Knights of the old republic

[darth scourge]

Im doing a campaign based on Knights of the old republic when the Sith were at the height of power.To join this Rpg just choose a character class from the list.
Jedi (padawan or Knight)
soldier(This includes troopers,pilots etc)
Mercs(This includes hired help by the republic like bounty hunters,soldiers of fortune and assassins etc)

If the player thinks of another class that will fit in let me know.Any species is allowed as long as it has two arms and two legs.When theres enough players they will be put on a republic star cruiser as part of a task force sent out to do over the Sith dudes.

Player list

Darth Scourge - Admiral Rayr (Task force commander)
Cassus Fett - Carth Jaski (Jedi Knight and Task force Jedi leader)
Jade Skywalker - Captain Keria Donavan (Task Force 2nd in command)
Edgeomatic - Ayn Fisto (Jedi Knight)
Jay-Ton-Wan-Jay-Ton-Wan (Jedi Knight)

[Cassus Fett]

Name: Carth Jaski
Species: Human
Character Class: Jedi Master
Weapons: One Blue Lightsaber

[darth scourge]

OOC:Cool you can be Jedi leader

[Cassus Fett]

OOC: Thanks, when do we start?

[jadeskywalker]

Name: Keria Donavan
Species: Human
Charater Class: Soilder
Weapon: (2) Blas Teck DL-44 Heavy Blaster pistol , Virblade

[darth scourge]

OOC:When we get a few more players even though we only need a few but as its a task force anyone can join at anytime.Ill give it a couple of days before I post the mission.If youve got any ideas for a mission feel free to share.

[jadeskywalker]

OOC: Which shouldn't take to long to have people join in... style_emoticons/<#EMO_DIR#>/laugh.gif this looks like this should be fun.

[Cassus Fett]

OOC: how about you two join Black Knights aswell

[jadeskywalker]

OOC: I was looking at it, Thinking of a charater... style_emoticons/<#EMO_DIR#>/happy.gif

[darth scourge]

OOC:Oh yes it will be fun,at least ill try and make it anyway.

[jadeskywalker]

OOC: I am sure it will be...I have this game for my computer and I haven't been able to play it... style_emoticons/<#EMO_DIR#>/crying.gif Well, I need a new computer, That would help, too!! style_emoticons/<#EMO_DIR#>/laugh.gif Everyone will be able to keep it intresting, that's for sure. style_emoticons/<#EMO_DIR#>/xmas.gif

[darth scourge]

OOC:Jade S I made you my 2nd in command if thats ok wiv ya.

[darth scourge]

Originally posted by jadeskywalker@Dec 18 2004, 08:59 PM
OOC: I am sure it will be...I have this game for my computer and I haven't been able to play it... style_emoticons/<#EMO_DIR#>/crying.gif Well, I need a new computer, That would help, too!! style_emoticons/<#EMO_DIR#>/laugh.gif Everyone will be able to keep it intresting, that's for sure. style_emoticons/<#EMO_DIR#>/xmas.gif
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Get an Xbox the game rules on that.Cant wait for No.2

[jadeskywalker]

Originally posted by darth scourge+Dec 18 2004, 04:01 PM--><div class='quotetop'>QUOTE(darth scourge @ Dec 18 2004, 04:01 PM)</div><div class='quotemain'><!--QuoteBegin-jadeskywalker@Dec 18 2004, 08:59 PM
OOC: I am sure it will be...I have this game for my computer and I haven't been able to play it... style_emoticons/<#EMO_DIR#>/crying.gif Well, I need a new computer, That would help, too!! style_emoticons/<#EMO_DIR#>/laugh.gif Everyone will be able to keep it intresting, that's for sure. style_emoticons/<#EMO_DIR#>/xmas.gif
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Get an Xbox the game rules on that.Cant wait for No.2
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That is what I was hoping I would be getting for Christmas style_emoticons/<#EMO_DIR#>/grins.gif

That is alright with me. style_emoticons/<#EMO_DIR#>/laugh.gif being 2nd in Command.

[Cassus Fett]

Would my Jedi Knight party be under my command alone then?

[darth scourge]

OOC:If this goes well I might start a discussion thread.We'll see what happens.

[jadeskywalker]

OOC: Discussion threads are good...it saves alot of OOC: style_emoticons/<#EMO_DIR#>/happy.gif

[darth scourge]

OOC:Yep youll be in charge of all Jedi.Im surprised you aint playing a bounty hunter.

[jadeskywalker]

OOC: style_emoticons/<#EMO_DIR#>/laugh.gif Bounty Hunters sounds fun...no sides...

[Cassus Fett]

OOC: No not on this one, wanted a change, this will be my Second Jedi Knight character ive got

[darth scourge]

The Republic Battleship Salvation cruises through the outer rim on its way to Coruscant to report to the Jedi council and High command about the latest on Sith activities in the region.Inside the ship the intercom goes off
' Captain Donavan and Carth Jaski can you report to the Admirals office'

[jadeskywalker]

Keria heard the intercom and left her quarters to mee the Admiral at his office. She approched the door and knocked on it.

[darth scourge]

Admiral Rayr - 'Enter'

[jadeskywalker]

Keria opened the door and the saluted as she came in. " Captain Keria Donavan reporting in after hearing the intercom, sir." she said.

[darth scourge]

Admiral Rayr was looking at the holomap as Keria entered
'Hey Keria make yourself at home were just waiting for Jedi Knight Jaski to arrive.Ill tell you the Republic isnt looking good at the moment'

[jadeskywalker]

Keria walked over towards the Admiral. " How bad this time, sir?" she asks.

[darth scourge]

'Darth Thrax and his minions are controlling most of the outer rim systems.It wont be long before they take the core worlds.'

The Admiral takes the Captain to the holomap and shows the areas the Sith occupy
but all of a sudden a transmition from Coruscant comes in.Senator Thar appears

'Admiral weve just received information that the Sith are attacking the city of Gar on Aquaris we need you to head there and help them.'

The Senator dissapears

'Ok, Captain plot a course to Aquaris and get the units ready for attack'

[jadeskywalker]

" Yes, sir." She pulled out her comlink and commed the control room. " The Admiral has orders to go to Aquaris, make a plot for the planet Aquaris and have a intercom message for all units to get perpared for departure." she commed in to the control room.

[darth scourge]

'Well done Captain get yourself ready. Ill be joining you in the assault by the way and im expecting you to cover my back as well as I covering yours.Your a good soldier Captain dont let me down'

[jadeskywalker]

Keria turned to the Admiral. " Well, I was hoping you would have my back since I was going to have yours I was hoping not to let anyone down." she said smiling. " See, you when were are ready, sir." she said as she left to get ready for the mission.

[darth scourge]

Admiral Rayr leaves his office and goes to his quarters.He puts on his battle armor which was modified from unknown to many his Mandalorian warrior days.He equips his N'Gant Zarvel Heavy carbine and heads out into his quarters.The Admiral gets on the comlink
'All personal report to me in the mess hall for a beverage before we kick those Sith where the sun dont shine'

The Admiral enters the mess hall and says to the barman
'Get those drinks ready and remember not to give the Jedi any'*laughs*

[jadeskywalker]

Keria heard what was said over the intercom as she put het pack on and checked for her weapons. She started for the Mess Hall and she opened the door and entered. She approached the Admiral.

" Not long til we head out, sir." she said as she approached and saluted him.

[darth scourge]

'Here you go Captain'
The Admiral hands over a bottle of alcoholic drink

[Cassus Fett]

*Jedi Knight Jaski enters the mess* "Admiral, sorry im late i had urgent bussiness with the Jedi Council"

[darth scourge]

'Thats ok can you get your Jedi team ready were on our way to Aquaris to hammer those Sith'

[Cassus Fett]

OOC: Im going to have to RPG controlled Jedi Padawans with me (i will control them)

"Yes we are ready" *looks behind him as two Padawans enter* "This is Padawan Needa and Padawan Antilies"


*looks at the Admiral* "You under estimate what the Sith ae capable of we must go with caution"

[darth scourge]

'Be careful especially you padawans,ive just received information that a Sith warrior is leading the attack'

[jadeskywalker]

Keria stood there listening to the Admiral and Jaski talk to the padawans. She looked at the padawans and thought how young they looked. " The Sith is leading the attack." she thought to herself as she looked at the Admiral. " Thanks for the drink, sir." she said as she looked at the Jaski and the padawans." I agree with the Admiral, becareful." she said.

[darth scourge]

'If we can take out the Sith warrior it will be beneficial for the republic because intel informs me that he is in line for becoming Darth Thrax's apprentice'

[jadeskywalker]

" So, Darth Thrax will be getting an apprentice lined up. Well, we are not going to let that happen, sir." Keria said to the Admiral.

[darth scourge]

'Keria please dont try to to take him on yourself.Its up to our Jedi friends to sort that out.General Mortor is our target.'
Comm goes off
'Admiral well be approaching Aquaris in approximately 1hour and 35minutes'

'Thank you commander'

'Everyone to the hanger.Captain well be taking the troops in to the heart of the city.Well be using combat speeders with heavy artillery.My Jedi friends you will back us up against any Dark Jedi and Sith Acolytes.'

Admiral Rayr finishes his drink and starts heading to the hanger

[jadeskywalker]

Keria looked at the Admiral and smiled. " I don't wish to take the Sith, I know that is our Jedi friends job. I am just going to back you up and the others." she said as she downed her drink and left with the Admiral.

[darth scourge]

The Admiral and the team approached the hangar.Shuttles sat there with combat vehicles and artillery being loaded on.
'Board those shuttles now soldiers were landing a mile out from the city and remember to take care out there'

The Admiral boarded the shuttle

[jadeskywalker]

Keria followed the Admiral and got into a shuttle and waited for the Admiral. " You to Admiral." she said as she boarded the shuttle.

[Cassus Fett]

*Jedi Knight Carth Jaski and his two padawans, Padawan Needa and Padawan Antilies, enter the Shuttle behind Keria*

[jadeskywalker]

Keria looked towards the Jaski and his padawans. " Good to see you Jedi Jaski." she says to him.

