause and then Sidious continued.
“I am sending my apprentice, Darth Vader, to assure your safety as well as give you transit from Mustafar when I deem it safe,” Sidious proclaimed. The Separatists were previously instructed by Gunray not to ask direct questions and to only speak to the Sith Lord if and when he specifically indicated. They sat quiet and San Hill turned to Po Nudo who was sitting next to him and gave a comforting smile. Everyone in the room felt the same reassurance. Everything was going to be fine, and soon.
Nute looked a little closer at the Sith Lord. Something was different about him. He looked older somehow. His face seemed more wrinkled and his hands seemed worn. Perhaps it was just the transmission. Haako didn’t seem to notice anything different so Nute let it go. There was no need to add more anxiety to the already uneasy group.
Outside the conference room, a lone Neimoidian guard stood. He was clearly not expecting to meet anyone or anything on this desolate world and felt his presence was just a formality. Nute Gunray was a nervous being by nature and always liked to have guards stationed wherever he went. Gunray lost a little faith in Battle Droids after the battle of Naboo and the failed occupation of that planet long ago. The situation that erupted on Geonosis only widened his distrust. Having one of his own around made him feel more comfortable and the job paid well.
The guard took a look down the long, dark hallway and instead of the usual view he had seen many times, he thought he saw something move. It wasn’t anything he could immediately identify. It was more like a shadow. He squinted a bit and took another look but saw nothing moving so he paid it no mind, happy for the diversion from the monotony of standing outside the room for far longer than he would have liked.
He took yet another glance outside the large window closest to him to watch the hypnotic lava pour down. The moment he looked back to the hallway was the same moment he was knocked off his feet by a fast-moving blur of black, white and blue. The last things he remembered seeing were his own legs on the floor next to him. Then, after another flash of blue and white, everything went dark before he could make a sound.
“Lord Vader should be on the surface as we speak,” Darth Sidious continued. “I take it you will see to his needs. He is the only other you can trust, now. You will be safe under his protection.” With that, the hologram flickered out and almost immediately the table came to life in stark contrast to the atmosphere before the brief but encouraging communiqué.
Inside the conference room, everyone but Poggle the Lesser seemed to still be elated about the news from Darth Sidious. Poggle was always inquisitive by nature and he put his full trust in Dooku who was now dead. Who would this new apprentice be and what kind of relationship would they have? He had heard nothing of the super-weapon plans he gave to Count Dooku on Geonosis for safekeeping. He did not like not knowing the whereabouts of those plans. If they were to fall into the wrong hands, not only could that weapon be abused but also he would not be credited with creating it. The Geonosians had a certain amount of respect for weapons since it was their main industry and Poggle felt especially close to that project.
“This is good news indeed,” said Passel Argente, the first to speak after the transmission ended. “At last we are getting something back for our service and dedication.”
“Yes,” added San Hill. “I feel much more secure now that I know this Sith is definitely behind us. We’ve deposited our credits in the right bank for sure.”
Similar small talk continued around the table amid congratulations and words of support for each other and their organizations. So much so that no one realized that a dark-robed, hooded humanoid figure was slowly entering the conference room from the bottom of the stairs leading up to where the table sat. The hooded figure walked up the steps slowly and ominously until he reached the top of the staircase where he halted. It was Nute Gunray who first noticed the eerie figure.
“Ah, you’re, uh, here. Good, good,” he said out loud. The entire table looked over and took him in. All they really could see was a dark humanoid shape. The man’s dark robe was simple, his hood up and where a face should be was just darkness. Perhaps it was some trick of the light. It was quite dark on this world and the room was not well lit.
Anakin Skywalker, now the Sith Lord, Darth Vader, surveyed the room and its occupants. He remembered their faces. Some he recalled from when he and Padmé were on “trial” after being captured on Geonosis. Others he knew all too well. This would be a day he would remember for a long time to come.
