The Betrayal of Obi-Wan Kenobi (FULL SCRIPT)

[son of lucas]

Click. (http://www.geocities.com/mbredeson/Episode_III_The_Betrayal_of_Obi_Wan/Final_Draft.htm)

I hope everyone enjoys it.

[Erick Landrider]

I'd say it's one of the best Episode III scripts that I have seen.

[James T. Skywalker]

I've gotten through part of it, it's well written.

Only quarrel I have is that Dodonna is a Separatist in the story when all sources (Canon and EU) say that he served the Republic faithfully for many years before being asked by Mon Mothma to lead the Yavin forces for the Rebellion.

And, Depa Billaba being on the Council. Even Hyperspace sources have said that she won't be there (not to mention that she went quite insane in the EU during the Clone Wars).

But it is quite good so far otherwise.

EDIT: Finished reading. I like the writing; the story, don't so much agree with. But as fan fiction, it's decent enough.

~JTS