[darth scourge]

Once the task force force are all loaded up the shuttles take off out of the hangar.
They head towards the planet surface.Much of the planet is covered with water and small Islands populate the planet.
'Pilot land at these coordinates' said the Admiral

The shuttles land on the coast of an Island approximately 5km from the city.
Admiral Rayr 'I want all units to gather for briefing'

Admiral Rayr had a large holomap and table unloaded and set up for the briefing.When the map is set up he briefs the soldiers
'Here is where we are gonna intercept the Sith.We will use 4 man combat speeders with heavy artillery to escort the personell carriers up the highway that leads to the city.We will unload just outside of the city.Jedi will accompany so look out for those aswell,If they die we might not win this.Keria you will lead the attack,you do well and you'll be in for a promotion.Any questions?'

[jadeskywalker]

Keria studied the holomap for a minute. She looked up at the Admiral.
" What if it is a trap...or if it is not...what do you think will happen if they already know we are here? " she asks couriously. She had a bad feeling about this.

[darth scourge]

'We'll just have to be ready for them.To me the Sith are cowardly bullies and need to be put in their place.Darth Thrax will crumble.Ill see to that.
Admiral Rayr thought back to the time before when he used to walk the corridors of the Jedi temple on Coruscant.At the time all he heard was Darth this and Darth that and made it his ambition to bring down the Sith.His master at the time taught him alot about devotion to the Jedi and the republic.After becoming a Jedi knight he noticed his master was changing even though he wasnt teaching him anymore.After constant questions to his former master his master unleashed a bolt of lightning towards him almost killing him.Lucky for him the temple master sensed this and came in and slayed the dark jedi master with his saber.
After this encounter the young knight was confused,upset and angered that all he was taught was worthless and left the Jedi order and Jedi knight rank behind him.At 20 years old he enlisted into the Republic military.
*Admiral Rayr wakes up out of his daydream*
'Uh where was I,move out soldiers'
Admiral Rayr hopped onto a combat speeder and waited for the others to go

[jadeskywalker]

" You ok, Admiral." Keria asks as she noticed his mind went somewhere else.

[Cassus Fett]

*Jaski and the two other Jedi climb aboard the speeder*

[jadeskywalker]

" Yes, sir." she said as she went and informed everyone to be ready to move out.

She boarded off the shuttle and climbed on her speeder and as everyone was set to move out. Keria lead the escort they were almost to where they are suppose to unload outside the city. Keria stopped her speeder.

" Sucessful so far." she said. " But that is only for now." she said with a smile.

[Cassus Fett]

*Jaski and his two padawans climb of the Speeder, holding thier Lightsabers in thier hands*

"Lets get going" Jaski said

[darth scourge]

'Okay Captain me you and the Jedi plus the commando squadron were gonna enter the city by going through the small forest over there.Artillery units set up Anti aircraft guns around the perimeter of the island who knows when those Sith fighters will show up.Squad leaders take your units to you fire zones move out'

Admiral Rayr equips his carbine and sets out through the forest.

[jadeskywalker]

Keria walks throught the forest ahead of the group not saying to much. She stopped when she hit the edge of the forest and made sure it was all clear. She waits for the others.

[darth scourge]

Admiral Rayr stops behind the group and looks through his binoculars.
'Oh my god'
The Admiral told the squadron he saw a squad of Sith troopers and a cloaked figure with his arms crossed laughing at a group of civilians getting beaten up by the troopers.

'Lets get them'

[jadeskywalker]

Keria ran out and starting blasting the troopers seeing the citizens getting beaten up. Gitting a head shot on a few of them.

[darth scourge]

The Admiral fires his carbine at a Sith trooper dropping him instantly.The Dark acolotye standing laughing draws his lightsaber and ignites it.

'Come on republic fools,im going to enjoy this'

[jadeskywalker]

Keria heard what the sith said. She contiued shooting at the troops trying to get all the civillans out of there. She looked up and saw him ignite his lightsaber. " Master Jaski!" she said. " Hope you are ready, I think our Sith is." she continued as she saw a couple of troops coming from behind the Admiral as he was busy with the ones he was shooting at. Keria aimed at their heads putting them to the ground.

Keria looked at the Admiral. " Like you said...our Jedis friends will take care of him and we can get the civillans out of there." she said.

[Cassus Fett]

*Jaski uses the force to jump to the Dark Acolotye, putting his lightsaber between the Dark Acolotye 's and a civilian*

*Padawan Needa and Antilies begin to battle with two Dark Jedi*

"You wont win Jedi, give in to the Darkside" said the Dark Acolotye

"Never" replied Carth Jaski, "I am a Jedi Master and true to the light side of the force" *he says as he strikes at the Dark Acolotye*

[darth scourge]

As the Jedi are battling the dark jedi a building wall explodes not so far from them.The Admiral sees a large droid come out with a shield around it.

'Sith war droid,find cover'

Admiral Rayr sees a desecrated building next to him and takes cover.

[jadeskywalker]

Keria runs towards the nearest building to her and cover behind there. As she peeks around the conor she realizes she is on the oppsite side of the group.

" Blats!" she said loudly to herself. " Now to get back over there with the group." she thought as she peeked around again. Keria saw a trooper that had missile launcher and she picked it up and used it on the battle droid.Watching the driod fly back when the missile hit him. Keria ran back out and continued getting the civillians out of there.

[Edgeomatic]

((OOC: May I join?))

Name: Ayn Fisto
Species: Nautolan
Class: Jedi Knight
Homeworld: Concord Dawn
Weapon(s): One orange lightsaber, five thermal detonators, and a Correlian blaster pistol
Background Info: One of the ancestors of the Jedi Master Kit Fisto, Ayn was living on the waring planet of Concord Dawn.Soon, the Jedi had to intervene and try to find an end to the war. While trying to stop the war, a Weequay Jedi named T'Kien Rytul came across the young Nautolan. She brought him to the council on Dantooine where the council decided to let the Weequay train Ayn Fisto.

[Cassus Fett]

OOC: I dont see why not you would be under my command beens your a Jedi. darth scourge i know you would say yes anyway

*Jaski, strikes a deadly blow to the Dark Acolotye, killing him*

[Edgeomatic]

Ayn jumps besides Jaski when he cuts down the Acolyte. "Looks like you beat me to the kill Master Jaski.", he says.

[Cassus Fett]

*turning to Ayn* I did indeed Jedi Fisto, lets keep moving *Carth and Ayn move on towards another Sith Droid, as the two padawans continue to battle with the dark jedi padawans*

"Jedi Fisto, this will be a good test of your powers. Take down that Sith War Droid" said Master Jaski

[Edgeomatic]

"Yes Master Jaski", Ayn says, activating his orange lightsaber. The Sith droid fires a missle towards Ayn, but he does a backflip avoiding the blast. He throws his lightsaber into the shield, disabling the shield. Fisto then Force Jumps on the Sith war droid. He sticks his lightsaber in it's back and runs along its back. He then jumps off of it as the droid explodes in a fiery ball.

[jadeskywalker]

Keria eyes widened when she recived a message that was intercepted. " Admiral, I have just recived word that there are reforcments coming this way. Don't know how many but they are coming." Keria said as she approached quickly.

" We will split what remaining troops we have left." she said turning to the two Jedi Masters. " Master Jaski, you will take half of the troops to the right and secure a premiter to help keep the troops trying to over run the heavy altelary." she said to Jaski and looked at Master Fisto. " You will take the other half and secure the left side of the heavy altalery. I will make sure our heavy altelary will hit their big stuff as they get here. Remeber we cannot let them break through or we are done for." she said looking at all of them.

" We take out their big stuff, it shouldn't be a problem keeping the troops off." she replies to them.

[darth scourge]

The Admiral looked delighted when the Captain and the Jedi decided their course of action.
'Well planned you lot.Captain ill follow your lead,give em hell'

[jadeskywalker]

As they all seperated. Keria ran to where the Heavy Alteliary was and started informin them that they are to hit all big stuff they throw a them.

[Edgeomatic]

"Good plan Captain Donavan." Ayn stated. "Come on troop lets load up and hit 'em hard!" Fisto said as the troops hollered in agreement, ready for anything. Activating his orange lightsaber, him and the Republic Soldiers run along the left side. Missiles shot off, causing a causualties on the Republic side. The soldiers destroyed a cargo box full of thermal detonators causing all a Sith War Droid next to them to blow up. Ayn sliced down a Sith Commando with ease at the squad of soliders continue to slice down the Sith soldiers. After neutralizing the area, Ayn comms both Keria and Jaski. "This is Jedi Ayn Fisto, left side is secure"

[darth scourge]

As the battle was going Admiral Rayr walked over to the Captain and the Jedi with a Sith Warrior hanging over his shoulder
'Dont ask,lets just say a slice of my past just appeared'

The Admiral dropped the body to the floor

'Jedi,do you know if this is the Sith on the line for being Darth Thrax's apprentice,the republic never gave me a picture of the guy,iI just wondered if the Jedi council gave you any info on him'

[jadeskywalker]

Keria heard Jedi Master Ayn. " Good Work Jedi Master Ayn. Give them trouble there. Jedi Master Jaski. How is it over there?" Keria comms to him.


" They should be arriving here pretty soon, ma'me!" a trooper says to her. Keria comms for the group that is their look out.

" How is it looking?" Keria commed.
" Looks like 3 squadrons. I squadron of the big stuff, ma'me." the trooper commed in.

" Everyone, stay sharp, they should be coming over that hill." she comms to the others as she gave the signal to for the Heavy alterilary to be locked and ready to fire.

As they came over the hill, Keria gave the signal to fire. They all fired.
" Troops remeber keep them off of our heavy alterilary." Keria says.

Keria looked at the Admiral as he put the sith warrior on the ground.

[Edgeomatic]

Ayn Fisto hears the Admiral and kneels down beside the dead Sith and places a hand on his forehead. He closes his eyes in concentration, then quickly opens his large purple eyes in shock. "It seems that this one was Darth Trax's apprentice Admiral Rayr.