Just then, Vader heard something behind him, far down the corridor. Actually, he more than heard something; he felt something as well. It was a presence of sorts but it was dull, like an echo. He turned around and looked back down the stairway and into the corridor and the light hit his face just enough to reveal his features, although the Separatists could only see the back of his hood. The blue eyes that his wife used to gaze in every night were now gone, replaced by yellow orbs surrounded by a ring of red and filled with a black pupil that seemed devoid of all life. After a moment, he remembered why he was there and decided to ignore the presence for now. He used the Force to close and lock the door to the room without moving, then he slowly turned his darkened gaze back to the table full of Separatist Leaders.
“Yes. I am here,” Lord Vader said as he started to walk towards the table. It was at that moment, two things happened that threw the room into disarray. The metallic casing surrounding the head of Wat Tambor was torn off and flew across the room, and Shu Mai’s coiled necklace began to tighten until she could not breathe. Both Wat Tambor and Shu Mai grabbed at their throats but in seconds they fell to the floor unconscious.
Before they hit the floor, however, a sound was heard amid the din of confusion: the unmistakable sound of igniting lightsabers. Within seconds, Vader was on the table swinging and twirling a red lightsaber in one hand and a blue one in the other. When all was said and done, Passel Argente, Po Nudo, Rune Haako, and San Hill were dead. All were sliced in two from shoulder to torso except for San Hill who was cut from ear to ear, leaving half his head on the floor near the rest of his body.
At the head of the table, Nute Gunray shivered in his seat while Poggle the Lesser, sitting to his right shook his head with his mouth wide open. He knew something had to be wrong somewhere. Everything was too perfect with this plan. He knew the ancient stories of how the Sith were not to be trusted but didn’t listen to his intuition. Perhaps this Lord Vader left Gunray and himself for some purpose, though. Maybe he would listen to reason. There was no more time to think. Lord Vader spoke.
“You. Lesser,” he said calmly as he appeared to float from the surface of the table back to the floor. “Do you know who I am?”
“You are Lord Vader, sent by Darth Sidious to protect us…I thought,” replied Poggle in an unusually shaky Geonosian dialect. His mouth was not made for speaking Basic but Vader understood some of the language and could follow the conversation. He knew that Poggle understood him, and that was the important part. A one-way conversation suited him just fine because it was to be a short one.
“You sentenced me to death by execution. Don’t you remember?” Vader added as he lowered his hood. Poggle looked at him and immediately understood what was happening. He would not be able to talk his way out of this and didn’t try. He could try to fly his way out, though. Poggle took flight and tried to make his way toward the door but Vader was one step ahead. Poggle fell to the floor twice before he made it over the table.
Nute Gunray was still frozen in his chair. He was bubbling with anger and fear all at once. He knew that face as well and remembered him from the execution ceremony and subsequent battle on Geonosis. He had thought this fellow was a Jedi, but then again, so was Count Dooku once. Anyone can fall from grace, it seemed; even a Jedi, not to mention a Neimoidian Viceroy.
“What do you want from me! I will give you anything!” screamed Gunray, clearly rattled and afraid for his life.
“You have been trying for years to kill my wife, Neimoidian slime.”
“Your wife? I don’t know your wife! Leave me here! I won’t breathe a word of this, I promise!” Nute said as he burst into tears.
“Oh, you definitely won’t be breathing a word of this. In fact, you won’t be breathing ever again,” Vader replied and in one quick motion snatched Gunray by the neck and brought him face to face. All Nute could see was the yellow and red of Vader’s eyes. They seemed to drown out all other surrounding colors.
“Look at me, worm! Look at my face!” Vader commanded. Gunray complied. Nute felt something sticking into his torso and looked down. It was a lightsaber hilt with the sword end jabbing him in the ribs. It wasn’t ignited…yet.
“This is for Padmé Amidala,” Vader whispered loudly saying her name slowly. Gunray’s eyes grew wide as he finally realized whom Vader was talking about. Then, the familiar snap-hiss of a lightsaber igniting sounded and Gunray felt something hot in his chest. The lightsaber ran him through at close range and his life dripped away second by second. Darth Vader held Gunray’s face close to his the whole time, making sure to hold his dying gaze.
