The Last Apprentice - Discussion.

[Zane Marit]

For those that might be interested...I wrote a little story on what I think might happen to Anakin in EPIII. If you want to check it out I posted the first part in the Coruscant theater forum.

This is a rough draft...and I admit it will need a little more work. I just wanted to get it out there to get some opinions. Let me know what you think.

Also you can check it out at

http://www.starwarz.com/clonewarseu/fanfic...pprentice00.htm (http://www.starwarz.com/clonewarseu/fanfiction/apprentice/apprentice00.htm)

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[James T. Skywalker]

Shouldn't discussion of your story remain in the Coruscant Theater board, since fan fiction is not considered under the Expanded Universe?

This isn't meant as a slight to you, or to your story, it's just that I never knew of fan fiction discussions on the EU board.

~JTS

[Zane Marit]

Sorry if I confused anyone...I just wanted to let people know I posted my fic in the theater...I am not sure how many people actually cruise that forum so I just went to the forums I usually go to to let people know where it was. Again sorry for any confusion.

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[Zane Marit]

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[Zane Marit]

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[Zane Marit]

Anyone have any thoughts???


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[Jacen Solo]

Hey Zane,

I thought your story was great!! Perhaps the best Episode III fan script I've read thus far. I was surprised that Anakin himself had a Padawan learner ... I never really thought of that possibility. I also liked how Count Dooku exposed the Supreme Chancellor as Darth Sidious, followed by his decisive "let's end this."

My main question as I was reading was, where is Padme? Was she totally out of the picture? Or were you mainly focusing on Anakin's role in the Clone Wars?

This story gets five stars!! And Zane, if you would, please go read my Episode III fan script. I've completed the first part (I think I'm going to do it in three parts) and I could really use some input.

[Zane Marit]

WOW!!! style_emoticons/<#EMO_DIR#>/blush.gif Thanks for the high praise. I just kind of decided that I wanted to see if I had any talent at this sort of thing. I have never written anything before and just wanted to give it a shot. I have read a lot of the EU books and there are a few that quite honestly...I felt that with the tools the authors had at their disposal, I could have done better. Having written this I now know how hard it can be.

There are certain parts that I am not happy with and little things I want to change. As for Padme and the birth of the twins...I definately could have put that in had I wanted to make it longer, but I wanted to focus purely on Anakins turn to the Dark side and the beginning of the Jedi purge. I have had others ask me about Padme and I think that I might actuallygo back and add that in.

Thanks again

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[Zane Marit]

By popular demand style_emoticons/<#EMO_DIR#>/tongue.gif the revised and completed version is now up. Let me know what you think.

Thanks

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[Zane Marit]

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[Zane Marit]

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[Darth Vegas]

Hey interesting read so far, it brings a different light to Episode 3 I hadn't really thought about.

I'm working on that banner, give me at least until next week, I'll have it done by then.

[Zane Marit]

Thanks Bond...I might need another banner...I am working on a new story now titled "Knight Trials". The summary is under the coming soon thread and the first part is up in its own thread...Let me know what you think.

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[Brian]

Check out The Last Apprentice at TCWUS:

http://www.starwarz.com/clonewarseu/fanfiction/



Zane, it would help if you put a link to the story in the first post of this thread...

[Zane Marit]

I edited the post and added the link. This thread was started way before the story got posted at TCWUS and the thought never occured to me to add a link here.

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[Brian]

Originally posted by Zane Marit@Jun 27 2003, 06:02 PM
I edited the post and added the link. This thread was started way before the story got posted at TCWUS and the thought never occured to me to add a link here.

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i was actually talking about posting a link to the story as it is posted here in the Coruscant theatre. style_emoticons/<#EMO_DIR#>/hehe.gif

[Zane Marit]

Oh...I see.


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[Zane Marit]

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