[jadeskywalker]

Keria looked at the Admiral. " Well, we can scratch him off the sith apprentices list." she said as a missile or something hit the building they were next to and Keria pushes the Admiral away from the falling debree and gets her instead of the Admiral.

[darth scourge]

'Well it looks like Darth Thrax's plans are comin to an end.If the darksiders under him are like this this we'll have no problem winning this war.'

'Get on the comm and get all units status'

Admiral Rayr looked at the dead Sith for a moment.He thought to himself
'I cant let my knowledge of the force take over me,it will be dangerous for everyone,I must let the Jedi take care of this sort of thing in future'

[jadeskywalker]

Keria stood up and dusted herself off. " Well, that wasn't very nice." she said as she stood up.

[Edgeomatic]

"Are you okay Captain Donavan?" Ayn asks helping her up.

[darth scourge]

Admiral Rayr after getting his update back says to the troops
'Looks like weve beat the Sith here,get back to the ship'

A group of speeders and personnel carriers came towards them and Admiral Rayr jump on the lead one.

[jadeskywalker]

" Thank you Master Ayn. Now I am mad! " she said as she broke into a run and left the Admiral and Jedi Master Ayn talking about the sith apprentice.

[darth scourge]

Admiral Rayr taking his mind off his own problems for a second thinks
'Captain Donavan'

The Admiral runs after the Captain shouting

'Wait,Captain'

[jadeskywalker]

Keria stopped suddenly and turned to the admiral. " Yes, sir?" she said as she was waited.

[darth scourge]

'Are you ok,I lost my mind for a second there,you wouldn't understand but believe me,I cant command anymore Im appointing you Admiral im stepping down to Captain,then I can follow orders and not go off and do my own thing which might destroy us all.You must understand Keria'

[jadeskywalker]

Keria looked at him shocked. " I understand for now but after this we need to talk. Now isn't the time. I want you take a what troops you can and cover our backs pointing more into the city. Heavy alteliary are sucessful for now."

[darth scourge]

'Fine Captain'

The Admiral got on the speeder and waited for all units to head back to the ship

[jadeskywalker]

Keria put her hand on her head and pulled her hand away as her hand was covered with blood.
" I am glad I did that while they were not here. " she said as she continued fighting the troops.
She commed the heary armor troops giving them cooridantes to blow up the ones big enough to blow up their shuttle.
Keria commed in all units to gets their status.

[darth scourge]

Admiral Rayr sat in the speeder while the battle was going on knowing that if he lead the attack he would finally become the person he once was...and the path he nearly took.
Admiral Rayr gets on the comm
'Captain Donavan order all units to withdraw their position and head back to the RV point,a nice squadron of rebel fighters are on their way to clean up this place,mission accomplished'

[jadeskywalker]

" Roger that, Admiral." she commed back to him. " All units withdrawl to the RV point. We heve some fighters coming in to clean up." she commed to all units as she headed back herself.

[darth scourge]

The task force trek down the highway to the RV point to the transport ships.The Admiral gets off.
'Captain make sure everyone gets onboard safely then order the pilots to head to Salvation immediately,ill be in my room if you need me'

[Edgeomatic]

Ayn Fisto goes to the cockpit of the Transport Ship. He sat in the co-pilot seat. He was one of the pilots of the Jedi Order.

[Cassus Fett]

*Master Jaski, takes a seat and begins to meditate*

[jadeskywalker]

Keria stood her ground covering for the others as they got back onboard the shuttle. As they were all secure on the shuttle. Keria orders the pilots to head back to Salvation. Keria commed to the cockpit, " Everyone is onboard. Get us out of her Master's Jaski and Fisto." she said as she put her hand on the back of her head.

Keria thought to herself. " Headache. I hate headaches."

[Cassus Fett]

*Master Jaski put in the coordinates and turns to Fisto* You can pilot us home

[jadeskywalker]

Keria saw an empty spot and took a seat. She leaned back and closed her eyes.

[Edgeomatic]

"Yes Master Jaski", Ayn humbly replies. He pulls a couple of switches as the Transport ship slowly lifts off the ground. He punches in coordinates as the ship goes to hyperspace.

[jadeskywalker]

Keria felt the little jump when they jumped into hyperspace. " Good, we are finally off." she thought to herself as she fell asleep.

Keria got up and knocked on the Admiral's door.

" Sir, it's Captain Donavan. We are in hyperspace and the pilots are on their way to Salvation." she said to him as she saluted.

She looked at him. " Anything for a bad headache." as she put her hand on the back of her head. " A very bad headache." she said as she smiled big shaking her head.

[darth scourge]

'Yeah a blaster shot to the head'*laughs'
'Only jokin,im serious you know about what I said earlier and you will follow orders,you are in charge of this task force,im gonna serve you.'

Admiral Rayr sits down on his bed with his hands on his head looking confused

[jadeskywalker]

Keria walked over to the Admiral. " I will do what is asked of me but it looks like it is something more." she said as she walked over towards him.

" I didn't mean to seem snappy down there but that threw me for a loop back there." she said to him. " Alot going on down there." she looked at him. " It is something more than just that, isn't it?" she said not expecting an answer.

[darth scourge]

'How did you guess'
The Admiral looked at Keria in a puzzeled way

'I cant say at the moment my reasons,oh also can you order the Jedi to keep watch of me at all times.How do you think I killed the Sith,especially one who is supposed to be good enough to be the dark lords apprentice.'

The Admiral gets on the comm

'Jedi Jaski could you inform the Jedi council that I wish to see them,set a course for Coruscant.Over'

'Now Keria your Admiral,do you want to tell everyone or do you want to keep it a secret?'*laughs*

[Jay-Ton-Wan]

Name: Jay-Ton-Wan
Species: Reptilen (8 Foot Tall Lizerd)
Character Class: Jedi Master
Weapons: 2 Purple Lightsaber
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[darth scourge]

Originally posted by Jay-Ton-Wan@Dec 30 2004, 01:44 PM
Name: Jay-Ton-Wan
Species: Reptilen (8 Foot Tall Lizerd)
Character Class: Jedi Master
Weapons: 2 Purple Lightsaber
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OOC:You will have to be Jedi Knight because Im not allowing players to be masters yet.Welcome anyway

[Jay-Ton-Wan]

Fine Ill be a knight, Don't Cear Right now, Got a Crummy Addatude.

[darth scourge]

OOC:Well your young id expect a crummy addatude.Oh yeah theres a discussion forum for this thread if you want to speak your mind.

[Jay-Ton-Wan]

So What do i do just Create a story or something?

[darth scourge]

OOC:Kind of.What happens is the Storyteller ie the person who started the idea comes up with a story and players take part in it.

[darth scourge]

Admiral Rayr sits on his bed whilst waiting for a reply from Keria.

[Jay-Ton-Wan]

Suddenly an 8 Foot tall Lizerd Being walks in, "Admiral Rayr, I am Jay-Ton-Wan, I ask of a asitnce in a vary Impotent Manner.

My Home world Planit Reptilea has Repoted a powerful And Dangeris Force on world, I ask for you and your Fleets help to find out what this force is.

If you ecsept this asiment our first stop will Be the Wookie Home World.

[jadeskywalker]

Keria looked at Admiral Rayr. " Looks like I don't have a choice, sir." she said to him with a little smile.

As Jedi Janski commed back to Admiral Rayr that a meeting has been set with the Council and will meet with him when we arrive. Keria watched the Admiral talk to Jedi Janski when she had a flash of his past or so she thought it was. Him with a lightsaber fixing to strike someone or something down. As he finished talkeing to Jedi Janski, she gasped as she looked up at him. " You use to be a Jedi?" she said with a shocked look on her face and her eyes widened, hoping it was her head hurting.

With that said as Reptilen came in the room. Keria listened to what he all he said and when she heard the Wookiees homeworld." Kashyyyk. What all has happened?" Keria said looking at the Reptilen.

[darth scourge]

'Well,Captain Rayr reporting for duty ma'am.Yeah your right in what you think.I suppose we could stop off at Kashyyyk first.Jay-Ton-Wan explain more.'

Captain Rayr looks relaxed and better after his conversation with Keria.
'Keria do you know your parents,its just I sense something in you'

[Jay-Ton-Wan]

Yes, Severl Months Ago, Me and My allie, Sifodeas fouind a ship near By Planit Raxus Prime, When We Borded we descovered some ship logs, we found out that the ship beloned to an unkown aline rase called the Yuuzhan Vong. We then Lered that the Ship was going after a dangerus Gen. Call Simon Striker. The Ship was heading for Kessel, when a ship much like there own attacked and destoryed all abord.

My and Sifodeas, went to Kessel. there we found an allie of Striker named Darth Hundis, we soon over took him and lered the horrable truth, Sticker was some how able to stop all forms of force powers. Worst of all was that he was Creating a Secrit army. With the army he was going to return to the Yuuzhan Vong Home world, and take it over.

Before He could do that, he needed a Powerful Wepone. But before Me and Sifodeas could find out anything else, Darth Hundis was killed by a powerful Bounty Hunter Named Allis.

We tracked Allis to an Abbaned Ice world called Hoth. There we lernd More, The Wepone witch Stricker wished to have Was a wepone Barred Deep in the core of my home Plaint Reptilea. Before Me and Sifodeas could get there the planit was taken over. We were fallowed by Allis and another bounty Hunter named Durge. They Chaced us to a Planit Called Tammuz-an. There my Allie Sifodeas was Killed, but Duge Soon Dissapered.

I soon captered Allis and found out that most of Strikers army was stationed on Kashyyyk, But Before i could take them out, i needed to take out a transmitter on Jabiim to prevent news of the armys deffet from Getting to Gen. Striker. Now i ask for your help in stoping Striker from tarring Up My plaint, But first i need your help in deffteing his army on Kashyyyk.

Will you please Help Me and My People....