When the life was drained from the Neimoidian, Vader threw the body into the wall at the opposite end of the room with the Force. Darth Vader was not finished with Nute Gunray yet. He lifted the body from the ground, suspending it in mid-air, arms and legs spread out wide and in a criss-crossing motion, he quartered the body of Nute Gunray.
As the pieces fell to the ground, Darth Vader once again sensed a presence outside the conference room but now it was much stronger and he knew it well. It was the presence of his former master.
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T-bone
01-22-2005, 02:47 PM
Is that a good Holy Hell or a bad Holy Hell?
DarthDuff
01-22-2005, 02:50 PM
Originally posted by T'bone@Jan 22 2005, 01:47 PM
Is that a good Holy Hell or a bad Holy Hell?
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a most impressive good Sir!! style_emoticons/<#EMO_DIR#>/biggrin.gif
T-bone
01-22-2005, 02:55 PM
Ah ok thanks!
Ko-Enshaku
02-21-2005, 07:55 AM
My God, man. That was a riveting scene. I want this to be the one I see in a couple months because the scene I just saw was amazing.
The part where Vader quarters Nute is something I had been thinking about for a while, but I imagined it slightly differently... basically elevating him in a powerful force choke and starting from Nute's knees, start cutting off horizontal slices, chopping his way up until Nute goes into shock and then lopping his head off before letting the torso fall to the ground with a thud.
I hope George has the guts to show a little violence in this one. If any of the shows demands it, its this one.
Anyway, nice story, T. I hope you get inspired again before the movie comes out. style_emoticons/<#EMO_DIR#>/grins.gif
Daibutsusan73
02-24-2005, 04:37 AM
Here is a thought I recently had about Vader. This is completely speculation. I wonder if Anakin actually dies in the fight with Obi Wan. Even after all that Anakin did I just can't see Obi Wan leaving him to die. And with all the talk about some Sith technique to manipulate midichlorians to resurect the dead I can't help feeling that Palpatine resurects whats left of Anakin. This would also be the next logical step in this sort of religous mythical figure. First a prophecy, then a virgin birth, and lastly a resurection. It would also make Vader a creepier villan. Again it's just my speculation. Just something to chew on until the movie comes out.
Darth Vadar
02-26-2005, 09:11 PM
Amazing, thats probally the way i imagined it but , with him being lfited into the air still alive and his leg being chopped then his arms etc .
RebelRoss0587
02-26-2005, 09:35 PM
Oh wow, where did that come from? Is there any truth to any of it or did T'Bone just dream this up? It is absolutely amazing whatever and wherever it came from.
Kapit
02-26-2005, 09:51 PM
very, very, very cool, i would love to see the scene go down like that!
RebelRoss0587
02-26-2005, 10:10 PM
I hope the scene is somewhere around that or ay least the novel tells it something like that. A scene like that might make the movie borderline R, but whatever. It will be PG-13 even with a scene like that even if it should be R.
T-bone
02-26-2005, 10:40 PM
I totally just made it up. I'm glad you liked it.
Mandalorian Exile
02-26-2005, 11:22 PM
Well I TOTALLY dig the scenes-in-writing that u have come up with. I do wonder what all is going to be contributed to the PG-13 rating. although, i have a pretty good idea it has to partly with the very-badly-burnt anakin after his encounter with the lava pit.
Jacen Solo
03-01-2005, 04:47 AM
Seriously, T-Bone, you did such a good job portraying the attitudes and personalities of the Separatists -- greedy, corrupt, selfish. One of the things I hate most about Nute Gunray is his cowardice. You captured this perfectly in one of your first lines, the one about the fact that the Separatists liked to be alive, no matter what the inconvenience. Poggle's flight, when he realized that he couldn't talk his way out of this and would have to attempt to run, was perfect. As much as we hate to see Anakin turning to the Dark Side (however inevitable this was), these Separatists are definitely getting what's coming to them. You've done a great job here!
"Look at me, worm!" ... that was great!! style_emoticons/<#EMO_DIR#>/bye.gif
T-bone
03-01-2005, 08:59 AM
Hey man - thanks. I appreciate that.
Gaelic-Jedi
03-01-2005, 06:16 PM
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T-bone
05-02-2005, 11:04 PM
just re-reading this again - man i was in a grim mood that day.
Ko-Enshaku
05-03-2005, 04:47 AM
It appears that you are really very close. I can't wait to see this scene on screen, but the scene you wrote is so good.
T, what have you to say about the scene you wrote after the release of the novelization and what you have witnessed in the Spectacular?
T-bone
05-03-2005, 09:46 AM
Well, it wasn't a "guess" so it wasn't supposed to be close. It was how I'd write it, were I crafting the story myself so it was just a fun piece.
I still like the way it is in the film, which is simpler I guess but I have to admit - it's the one part of Stover's novel I didn't like as much. I didn't like all that "arnold" dialogue but from what I can tell, it's not in the film so that's cool with me.
Fun stuff.
General Nikola
05-03-2005, 05:50 PM
..................wow.I'm impressed,very impressed.
T-bone
02-17-2006, 05:52 PM
Hey - just re-read this after all this time. I musta been in a foul mood that day - pretty violent! style_emoticons/<#EMO_DIR#>/whip.gif
James
02-17-2006, 08:10 PM
It's great Mr. T style_emoticons/<#EMO_DIR#>/smile.gif
RollaFett
02-18-2006, 05:07 AM
I have to agree with everyone else here. Very well done, T. Not to mention, damn-near accurate!
T-bone
02-18-2006, 10:56 AM
Yea I guess it wasn't bad for 6 months before the film, though I was privy to certain things and I did embellish it. I guess it was like a wish-write. Fun to read all this time later though.
<div class='quotetop'>QUOTE</div><div class='quotemain'>“This is for Padmé Amidala,”[/b][/quote]
Violent, yet good. Especially that part. Puts the 'revenge' in "Revenge of the Sith". Thanks for bumping it up.
Darth Pravus
03-03-2006, 06:53 PM
Oh boy! who needs Lucas! :giveup:
jayce78
03-03-2006, 10:54 PM
Well UUUgggghh . . . .
Without Him there would be no film :cheers:
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Darth Pravus
03-04-2006, 08:37 AM
But what made TESB so damn good? And it sure wasn't Lucas :D
jayce78
03-04-2006, 04:10 PM
Nah! who needs him :lol: He just wrote the story and cowrote the screenplay along with doing the editing & special effects :nahnah:
clarkson88
03-05-2006, 12:37 PM
Originally posted by Darth Pravus@Mar 4 2006, 12:37 PM
But what made TESB so damn good? And it sure wasn't Lucas :D
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It was one of the first films that the 'baddies' won.
lovelucas
02-15-2007, 12:10 PM
bump because this so deserves it. Tbone - I had no idea....great work.
Starwarsjoshsmith
02-17-2007, 10:08 PM
The Separatist leaders were now assembled in the darkened Mustafar conference room overlooking several massive red waterfalls pouring down into streams of molten currents. The general feeling in the air was that of nervousness and fear. Even Wat Tambor's perpetually expressionless face seemed to radiate anxiety. They didn’t like being there. They didn’t want to be there. But they liked being alive and unfortunately being alive meant being on Mustafar for the time being.
The eclectic group had already been relocated from system to system a number of times and the process was starting to grate heavily on them. The last world they fled to, Utapau, was the recipient of an unexpected Jedi visitor so they had to move yet again to a less popular place. There was not a more reclusive planet in the galaxy than this hellish conglomerate of molten rock and lava. Surely no one would think to look there for the fugitive leaders.
As soon as Lord Sidious contacted them to let them know it was safe to return to their home planets, they would have to remain in hiding. Many people wanted to ask them many questions about many things but it would soon be irrelevant. Lord Sidious would soon be in control of the galaxy, they’d have protection, and more importantly, more power and a stake in his new empire. A few more days on Mustafar would surely be worth the inconvenience.