[jadeskywalker]

Keria looked at Captain Rayr. " My parents were killed in a mission when I was 8 and I was raised by my aunt who is a pilot but has retired... my mother was a pilot and died when she had me and my father was a recon soilder his name is Dagen Donavan. I think my mother had some kind ablility but my aunt wouldn't tell me and I hardly know much about themand the more I grew up my aunt would say I am just like my father . She didn't tell me much about them. " she said as she lowered her head and looked at the repeilen.


After hearing what the reptilen said she looked at Rayr.

" We are on our way to the Jedi Council as we speak and a few Jedi's onboard. " she says to Jay-Ton-Wan. " Maybe if we discuss this with Jedi Janski and Fisto we can find a salution. Maybe we can see what they think or might know, also."

[darth scourge]

'Yeah I think us 3 and Jedis Jaski and Fisto should have a meeting before we decide where we go but its your call Admiral'

[jadeskywalker]

" How big is this army suppose to be?" she asks Jay-Ton-Wan.

[Jay-Ton-Wan]

Over three millon troops, From over 7 Raseis. Wookiee, Quarren, Rodian, Mon Calamari, Ithorian, Geonosian, and Twi'lek. They are Amed with severl Blasters, Advanced Armer, over 400 toops are armed with lightsabers.

Most importently they have been given back up by asp droids armed with specle rockit lanchers, and IG lancer droids.

on Kashyyyk Their base is over 12 sq miles. it gose down betheth the plaint about 3 miles

On Reptilea they have a blockade of shieldships, and Mon Calamari Star Cruiser's. They are also armed with Sith fighters, Geonosian starfighters, and droid starfighters.

On the planit, the base is about 1 mile cycle, saround by mines, the only way in is thro the well protected landing Pads on top of the base. In the ceter is an open Shft that gose down 1,000 feet to where they are diging for the wepone.

It is not impossible to stop them.

[jadeskywalker]

Keria commed for Jedi Janski and Fisto to come back to where she was. She looked at Jay-Ton-Wan. " Jedi Fisto and I will go with you to Kashyyyk, as Captain Rayr and Jedi Janski go to the Jedi Council and see about getting more Jedi's and see if they know anything, also. Besides the Council already awaits them. Jedi Fisto and I will go do some investagating with Jay-Ton-Wan and see about this army that is being built on Kashyyyk. Just checking things out before they arrive with more Jedi's and I get some more fighters and have a plan of attack. I cannot let my guys go in blinded." she says to them.

[Jay-Ton-Wan]

My plan to deal with them is sympole, the 2,250,000 on Kashyyyk have no air Devence, Useing about 300 fighters we can go down there and wipethem out quickly, we will need another team down there to prevent the army from going into naboing Wookie citys. We will need to destory their Transport Ships so they can not take off.

As for the 75,000 on Reptilea, well this is much harder. Nerly every ship in your fleet will remaine above planit attacking Strikers Fllet. One Small Ship that is able to carry about 20 poeple will go to the other side of the planit. Headin to the sevace, it will arive at the base, at the exsact moment we are overthe Shaft, the 20 poeple will need to jump down it, with a package, Useing jet packs, they will land at the bottom of that saft. But they will have to be care full. Manny gards are working down there. They will first need to confront Striker and take him out. Then they will pace the package at the bottome of the saft.

The Package is a P-19 Sonic Bomb capable of destroying anything with 50 miles of its blast. It will have a 5 minte Timer on it. The Assalt team will then use the jet packs and fly up and out that saft. at about 300 feet above the base they will run out of fule, however the ship that droped them off will come and quickly pick them up. then when the ship is clear of the blast, the bomb will go off.

This is the best plan i could come up with. Once when striker is dead his fleet will make a run for it.

[jadeskywalker]

" I hope you have these fighters already and you need us down there to keep the fighters from getting to their transporters and taking off." she said as she waited for for the Jedi's to get back there.

[Jay-Ton-Wan]

as a matter of fact i do, the pepole of Jabiim thanked me, and asked me if i need anything, i told them about what was happening. THey siad over 100 of their Best Piolts had Powerful Fighters Called Intersepters, they also siad thay had 1 assalt Ships that could help me out. But thats not good anoth to take out the first or seconed Base.

[darth scourge]

'I hope this mission wont take too long,remember Darth Thrax gets more powerful by the day and our main objective is to stop him.But as you say me and Jedi Jaski will see the Jedi council first.'

[jadeskywalker]

" Then it is settled then, you two see the Council and I will take what remaining troops we have to Kashyyyk and help them with Jedi Fisto with me. "

[Jay-Ton-Wan]

Good then I will call in the other ship and its fighters at once.

Moments later....

They said they will meet us there...

[jadeskywalker]

Keria looked at the others. " Jedi Fisto ready the remaining troops we have. Jay-Ton-Wan, help him get everything prepared for the trip to Kashyyyk."

[Jay-Ton-Wan]

I also have a gift for you,

Jay-Ton-Wan revels 3 Fighters that look alot like the jedi starfighters.

Some of us will have to Lead the fighter attack.

[darth scourge]

Captain Rayr and Jedi Jaski get on a separate shuttle and head to Coruscant.
When they eventually get there the Supreme Chanceller is waiting with Jedi master Mojo.

The Captain walks over and greets them.
The Chancellor says
'Admiral Rayr why have you left the task force and come here'

'I must speak with Jedi Master Mojo first'

'Very well'

Rayr and the Jedi walk to the Jedi temple and arrive at the council chamber

'Well whats the problem'

'My powers are getting out of control,I have let Keria know about my past.Ive also appointed her Admiral.She would do a better job than I.

'I knew we shouldnt have let him leave the order,I told you all' says a Council member

'What are we gonna do'

'He's too old and battle scarred to be let back in.The dark side would take over him'

'Im still here ya know'

'Go see the chancellor we will summon you when weve finished speaking.Send Jedi Jaski in'

Captain Rayr leaves to see the Chancellor

[Jay-Ton-Wan]

Back at the Fleet....

Admiral We are all ready to make the jump to light speed to head to Kashyyyk, with your oders we can leave at once!

[jadeskywalker]

" Make the jump for hyperspace. Inform me when approach Kashyyyk."

[Jay-Ton-Wan]

a few hours later Jay-Ton-Wan feels a distrbence in the force, a dark and evil thing, He feels it Growing. He closeis his eyes and see severl Visons.
He sees Darth Thrax saronned by Buining Trees.
He sees two Fleets in battle over his home world, then some voices come into his head, he feels they are evil but how.....

"Vader...."
"Yes master"
"Rise"

Then He sees a man in a black Shut of Armer, With a red light saber...
"When i levt you i was but a lerner. now I am the master"
"You can't with darth, Soon you will stike me down, But i will Become More powerful then you can possibly emagin.

Then he sees a boy, about 10 Years old,
"who was his Father?"
"There was no Father"

Then hes sees a moon aproching a planit.....
"you may fire when ready.."
A flash of light the moon fires a beam of light at a planit, then it exsplodes
"thats no moon, its a space station..."

Then He hears lightsabers battleing togther, then a yell, then...
"no, I am you father....."
"No......."

Then Suddenly he sees More Trees and Some Litle Animle Runthing thro them....
"Then My father is truly Dead...."
"So be it Jedi...."
"aaahhhhh,aaahhhh, Father Help me..."

He then Sees a the man in the BLack shut, FIghting another man who looks like the boy......

"Ah, A sister. Mabey she could help me."
A Green Light Flasis
"NNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOO!"

Then Bolts of Lighting a flash......
"Begun the Clone Wars have....."

Sudenly he wakes and Hears the Pilot.
"Sir we are aproching Planit Kashyyyk. shall i tell the Admiral"

"yes, go"

[darth scourge]

Back in the Chancellors office...

'So youve stepped down to Captain and appointed Keria as Admiral.Are you sure youve made the right desicion'

'I have faith in her'

'Very well,your too experienced to be Captain.You are now General of the ground forces for this task force.Keria will command the fleet,you will command the troops.Thats an order General'

'Very well,I must go see the council now'

'Sure,you may leave'

General Rayr heads to the Jedi council chamber

[Jay-Ton-Wan]

Above Kashyyyk.....

Jay-Ton-Wan has one Last Vision, Init he Hears Sticker talking to him...

"Ive seen the Futer, the day will come when the Jedi will Be powerless,"

Lightsabers Clash

"When all else failes What are you going to do, FIght? Ha, Fighting is for the week

More lightsabers Clash

"You have no Idea do you? What i do to day will Change the Futer, Bring about the End of the Galixsy.

Then a Voice of a Jedi He knew all too well comes in..
"Come on little fella are you Just Going to run Away? Come on I wout hiut you.

He then sees The jedi, But he sounds Musch older.
"You will nkow what to do when the time comes...."

The jedi Fades away the Pilot Begins to talk.
Pilot Amrble on Deck.

[darth scourge]

General Rayr arrives at the council chamber

'Enter General Rayr.Weve discussed your situation and decided we cant let you back in the order.It would be too dangerous for us to expand your knowledge of the force.'

'I agree,I ll have to continue commanding the troops,theres no way out'

'Yes but we cant ignore the fact that you earned the title Jedi knight and we can only hope you will use your knowledge if you have to for the benefit of the republic.We have saved your constructed lightsaber we took off you when you left the order.We can only say use it only when there is no other choice'

'I understand'

'Also we have been told about the Reptilian,go back and help them,I sense something beneficial to the republic if you help'

'Of course,ill be leaving now'

General Rayr leaves with Jedi Jaski and heads back to the Task force.The two arrive at the starship salvation

'Admiral Donavan this is General Rayr could I speak with you please'
The General says over the comlink.

[jadeskywalker]

Keria got on the comlink. " Wow, General." she said as she got on the comlink, " How did it go?"

[Jay-Ton-Wan]

THe pilot Begins to talk.
"Sir We Have Incomeing, Its the allie Ships"

"Good, Tell them the attack will begin Momentarly with the Amriles Orders. I also ask to join them in battle"

[darth scourge]

'All is well Keria,could I speak to you in private though'

General Rayr heads to his quarters

[jadeskywalker]

" Yes, general. What can I help you with?"