The group sat at a long grey table looking either at each other or outside the large windows. The lava outside created a reddish tint in the room that seemed to move and radiate like phantoms circling in the dark. The tiny President of the Commerce Guild, Shu Mai, whose head just barely was visible over the table due to the large chairs, broke the silence.
“Have you had any further contact with…him?” she said, looking in the direction of Nute Gunray, who had now taken up the role as leader of the group in Count Dooku’s absence. They didn’t like to talk openly about Darth Sidious. They didn’t know much about him, but they knew that Count Dooku called him his Master and now he was dead. They also knew that at the moment Sidious controlled their fate so they had no choice but to trust him and Gunray.
“No! A thousand times no!” he snapped at her. “Stop asking! Don’t you think I’m as worried as you?” In truth, he was even more worried. He had been dealing with the Sith long before his peers in the room even knew they had awakened from their long hibernation. Never in their wildest dreams did they ever think they’d see the Sith of ancient legend return, nonetheless have private dealings with them. “How did it ever get this far?” Nute thought to himself.
Shu Mai stared sternly at Gunray, then looked to Rune Haako who sat next to him. Haako kept her gaze but she could see he too was afraid. She moved her gaze back out the window at the sea of red. “I don’t like this,” she thought to herself, “Not one bit.”
It was at that point that a red light appeared on the hologram detector sitting at the center of the table accompanied by a dull audio alert. Everyone in the room shot up in their seats and Poggle the Lesser fumbled his ornate cane to the burnished floor. Full attention was now focused on the center of the table as the Separatist Leaders saw bluish flickering lights begin to emanate from the holoprojector. A humanoid shape tried to form but there was some trouble with the reception. Wat Tambor reached out and turned a few dials trying to improve the transmission. In a few seconds, the Separatists found themselves looking at a clear holographic transmission of Sith Master, Darth Sidious.
For Nute Gunray, this was nothing new but for many of the others in the room it was a heart-stopping experience. They had all kinds of preconceptions of what an actual Sith Master would look like, and this was nothing like what they had imagined. Some had mentally pictured images of tall, powerful looking men in flamboyant attire. Others imagined that a Sith Lord would be muscular in shape and perhaps young in years. Darth Sidious wore a simple dark, hooded robe and appeared to be wrinkled and pasty in complexion. His appearance itself did not impress them. However, when he spoke, apprehension filled the room and even Rune Haako, who had seen Sidious before, had to look down at the floor after a few seconds.
“Greetings, faithful friends,” he began. “Your time and patience has served you all well and your period of waiting is almost at an end.” He was a man of few words, little time, and had no use for small talk. He quickly went straight to the crux of the matter and the answers to everyone’s questions.
“Everything that is occurring throughout the galaxy is proceeding as I have planned,” he continued. “The new government will soon be in place and you will all have a role to play as a reward for your contributions. Before long you will be returning home to your new positions which I shall assign you.”
The Separatists felt a bit more comfortable both with this Sith Lord and also with their current situation. Perhaps the Sith were not so bad after all. If Nute Gunray and that metallic Separatist General were to be believed, Darth Sidious would soon be in control of the entire galaxy, so it was in their best interests to ally themselves with him for better or for worse. It was an exceedingly astute political strategy. There was a slight pause and then Sidious continued.
“I am sending my apprentice, Darth Vader, to assure your safety as well as give you transit from Mustafar when I deem it safe,” Sidious proclaimed. The Separatists were previously instructed by Gunray not to ask direct questions and to only speak to the Sith Lord if and when he specifically indicated. They sat quiet and San Hill turned to Po Nudo who was sitting next to him and gave a comforting smile. Everyone in the room felt the same reassurance. Everything was going to be fine, and soon.
Nute looked a little closer at the Sith Lord. Something was different about him. He looked older somehow. His face seemed more wrinkled and his hands seemed worn. Perhaps it was just the transmission. Haako didn’t seem to notice anything different so Nute let it go. There was no need to add more anxiety to the already uneasy group.