[darth scourge]

'Ive been put in charge of all ground units,the Chancellor ordered me to.Your in charge of the whole fleet now.Dont say anything to the Jedi but Ive ben given my old lightsaber back.The Jedi council said theyd rather have my powers to help them and not to destroy them.I never mentioned your abilities though,How would you feel about expanding them,in secret for the time being.'

[Jay-Ton-Wan]

Jay-Ton-Wan comes onto Specker.

"Ambrel, Our Ground Force and Attack Fighters are Ready to go, Shall I give the Order."

"And also I'ed Wish to join the Fighters in the attack"

[jadeskywalker]

" I will not say anything about you getting your old lightsaber back. I wouldn't mind learning how to expand my abilities. " she said as she slowly looked up at him. " I don't even know what all my parents had and I could have." she said as she finished getting ready to leave for Kashyyyk.

[Jay-Ton-Wan]

Jay-Ton_wan comes in over the Inercome.

"Admiral, Ive made a miss calculation, weve just spoted 43 enamey Fighters Hevaly armed, Hevly Shelded, Heading Strae For Us!!"

[jadeskywalker]

" Get all the fighter pilots out there." she said to Jay-Ton-Wan. Keria looked at General Rayr. " Your incharge of Ground Troops. Get with them we will be leaving soon."

[darth scourge]

'Yes Admiral'

General Rayr gets on the comm

'All troops get to the apc's and prepare for battle.'

The General looks at Keria

'Fancy coming along for the ride,or do you want to stay and play with your new toys'

[jadeskywalker]

Keria paused for a minute as she looked around and saw everyone busy doing something. She looked ar General Rayr. " I think I am going to play with the fighter and give you guys some cover fire as you make it to the ground, consider me watching you from the air." she said as she inside the fighter. " Jay-Ton-Wan and Jedi Fisto to the fighters. We will cover them as they make it down to the ground. "

Keria got on the comm to the shuttle. " Wait for us to take off and start on those fighters out there. " she commed as she lifted off the ground with Jedi Fisto not far behind her.

" That didn't take long to find them." she commed as she already started firing at them.

[darth scourge]

'Ok Admiral,just give the all clear and well move out'

[jadeskywalker]

As Keria saw Jedi Fisto and Jay-Ton-Wan fly out. " Your all clear to to head out. We have you covered." she comms back.

[darth scourge]

'Roger that Admiral'

'All ground units get ready to take off'

General Rayr takes off in his transport and heads to Kashyyyk

[Jay-Ton-Wan]

A large Space Fight Began betwwen the Enamy Fighters and The Jedi Forceis.

"All Units Keeps your targeting computers on, we can waist one shot."

The battle Rageis on until a Mystrus Sith Fighter appers, it takes out 1 captile Ship in a few Blasts.

"This is Squadrin Leader, All fighters take care of the Remaing Forcis, then head for the serface, This ones Mine."

The Sith fighter Makes a run for a near by Moon, Jay-Ton-Wan trys to take it out bu is unable to.
"Blast, Ill have to land. I can't See where he went."

[jadeskywalker]

Keria and Jedi Fisto stay close to the transporter that has most of their task force on it.

Keria barraled rolled as she had a lock on a fighter and blew it up.

[Jay-Ton-Wan]

After landing of the Moon Called Alris Prim, Jay-Ton-Wan Begins to look around for the sith Fighter, But he is soon ambushed.

"Allis! How did you find Me?"
"It was not me Who found you it was him"

He Points to a man who was standing Behind Jay-Ton-Wan. It Was Durge!

"Oh, No!"

Jay-Ton-Wan Brings out his lightsabers, Durge and Allis try to Shoot him, But kep Missing. Soon Jay-Ton-Wan comes to a cliff and is Trapped.

"Theres No way out for you Jedi, DURGE GET HIM!"

Duge makes a Leep at him, Jay-ton-wan swings His lightsaber thro him but it has no effect. Allis starts blastin once mroe, But missis and Hits Durge. durge fell down the cliff. Jay-Ton-Wan Swings his lightsaber at Allis and cuts of his arm.

"Now Who Sent you! Talk!"
"it was, it was Darth Thr......."

Allis is Killed By a Force Chock From an Unseen Force. Jay-Ton-Wan stands up, then a larg exsploson Comes from the woods, Jay-Ton-Wan sees a figer, But it vanishis Suddenly.

"Who Wants me Dead?"

Jay-Ton_wan Retuns to his ship when he hears a call on hs transmitter.

"All Fighters Attack the Base!"

[jadeskywalker]

Keria flys low enought to fire at the base and hits inside the hanger.

" General, it is all clear to land." Keria commed to General Rayr. As she made another pass around them and came back around to make a pass at a transported fixing to lift off.

" General, get your men down. Coming for the transporter fixing to take off. " she commed to the General as she made her pass and the transporter and it blew up. " You know where to find me. Good luck, General. Comm me for help, if you need it."

[Jay-Ton-Wan]

Jay-ton-Wan hops into his fighter and takes off, He Gos throw the Planits Ampmosher and Gets to the base.

"We have transports takeing off we need to shoot them down"

Jay-Ton-Wan begins to shoot down Enamey transports.

[jadeskywalker]

" Jedi Fisto, Lets go give them a hand with those transporters."

[Jay-Ton-Wan]

Transpots are getting shot down quickly, When all of the sudden Jay-ton-wan is shot down. His fighter Crashis into a hangger.

"Oh, Grand"

Jay-ton-wan gets out of his destroyed Starfighter. He Takes out one of his lightsabers But it is shot at and destoryed, he takes out his seconed lightsaber and begins takeing down troops.

[darth scourge]

General Rayr sees Jay-Ton-Wan's fighter crash into the hangar from the cockpit window.

'Pilot weve got to go in there and get him'

THe General's transport changes course and heads to the downed fighter

'Admiral were gonna get Jay-ton-Wan,cover us'

[Jay-Ton-Wan]

Jay-ton-wan sees the transport comeing in, he then sees a platun of troopers with Anti-Air Rockits.

"Oh Know I can't let them attack that Ship"

Jay-ton-wan goes and cuts up the troops with his Lightsaber. Then he sees about 400 Run into the forist. He then calls in on his comlink.

"400 troops just went Running into the woods, I need some fights to Stop them from getting to the wookie Citys!"

[jadeskywalker]

Keria goes down low to give General Rayr cover as him and his troops make it to Jay-Ton-Wan. She then locks on the troops that were running out in the woods and fire's. Keria then notices smoke and then a fire started in her engine.

" I've been hit, making an emergency landing where the troops were headed out." she comms as she makes and emergency landing and gets out as fast as she could then the fighter blew up. The blast threw her up against a tree hard and there were several troops around her.

Keria sat up and looked up and saw several of the troops. She smiled at them as she laughed, " My fighter blew up." she said as she pulled out her dagger and hit one in the throat as she shot the other and she took off to find the General and the rest of the team.

[darth scourge]

The General and his squad arrive at the crash site.General Rayr senses that Keria is in trouble.He commands the squad leader to assist Jay-Ton-Wan whilst he searches for Keria.

General Rayr heads off into the forest to look for the Admiral

[Jay-Ton-Wan]

"Ok troops We need to Stop enamy Troops of Getting to the city's"
He transmits over the comlink.
"All fighters destory that base!"
Soon an epic assalt is under way, meny Fighters go down, However most of the army and their Transports are destoryed, Suddenly in the heat of battle Jay-ton-wan looses Concisness, He has another vison.

For over a thousand Generations the Jedi Knights were gardians of Peace and order througt the galaxy, Before the Dark times,Before the Empire.

Jay-ton-wan Sees an army of men in white Shuts,

A man Named Darth Vader, Ha was a Pupil of mine till he turned to evil,
He helped Hunt down and destroy the Jedi. Vader Was Seduced By the Darkside.

He then hears Bething, a faint Light from the darkness comes...

"You have the sight now Jay-ton, the power to see beond time....."

Jay-ton-wan Wakes back up, he sees that the battle is still going on, he then hears over the comlink."

Sir we've Breched the enamey base!

Good Work solger, I'm seeting up a radavue Point, all ground Trrops meet me their.

[jadeskywalker]

Keria saw Rayr and pulled him down where she was. " I didn't get them all. " she says to him. " There are 15 more there and lets not hope more. " she said as she pointed to their left. " I know the two of us and take them and we can get back."

[Jay-Ton-Wan]

The Battle countinues to Rage on when Jay-Ton-Wan is confrunted by a sith.

"Stand your ground Jedi, FOr i am Sith"
"you will not deffet me"

An epic Lightsaber battle begins, Jay-Ton-Wan is to fast for the sith to hit (OCC: MUCH LIKE YODA) Soon jay-ton-wan cuts the siths hands clean off, then begins to intaraget him.

"Tell Me Who Is working with Striker? Why Dose He Want me dead?"
"You jedi fool, you have no idea yet haha"

Jay-ton-Wan begins to force choke the sith"TELL ME!"

"Stiker....is Darth.....Tha.....ahhhh..hes his appr.....APPRENTIS"

THe sith then dies. A Solger comes in over the comlink"Sir The Battle is Won all enamey Forceis have Been Destroyed, thier base is gone>

Jay-Ton-Wan stands up "Vary good trooper, tell all personle to prepar to head to the Rell System, and Planit Reptilea, We Have one more thing to Finish."

[jadeskywalker]

Keria looked at the general. " Lets get out of here now. " she says in a soft voice.
She nods her head at him. " Now! " she says as she stood up shooting at the troopers that were still around. The General Rayr was right behind her shooting at them.

Then the shooting finally stopped. Keria smiled. " We are still in one piece, I hope?" she says as she slowly opens her eyes, jokingly at the General. " Lets get to the others." she says laughing as they walked off to get to the others.

[Jay-Ton-Wan]

At the battle site Jay-ton-wan looks around trying to find any wounded solgers.

"apprentis" he thoght" Who's apprentis.