Outside the conference room, a lone Neimoidian guard stood. He was clearly not expecting to meet anyone or anything on this desolate world and felt his presence was just a formality. Nute Gunray was a nervous being by nature and always liked to have guards stationed wherever he went. Gunray lost a little faith in Battle Droids after the battle of Naboo and the failed occupation of that planet long ago. The situation that erupted on Geonosis only widened his distrust. Having one of his own around made him feel more comfortable and the job paid well.
The guard took a look down the long, dark hallway and instead of the usual view he had seen many times, he thought he saw something move. It wasn’t anything he could immediately identify. It was more like a shadow. He squinted a bit and took another look but saw nothing moving so he paid it no mind, happy for the diversion from the monotony of standing outside the room for far longer than he would have liked.
He took yet another glance outside the large window closest to him to watch the hypnotic lava pour down. The moment he looked back to the hallway was the same moment he was knocked off his feet by a fast-moving blur of black, white and blue. The last things he remembered seeing were his own legs on the floor next to him. Then, after another flash of blue and white, everything went dark before he could make a sound.
“Lord Vader should be on the surface as we speak,” Darth Sidious continued. “I take it you will see to his needs. He is the only other you can trust, now. You will be safe under his protection.” With that, the hologram flickered out and almost immediately the table came to life in stark contrast to the atmosphere before the brief but encouraging communiqué.
Inside the conference room, everyone but Poggle the Lesser seemed to still be elated about the news from Darth Sidious. Poggle was always inquisitive by nature and he put his full trust in Dooku who was now dead. Who would this new apprentice be and what kind of relationship would they have? He had heard nothing of the super-weapon plans he gave to Count Dooku on Geonosis for safekeeping. He did not like not knowing the whereabouts of those plans. If they were to fall into the wrong hands, not only could that weapon be abused but also he would not be credited with creating it. The Geonosians had a certain amount of respect for weapons since it was their main industry and Poggle felt especially close to that project.
“This is good news indeed,” said Passel Argente, the first to speak after the transmission ended. “At last we are getting something back for our service and dedication.”
“Yes,” added San Hill. “I feel much more secure now that I know this Sith is definitely behind us. We’ve deposited our credits in the right bank for sure.”
Similar small talk continued around the table amid congratulations and words of support for each other and their organizations. So much so that no one realized that a dark-robed, hooded humanoid figure was slowly entering the conference room from the bottom of the stairs leading up to where the table sat. The hooded figure walked up the steps slowly and ominously until he reached the top of the staircase where he halted. It was Nute Gunray who first noticed the eerie figure.
“Ah, you’re, uh, here. Good, good,” he said out loud. The entire table looked over and took him in. All they really could see was a dark humanoid shape. The man’s dark robe was simple, his hood up and where a face should be was just darkness. Perhaps it was some trick of the light. It was quite dark on this world and the room was not well lit.
Anakin Skywalker, now the Sith Lord, Darth Vader, surveyed the room and its occupants. He remembered their faces. Some he recalled from when he and Padmé were on “trial” after being captured on Geonosis. Others he knew all too well. This would be a day he would remember for a long time to come.
Just then, Vader heard something behind him, far down the corridor. Actually, he more than heard something; he felt something as well. It was a presence of sorts but it was dull, like an echo. He turned around and looked back down the stairway and into the corridor and the light hit his face just enough to reveal his features, although the Separatists could only see the back of his hood. The blue eyes that his wife used to gaze in every night were now gone, replaced by yellow orbs surrounded by a ring of red and filled with a black pupil that seemed devoid of all life. After a moment, he remembered why he was there and decided to ignore the presence for now. He used the Force to close and lock the door to the room without moving, then he slowly turned his darkened gaze back to the table full of Separatist Leaders.