Some troopers came along"sir the transports are ready to go, some Larg convois have Siad they will meet us in the Rell System."

"vary good"He siad, He looked off to the sun set

"the wookies have siad thanks for destroying the base"

"vary well" After moments of looking at the sun ste, he headed off to the transports,"Let's End This."

[Cassus Fett]

OOC:sorry i aint been on for a while

[darth scourge]

OOC:Ok dude

General Rayr and Admiral Donavan met up with the others.The General saw the dead Sith.

'I wonder who that was.Its not Darth Thrax.I sense we will be meeting him shortly.Beware though Keria,you have a power,dont let Darth Thrax try to lure you into joining him'

[jadeskywalker]

" I am not going anywhere without telling any of you. " she replied back to the General.

As Keria looked at the Sith, she didn't know who it was either, as she drifted off thinking of what might have been kept from her. As she walked around the base hanger looking around.

She saw that a computer survived, she sits and starts looking around on the computer for what all could be on there. " Someone get this computer to intellagents and see if they can find something on here that could lead us to Darth Thrax or maybe his next move." she says to one of the troopers near her as she continued looking through the building.

[Jay-Ton-Wan]

Sir, Before he died He siad something i thnk you should know. He siad that Striker was someones apprentis, But im afrade thats all i know, I don't have a clue as to what hes talking about. Do you?

[Cassus Fett]

"He was Darth Thrax's apprentice, my old apprentice" said Jedi Master Carth Jaski

[darth scourge]

'Well that explains it all,we must find them both.Then again I dont think he could be his apprentice.Remember our mission on Aquaris.I killed Darth Thrax's would be apprentice.Something fishy's going on here,what do you guys suggest we do to find out?'

[jadeskywalker]

" I saw that a computer had survived in there, so, I had it taken to Intellegence and see what all they can find out from there. Maybe that will help us with where to look next. I don't know maybe something." Keria says as she walked back to them.

[Cassus Fett]

"I must get word to the Jedi Council"

[jadeskywalker]

As a trooper approached Keria he handed her a hologram andd said he found it in the hanger. It looked familar to Keria. " What would my aunt be doing here? " she said softly as she gave the others a wary look.

" Jedi Janski take Jedi Fisto with you and get word to the Council. " Keria says to Janski.

" Looks, like I am going back home and see about this. " Keria says.

[Cassus Fett]

"Ok"

*Master Jaski and Jedi Fisto head towards a communicator*

[darth scourge]

General Rayr says to Keria

'Do you need someone to come with you,im here for you if you need me'

[jadeskywalker]

" I have a feeling I shouldn't go alone. If Jedi Janski and Fisto have to go to the Council have them take Jay-Ton-Won with them, maybe with him something will come up. I think we will be back before we miss to much here. Have them get everyone boarded back on the ship and rested." Keria says as she walked off.

" Oh yeah, General...we leave in a hour. "

[darth scourge]

'Im ready when you are Keria'

General Rayr says to his second in command

'I leave you in charge of the troops for the time being,leave a division on this planet to watch over the innocent civilians.Ill be back soon.'

[jadeskywalker]

The ship Keria and General Rayr were taking was prepped and ready to go. Keria tured to General Rayr. " Thanks for coming, General. "

[Jay-Ton-Wan]

A trooper comes walking in "Sir, We have a problem

"Yes what isit?"

"Sir, the Enamey FOrceis Sarounding Planit Reptilea, Theve Vanished, with out a trace, We looked for the base on the surface, but found nothing"

"This is indead destrbing"

"One more thing sir, A small COre world system Of Transtosha Has jest repoted a large Fleet apporching Planit Helfory in the system."

"MY GOD TRANSTOSHA! THATS JUST A FOOT STEP AWAY FROM CORUSCANT!!!"

Jay-Ton-Wan begins to pace thro the room he has no idea what to do.

"Thiers only one thing to do"

He catchis Up with Admiral Keria Before she and Captain Rayr Left.

"Admiral With your Permisson Ied like to take some of the Fleet to Invastagte Some destebencis in the Transtosha System. Planit Helfory Has reported some, Camunacation Interferance."

[jadeskywalker]

" Very well, then, but get in touch if something comes up. " Keria says to Jay-Ton-Wan, then Keria and General Rayr were on their to her aunts house.

" I have a feeling this is going to be a real short trip. " she said giving him a confused looked.

[Cassus Fett]

*Master Jaski and Jedi Fisto head off to coursant to speak with the Jedi Council*

[Jay-Ton-Wan]

"Ok everyone we heading off to the Transtosha System, Lets get their as quickly as possible."

As half the fleet gets into Pasison, Jay-ton-Wan gives the order.

"Captain Gordela are we ready to take off?"

"Yes Sir."

"Good, All ships have the same hyperspase Carodints?"

"Yes Sir, All ships are in Posison."

"Good, all ships take off."

Within a few secondeds Half the flet enters Hyperspace.

"Good Captain, COme and tell me when Weve Reched Planit Helfory."

Jay-ton-wan goes to his corters to try and find some thing.

"Where is it? Ah found it"

He has found some kind of Labtop, he soon turns it on, then a large Holografic Image appers in the room.

"Computer Bring up a holo Map of the Transtosha System"

The Small computer Brings up a Holomap of the Transtosha System. there are five Planits, Planit Gola, a lage Gas planit with four Moons, Planit Helfory, a smaller Planit, that sems Mostly macanicle exsept for the Small lakes, Planit Boranis A large jungle Planit. Planit Romena, a Med sized Planit that looks like it is mostly Covered in a city. And then Planit Yonder, an ice planit.

"Computer Bring Up infomation on Planit Helfory."

Thecomputer beeps a little bit then Begins to talk.

"Planit Helfory. Current Spices, Droniun, Planit Serface, Dessert Sands, Covered with Plenty of Metle Trees, Small lakes filled with Salt water exsist on the Planit, Planit Population ,178 thousend Poeple."

"Computer, Bring Upcurrent Location of Jedi Master Joe-Barricks"

The computer soon retuns to the large Map of the galixsy then rotates to a small planiton the outer relm.

"Location Fond.Planit Kessel"

"Send Transiton."

Soon the large Holomap Dissapers and a hologram of an R2Unit Comes up.

"P-17? Wheres master Barricks?'

"BEEP POING BEEP BEEP"

"Oh, I See, Can you send him a massage for me?"

"DEPP BEEP BOP"

"Ok, Start Message Trasmiton Now"

"Master Barricks This Is Master Jay-Ton-Wan< Peaese Relay this massage to Corasonnt and the jedi Councle, Ive Resnetly Been Informed of a Battle Fleet Aproching the Transtosha System, I am Currntly on my way their To see as to what this battle Fleet is, I may need for some assitasns and ask FOr helo from as meny Jedi as possible,to fight this deadly Threat. I ask that you come And Help. Transmiton End"

"DEPP, BEEP BEEP BOP BEEP"

"Thank you P-17, make sure that he gets that Transmitton."

"BEEP,BOOT"

P-17 Dissapers and soon the holo map Reappers.

"Off"

The Computer Turns off. Then a wissle Comes over the inercome

"Sir, We are appoching the Transtosha System, Shall We drop out of Hyperspace?"

" Yes tell the fleet to Drop out of Hyperspace, I'll be on the brige In a minete."

He leaves his corters.

[jadeskywalker]

Keria and General Rayr land near Keria's aunts home on Coreilla. As she walked closer to the door she noticed that the door was unlock. She pulled out her blaster and looked at the General.

" She always keeps her doors locked. That was the number one rule. " Keria said as she walked inside.

As she looked around the room, the place was tore up. Keria walked up the stairs to her aunts bedroom. She opened the door and started to back away. Keria called for General Rayr. When she saw him walk up the stairs, " I think whoever was looking for her, found her. " she says as she walked to her bedroom closet.

Keria pulls out a box and kicked the wall in. Keria reaches inside the hole of the wall and pulls out her aunts pack.

" She told me if anything happened to her to kick that spot in and there would be a surprise. " Keria said as she opened up the pack. Keria saw files and disks in there. Then she saw a hologram message that was from her aunt.

" Keria

Forgive me for never telling you the truth about something about your parents. Your mother died to do the right thing for the Republic and you. Your mother found out that your father was Darth Thrax spy. She was going to report him and take you for him to never see, again. He killed her on the spot before she even had a chace to walk away, Keria. Keria he will kill you if you turn your back to Darth Thrax. He is one of his most loyal general's.

Alot of power behind him, too. Your mother was stronger than him and with abilities she couldn't do anything. He has stayed in hiding and was going to wait til you old enough to take you with him and help Darth Thrax take over. This pack you have in your very hands, Keria, is what they are looking for. They have been planning on a huge super weapon and it will soon be completed. I think it is suppose to to wipe out cities.

Keria, do not let your gaurd down about General Maiax, it is the name he goes by, now. Becareful and not let him talk you into joining him. " the message shuts off as Keria looked at General Rayr.

" I say we take a look at these on our way back. " she says upset.

[Jay-Ton-Wan]

The republic Fleet drops out of hyperspace over Planit helfory, to run right into Stickers Fllet. Menny Ships Crash into outher ships before they can get out of Hyperspace.

" Sir I see the enamey Fleet" Said Captain Gordela
"Tell all forcies to attack them at once."

A masive Space battle bigins, every where fighters are being destoryed, and large ships are getting shot down and crashing into the Planit.

"sir, Weve Just lot The everlander!"

"Tell the Cordan and the outlander to incress Power on thier forword Firerpower!"

soon the engines of the ship Jay-ton-wan is on go out, and his ship begins to plummle to the planit.

"Sir, our power is gone! We'er going to crash!"

"All personel Brase for impact."

Jay-Ton-Wans ship falls to Planit Helfory, within minets the ship hits the planit. Jay-ton-wan is knoked out but not Dead.

[darth scourge]

General rayr puts his arm around Keria
'Its okay,I understand it must have come as a bit of a shock to you.Youre strong,you'll come out on top of everything,you got me by your side.What do you want to do now?'

[Jay-Ton-Wan]

Jay-ton-wan Wakens to a destoryed Ship. He relaizis The it must have been hours sence he was last awake. He looks Up and Sees a Sky full of ship Wrackage.

"SIr are you ok?"

Jay-ton-wan looks to see a few troops who are still alive.

"Do we know what has Happend Aobve Planit?"

"Sorry sir weve had no camunacation so far."

"then thiers No reson to stay here, Our best bet is to get away for the wrackage."

Jay-ton-wan leades his remaing troops out of the down ship, and come across Bodys of over a hundried Dead Solgers.

"My, Gog. LEt's Get down there"

He and his troops head down to the bodys, they have all been Blasted or Cut up..

"What could have done This? Lt. Keep close I have a bad feeling about...."

Jay-ton-wan looks to See that the Lt. Is gone. In fact all of the Serviving Troops are gone.

"Lt. ? Lt. Are you there?"

He bigns to look around, but sees no sight of any of the missing troops, However he soon sees an out line of a troop.

"Hang on trooper Stay there I'll come to you."

He runs to the trooper only to dicover SOmething horable.

"My, God, He's Dead! But hold on, No, It's a tra......"

Jay-ton-wan is knocked out and Draged away by 3 poeple.

[jadeskywalker]

Keria looked out the window.

" Hey, look at this. " Keria says as she pointed out the window. " I don't know them. " as she moved closer to the window.

" They know we are here! See, they are checking out our ship. "

" Looks like General Maiax sent some of his guys to come and get us. They cannot get this pack. We better blast our way out of here and get back to the fleet and see what is on these disks. " she says as she pulled out her blaster.

" Lets get moving. "

[darth scourge]

'Let them bring it on Keria,Ive had just about enough of those Sith'

Three sith troopers approach the two and one shouts

'Sir,Look what we got here'

A dark jedi dressed in a black robe appears

'Ah,very interesting.What do have there my dear' says the dark jedi

[jadeskywalker]

Keria looked at the Dark Jedi. " Oh, you mean this old thing? " she says smartly at him.

" I was just using it to pack some of my things. " she say as she starts putting it behinde her back.

" You will be killed for that pack. Darth Thrax and the General Maiax need some information in that pack to get Striker started on the plan we have." the dark Jedi says to the both of them. Keria gripped the bag tighter. Keria looked at General Rayr as she glances at the window and to their ship without saying a word, she wasn't ready for a fight, not right now at least, her main objective was to get that pack as far as she could away from them and see what the big plan was and have the Republic ready for what they have coming.

Keria had a confused looked on her face as she looked at General Rayr, wasn't sure what was coming at them both.

" Give me that pack! " he shouted in Keria's face and then took a few steps back after he did.

" Keria, your father said you will help or suffer your mother and aunt's fate." he said as he smiled with a laugh.

" I knew your mother, also. You look so much like her. Did your aunt tell that your mother was a Jedi Knight, til she left the order when she felt that she betrayed the Jedi, when she found out who your father was? " he laughed more seeing Keria's face as he walked around her.

" So much like her. "

" Shut Up! " she shouted at the dark jedi.

" This General Maiax you speak of maybe my father but when you see him. Make sure you tell him I will not help him let the Republic fall. " she says not taking her eyes off of him. She felt numb and tingly, she knew she was getting mad.

" The General will take it from you personally. Personally out of your dead fingers, when we take you two to see him. " he say laughing.

" And the General will have no regrets doing it either. "

That is what Keria had feared the most, she knew they had to get out and not play heriocs, either. She looked at Gerneral Rayr and the window as she jumped out the window and took out her blaster and starting shooting as she saw the General jump out behind her and was shooting and running to the ship.

" Don't shoot them, we need them alive, those are our orders. " the dark jedi says to the troopers.

" It isn't over, yet, General. Looks like they are going to follow. General, get us out of here. Lets make a clean getaway and see what is important about these disks. They are not going to kill us, they need us alive and I will start looking and see what I can find out. " she says as she watches the dark jedi walk out of the house and boarded on his ship and the General took the ship up.

[darth scourge]

As the ship was in orbit,the ships sensors went off.General Rayr looks at the panel

'Oh no the Sith interdictor ship has us in its tractor beam.Looks like they got us Keria'

[jadeskywalker]

" That was a fast trip. "

[darth scourge]

'They could have used a cloaking device.I bet they've been here the whole time'

[jadeskywalker]

" Yeah, I should have known. " she said.

" I just don't want then to get it. " she says sadly.

[darth scourge]

'Dont worry,it seems like you got yourself a jedi holocron,they are usually Sith proof.'

A crashing is heard and the ship stops.After a few minutes a legion of Sith troops enter a point theur weapons at the two.

A disfigured human walks in.He has half a metal head with one red eye wearing a black razor studded armor cuirass with a lightsaber hanging on his side.

'Darth Thrax'

Darth Thrax walks over to General Rayr and slaps him in the face,then walks over to Keria and stares at her for a minute.

'Take their gear and put them in the dungeon'

Darth Thrax walks off

[jadeskywalker]

" I hope it is sith proof. " she says as she watched them take it from her and took the two to the dungeon.

[Jay-Ton-Wan]

Meanwile back on Planit Helfory, Jay-ton-Wan has an rude awakening as he has ben Cut in the back with a lightsaber.

"Ah, What the.."
"awake now i See, Good, I was hoping to see you before your exacustion."

Jay-ton-wan looked up to See Striker.

"You!"
"Yes, Vary interresting how you defeted two of my Finist bount Hunters. But i aser you it won't happen agein."
"My, Homeworld, If i found out your toorps Killed one Inasent...Ah"

He is Cut in the back By Strikers Red Lightsaber.

"You have no Idea do you? What i do to day will Change the Futer, Bring about the End of the Galixsy."
"What ever your plan is, YOu will not win, Jedi Forcis Above this Planit are..."
"All ready gone. after About 34 of my remaing ships left, the Others came down and Looked for you, And found no Trace, They currntly beleve you are Dead."
"But, howlong has this world....."
"Been on the side of the sith, About 7 months, But thanks to me, your foolish Jedi Frends will never figer out we are here. And in less then 3 days over 4,000 Ships will attack Coruscant Uterly destroying it, Its a good thing 3,500 of them are Here now"
"No, i wont let you.."
"no I have some optsions Let."
"When all else failes What are you going to do, FIght? Ha, Fighting is for the week, The Stupit, Thats Why i have an army to fight for me."

He cuts into Jay-ton-wans Back once more.

"Interresting Creasers Reptilens, They can't Heal Scars or Cuts, But when a lumb is cut off or blast off, they can just Grow it Back, I wonder dose that include your Heads."
"No, as long as one of the three reptilen Brain Lives a Reptilen can Grow back allmost anything."
"your a paftic man Jedi, I hope that sarlack will have fun eating you tommaro."

Striker begins to walk way.

"Whats that matter Can't Finsh a job your Self?"

Striker stops, Turns arouns and Cuts off of of Jay-ton-wans Arms. He then Gose out the Prison door. Seconds later Jay-ton-wans Arm has Fully Grown Back, But he is too Week to stuggle and passis out.

[darth scourge]

In the cell General Rayr just heard a conversation with which he recognised a voice.

'Jay-Ton-Wan is that you?'

The General shouts to Keria

'That sounded like Jay-Ton-Wan'

[Edgeomatic]

Master Jaski's and Master Fisto's battle ship enters Dantooine's atmosphere, shaking a bit on the way down. It comes to a gentle landing in the hanger of the Jedi Temple. The two knights come out of the ship and walk to the council rome. The two both bow down humbly. Ayn Fisto steps up to the center of the room and faces the council.

"Masters, we come here bringing disturbing news from the Sith War. We have found out that a sentient named "Striker" is Darth Thrax's current apprentice. We have not found the where abouts of him though.", Ayn says.

Suddenly, a Bothan Jedi Master named Master Irms Daynlik spoke, "This is both good and troubling news. We have found more information on Darth Thrax, yet we do not know his location."

"Were shall we go next masters?", Ayn asks.

"We do not know yet, Jedi Fisto. Ask your Commander Keria Donavan. She will brief you on where to go next.", says Master Daynlik.

"Yes, Master. Thank you for letting us have an audience with you and may the force be with you through these troubling times." Ayn says while bowing down.

The Jedi Fisto and Jedi Jaski leave the Temple and go outside to the hanger by their ship. Placing a hologram comm in front of them, Jedi Fisto goes in the hologram's view and holo-comms Commander Keria.

"Commander Donovan, Master Jaski and I have just informed the Council of Darth Thrax's apprentice, Striker. They have instructed us to ask you where we are to go next.", says Ayn Fisto.

[Jay-Ton-Wan]

"Master Jaski and Master Fisto, go to helfory, go to helfory."

Jay-ton-wan lade in the cell half dead, Striker had come back severl times and did more Dammage to him.

"it's no use they are to far out of range, I may be contacting them, But I can't tell, I need to rech some one else."

Suddenly Jay-ton-wan Snecis Three other's, He knew their FOrce Powers Vary well, He reched out and tryed to contact them.

"General Rayr, Admiral Keria, you must come to Helfory, Please I need (Gasp) Help. Please. Keria you must Hear me."

He then senics that they too are in trobble, He relizis They need Just as much help as him, He desides to contact the one other Person he can.

"Both....Help me Please, I need Hel....You must come to helfory...Help Ple....."

Jay-ton-wan Passis Out, then Striker Comes back into the room.

"Its time for your Exacution. Take him."

Two Sith comeinto the room and take Jay-ton-wan away, before Leving Striker suddnely Feels Something.

"Keria.....At last,"

He then walks out Preparing for something, He walks past what looks like someone of Importence.

"Make Sir the Planit Killer is Ready, I know just what Planit to test it on."

Elsewhere halfway across the Galixsy A lone Reptilen Bounty Hunter Hears a message in his Head.