“Yes. I am here,” Lord Vader said as he started to walk towards the table. It was at that moment, two things happened that threw the room into disarray. The metallic casing surrounding the head of Wat Tambor was torn off and flew across the room, and Shu Mai’s coiled necklace began to tighten until she could not breathe. Both Wat Tambor and Shu Mai grabbed at their throats but in seconds they fell to the floor unconscious.
Before they hit the floor, however, a sound was heard amid the din of confusion: the unmistakable sound of igniting lightsabers. Within seconds, Vader was on the table swinging and twirling a red lightsaber in one hand and a blue one in the other. When all was said and done, Passel Argente, Po Nudo, Rune Haako, and San Hill were dead. All were sliced in two from shoulder to torso except for San Hill who was cut from ear to ear, leaving half his head on the floor near the rest of his body.
At the head of the table, Nute Gunray shivered in his seat while Poggle the Lesser, sitting to his right shook his head with his mouth wide open. He knew something had to be wrong somewhere. Everything was too perfect with this plan. He knew the ancient stories of how the Sith were not to be trusted but didn’t listen to his intuition. Perhaps this Lord Vader left Gunray and himself for some purpose, though. Maybe he would listen to reason. There was no more time to think. Lord Vader spoke.
“You. Lesser,” he said calmly as he appeared to float from the surface of the table back to the floor. “Do you know who I am?”
“You are Lord Vader, sent by Darth Sidious to protect us…I thought,” replied Poggle in an unusually shaky Geonosian dialect. His mouth was not made for speaking Basic but Vader understood some of the language and could follow the conversation. He knew that Poggle understood him, and that was the important part. A one-way conversation suited him just fine because it was to be a short one.
“You sentenced me to death by execution. Don’t you remember?” Vader added as he lowered his hood. Poggle looked at him and immediately understood what was happening. He would not be able to talk his way out of this and didn’t try. He could try to fly his way out, though. Poggle took flight and tried to make his way toward the door but Vader was one step ahead. Poggle fell to the floor twice before he made it over the table.
Nute Gunray was still frozen in his chair. He was bubbling with anger and fear all at once. He knew that face as well and remembered him from the execution ceremony and subsequent battle on Geonosis. He had thought this fellow was a Jedi, but then again, so was Count Dooku once. Anyone can fall from grace, it seemed; even a Jedi, not to mention a Neimoidian Viceroy.
“What do you want from me! I will give you anything!” screamed Gunray, clearly rattled and afraid for his life.
“You have been trying for years to kill my wife, Neimoidian slime.”
“Your wife? I don’t know your wife! Leave me here! I won’t breathe a word of this, I promise!” Nute said as he burst into tears.
“Oh, you definitely won’t be breathing a word of this. In fact, you won’t be breathing ever again,” Vader replied and in one quick motion snatched Gunray by the neck and brought him face to face. All Nute could see was the yellow and red of Vader’s eyes. They seemed to drown out all other surrounding colors.
“Look at me, worm! Look at my face!” Vader commanded. Gunray complied. Nute felt something sticking into his torso and looked down. It was a lightsaber hilt with the sword end jabbing him in the ribs. It wasn’t ignited…yet.
“This is for Padmé Amidala,” Vader whispered loudly saying her name slowly. Gunray’s eyes grew wide as he finally realized whom Vader was talking about. Then, the familiar snap-hiss of a lightsaber igniting sounded and Gunray felt something hot in his chest. The lightsaber ran him through at close range and his life dripped away second by second. Darth Vader held Gunray’s face close to his the whole time, making sure to hold his dying gaze.
When the life was drained from the Neimoidian, Vader threw the body into the wall at the opposite end of the room with the Force. Darth Vader was not finished with Nute Gunray yet. He lifted the body from the ground, suspending it in mid-air, arms and legs spread out wide and in a criss-crossing motion, he quartered the body of Nute Gunray.
As the pieces fell to the ground, Darth Vader once again sensed a presence outside the conference room but now it was much stronger and he knew it well. It was the presence of his former master.
This is so :censored: awsome, the story is well detailed, and the suspense is great. If I were you i would Title it and get it published.:w00t:
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