"Both....Help me Please, I need Hel....You must come to helfory...Help Ple....."
"Jay-Ton?"

the Reptilen Knows instently what to do

"Computer Set Corse for Planit Helfory at once!"

[jadeskywalker]

Keria stood up and walked over to where General Rayr was standing. " He shouldn't be here...could he? " she says as she looked up at him.

" Nevermind don't answer that...look at us. I wonder how are Jedi friends luck is going at the Jedi Council? " she says as she heard a door open and the gaurds standing and saluting suddenly. Keria turned her back to the bars as she rolled her eyes at the thought of who it was. She knew who it was as she looked at General Rayr and the look she had on her face, he knew Keria knew who it was. She sat back down on the floor.

" Keria, so good to see you, daughter. " she says.

She didn't answer him, she acted like he wasn't there.

" Gaurds get the binders on them. We are going to take my daughter and the General to witness Jay-Ton-Wan's excution. " he says laughing. " Nothing like a good excution. " he says as the gaurds had Keria, putting the binders on the two of them. He walks up to Keria.

" My daughter, you remind me of your mother. " he says as Keria pulls her face away from his hand.

" You maybe my father, but I will not help you out. You killed my mother and my aunt. I don't like you! " she said to him.

General Maiax punched her in the face. " You will not talk to me that away, again. Get them moving the excution is about to start. " he says as he started walking away and the gaurds taking Keria and General Rayr to the excution of their friend.

Keria got off her knees and started following them. Keria walked watching his every move. She felt angry but also sad the fact that this was her father. A man of pure evil. She even wondered if they would be joining the excution.

[darth scourge]

In the Sith Interdictor ship Dart Thrax stands in his observation platform.

'My Lord the execution is going to take place soon'

'Who gave the order to give the execution'

'Oh,my lord Commander Crix gave the order'

'Send him to me'

'Yes my lord'

Commander crix walks into Darth Thrax's platform

'Yes my lord'

Darth Thrax clenches his fingers together whilst Commander Crix holds his throat.All of a sudden Commander Crix chokes whilst a snapping sound is heard from his neck and drops down dead.

'nobody gives orders for executions,except me'

'Admiral we have been offered a large sum of money from Lowki the hutt on Lok.the prisoners will be sold,we dont need them.set your course for Lok'

[Cassus Fett]

*Master Jaski, seeing another Jedi who he knew* "Master Starlighter, do you know where Master Vandar is?" *looking at his old friend* "It was he i came to speak to but i havent been able to find him or sense him"

[jadeskywalker]

General Maiax approaches Darth Thrax as the gaurds walked up with Keria and General Rayr.

" General, I see your trap worked to get Admiral Donavan and General Rayr. Good, cause I have something for them. "

" All of them excuted. " the General says.

[darth scourge]

Darth Thrax replies

'Yes they are,I was going to sell them to Lowki the Hutt but since the Hutt enjoys executions hes payed us to let him feed them to the Sarlacc on Lok.Send a division down to assist the execution'

[jadeskywalker]

" Great. " Keria says to General Rayr as she smiled at the thought of them maybe not being to get into the data.

" The money better be well worth it. " she says.

[Jay-Ton-Wan]

Elsewhere. , Jay-ton-wan was on some kind of Transport ship. He was badly wounded, He had no idea where he was, but suddenly He felt something.

"Why are you still here?"
"Well I did Not want to miss your Exacution. Were takeing you to the sarlack Pit, I hear a few of your Fends May be there."

Jay-ton-wan trys to stand up, But he is too weakend to move much.

"You may have the upperhand now, But the Jedi will...."
"Jedi? their order is a fadeing light in the dark, Corrupt, Aragent, They Must be Punished."

Jay-ton-wan suddenly sees a window, He Sees that hes no longer on Helfory.

"Do you like it, Planit Lok is a Vary intersting Place."

"What howlong have we been here?"
"Well We desided to Bring you Hear sooner becase someone tryed to Spring you."
"Who? Where?"
"Don't know, he took down over 400 Sith FIghters and took out 3 Capitle Ships, Hes vary powerful. You know him?"

Jay-ton-wan could feel him Probing his Mind, But he was to Weak to stop him

"Ah, so it is true. The Uncilable Dose exsist. Hard to Beleve he's a Reptilen, and your Bother, I would never have Geussed."
"He will find me, and Help me bring you down!"
"Oh, I don't think so, You see He along with the Rest of the Republic will be too Bissy Weping for their Fallin Capitle."
"No! you haven't..."
"No. Weve deside to Hold off the attack on Coruscant, until after you are Dead, You see your comrads Will not beable to help you, Becase they will be watching, and after you are Dead, it will be thier turn."
"You...will...not win....your Master still has..."

Striker laghs with happyness....

"oh Didn't I tell you, Before you Go in the Sarlac will have One other thing to Snack on, Darth Thrax"
"ha, your...evenmore of...a fool...he will...Strike you down"
"well, Thats what I thought at first, If he wasn't all ready dieing. you see Last week an Unidentfied Assain Attack My master, And tho He dosen't know it, he was hit with a Deadly Poison, No cuer for it. And useing the force, Only Strangthins it."
"i...don't Beleve .......that."
"well you'll Find out at the exacution wount you."

Jay-ton-wan trys to talk more, But Passis out.

[darth scourge]

....General Rayr and Admiral Donavan are being transported to Lok.After a long journey General Rayr wakes up.

'Oh my head hurts'

'Shut up' said a Sith trooper who got him out of his cell and took him into a large palace.Keria wasn't anywhere to be seen.

'Take them in 1 at a time.The Reptilian should be here soon aswell' shouted the Sith Commander.

General Rayr was took through the magnificent looking palace to a large throne room where Lowki the Hutt was sitting(or laying if ya wanna get technical).

'HA MY SARLACC CHEW TOYS HAVE ARRIVED.WHERE ARE THE OTHER TWO'

'They will be here soon.The girl will be brought in in a minute'

'AH GOOD.A FEMALE.I MIGHT KEEP HER FOR MY OWN'

'I dont think so' replied General Rayr

General Rayr is taking to the lower prison by two Gamorrean guards.

[Jay-Ton-Wan]

Suddnly Darth Thrax, Striker, And General Maiax Enter over A large Platform over the Sarlac Pit.

Darth Thrax: Bring in the two Humen jedi, they will watch thire Friend die First!

Everyone walks into the Sarlac Arena, Lowki the Hutt wispers into Striker.

"I thoght the poison would take afect by now?"
"Don't worry in a menit it will happen"

He then wispers to General Maiax.

"Make sure their arn't any Unixspected Surpirsis"
"Yes sir."

Below on a Platfor Leading out to the Sarlack, A sith trooper Brings out jay-ton-wan. Jay-ton-wan Is badly brosed, and has scars all over hi. Striker Makes a hand jester and the sith troopers let go and retun to the sold Ground. Jay-ton-wan lays on the platform.

" OH, IT'S A REPTILEN JEDI WHOS GOING TO DIE, PERFECT."
"yes' and soon the rest of the jedi will die too"

Darth Thrax makes a jester with his hand and the troops begin to push him in. But suddenly...

"Tell him striker!"

Everyone stops, Darth Thrax Dose not under stand what Jay-ton-wan means.

" What dose he Mean Strike......" Darth Thrax Suddenly falls to the ground.
"Well master, you see it is time for a new sith to rise"

He rasis his hand and the now nerly dead Darth Thrax Flots above the sarlack Pit.

"Let it be known, that today, Darth Thrax is the first this the Sarlac Eats, and that today is the Rise Of Darth Zodac"

Darth Zodac (Stircker) Lets go of Darth Thrax, and He falls and is eaten by the sarlack, Darth Thrax is dead.

"Now. let the exacution Countinue..."

The Sith appoche Jay-ton-wan.

[Edgeomatic]

While walking to his starfighter, Ayn Fisto feels a disturbance in the Force. "Lok", he whispers to himslef. He makes a dash to the starfighter and sets the Hyperspace coordinates to Lok. After a couple of hours the starfighter arrives right over Lok's atmosphere. The ship descends and Ayn senses Jay-Ton-Wan in a small armada of skiffs. He lands the starfighter a couple of meters away from the skiff. Soldiers start noticing it and begin to open fire. Ayn uses force visibilty to make himslef invisible from the weak-minded soldiers. He jumps aboard the skiff unoticed and sees Jay-Ton-Wan and the Sit coming towards him. Going beside Jay-Ton, Ayn draws his purple and yellow lightsaber.
"Your reign has come to an end Sith."

[Jay-Ton-Wan]

Darth Zodac (Stircker) Sees him:

"Ah another Jedi, THis is in deed Impressuf, I did not hink there was another jedi here"

Darth Zodac (Stircker) Makes a juster with his hand and 13 Tusken Raders are relased out into the platform.

"Kill him"

[Edgeomatic]

((o0c:Ummmm....Darth Thrax wasn't supposed to die yet.))

[jadeskywalker]

As all the action was going on. Keria saw something on the ground and approaching all of them as everyone one was distracted. Keria noticed who it was and said nothing because she knew who he was going for.

as Striker was approaching Jay-Ton-Wan. The figure attacked Striker.

[darth scourge]

the figure that attacked Striker was none other than Darth Thrax.Shocked that he was still alive Striker ignited his Lightsaber.

Darth Thrax ignited his lightsaber

'I thought id let you think you killed me you weak pathetic fool.Im immune to poison and I can manipulate a Sarlacc with my power of the Dark side'

Looking shocked Striker went for Darth Thrax but Darth Thrax used to the Dark side to grab Striker and threw him into the air whilst jumping up and impaling him with his lightsaber.Striker fell to the floor on his knees

'No dont kill me'

Darth Thrax laughed and cut the head of Striker cleanly off.The end of Striker.

a group of Dark jedi appeared

'Kill them all' Darth Thrax ordered them before jumping on his Sith speeder to go back to his command ship to try and activate Kerias package.

So dark jedi and Sith troopers face the team on the skiffs above the hungry sarlacc.

'Hey Jedi Fisto or Jaski,dont suppose you brought a spare lightsaber'