The Vile Bard (Cole's poetry)

[ForceFlow]

Wotcher, I write alot of poetry and though I would like to share it. Alot of my poems are either about love or are very dark. though in retrospect i am not a very negative person. so i hope my writings does not put me off as emo, crying for attention, etc. also i do not follow any rules of poetry writing its all mostly freestyle

-Cole-

Running

Keep On Running Faster And Faster,
Away From Your Problems That You Can't Escape,
World Is To Harsh For Me,
Can't Stay Here Much Longer,
Keep On Running Faster And Far Away
Keep On Running And Maybe You Will Manage To Fly Away,
I Can't Spread My Wings There Weighted Down,
I Am Falling Again Falling Again Deeper Into Harsh Reality I Need To Escape.


when i find more i feel are not to bad then i will post soon.

Rage more
Cole

[ForceFlow]

okay i found something on the positive side to post. i wrote this to me girl.

Illusion
This must be a dream for life cannot be so kind to me,
my love is surely an illusion sent to torture me,
but if this is a dream may I never wake
I pray my soul the gods to take,
and
leave me here in my bliss
to
feel my love's wonderful kiss.

*hides*

[Darill Cyllem]

:clap:
Thanks for sharing, Cole! :)
The poetry i write is mostly free form also, so that is a style i enjoy. And poems are definitely a good medium for expressing emotions - especially dark ones, which we all have. Hope you'll share more.

[flo fett]

Great stuff Cole, always nice to read something new! I hope you'll post up more stuff soon :superhappy:

[Cassus Fett]

nice cole

[ForceFlow]

thanks guys ^__^
this one is called

Blood Been Bade
Cold Steal Slits Me Wrists
I Cry Out In The Morning Mist
I Had Not Done What Me Master Bade
Tis Now Me Blood Be Paid

Unforgiving Razr
Crimson blood sliding down
the faces of the unforgiving
razors ripping at there eyes
crimson colouring the white canvas
telling tales of sin and fire
hearts black as tar
flesh cold as ice

[ForceFlow]

this one is about how a knight or samurai must feel after loosing there lord or Daimyo

Someone to Serve
I need Someone To Serve
I Have No One To Answer To
I Have No Master
No Leader
No Man To Control Me
But Who Do I Serve?
I Am A Warrior
With No Mission
No Idea On What My Purpose Is
Should I Let Others Tell Me What To Do?
Shall I Be My Own Master?
I Need Someone To Serve
With No One To Serve
Am I Even A Warrior?


When you are a Warrior

When You Are A warrior
You Must Be Strong In Battle
You Must Put Your Heart Aside
So you May Fight
And Do As You Must
When You Are A Warrior
You Must Be Unwavering
In Your Faith
It Brings You Strength
No Matter What You Beleive
When You Are A Warrior
There Is Much You Leave Behind
The Life You Once Knew
Is Gone Forever
When You Become A Warrior
Your Life Starts Anew

Dawn Rise

Dawn rises on the new day,
A lone warrior stands on a cliff top,
ready for the fight,
Not far away
A farmer rises from his bed
taking his pitchfork
he steps outside his door,
And on the horizon
He sees the lone warrior
Greeting the new day
He takes a bow in her direction
For he knows of how she is no more
And a statue is all that remains.

Frustration Song

Coming To The Breaking Point
Seeing No Way Out
Feeling As If The Sky Is Falling
I Just Need To Shout
Holding Back My Anger
Keeping Away The Rage
I Need To Yell
"Go To Hell"
I Know That Is Wrong
My Frustration Song

[Darill Cyllem]

Dawn Rise is really very nice - made me think of a very specific image.

I liked the last one, too... feels like it just rolled out of you one day.
:hugs:

[flo fett]

That was lovely cole, you have a knack for imagery. :superhappy:

[Cassus Fett]

Brilliant again

[ForceFlow]

thanks guys ^__^
this one does not have a name its just frustration and thoughts about me mum.

you don't understand me, you tell me I follow when really I lead, you tell me I conform when I start things, you tell me I'm selfish when all I do is help you, I work so hard you push me down, I struggle up you keep telling me no, All I do is love you listen to your thoughts of suicide, if you knew the real me you would throw me away, hate everything I am and what i've done, you say you accept respect those different then you but if you knew I was gay our relationship would be through, if you knew i was a witch you would say I never did exist, "what? nicole? who is that? I don't have a daughter my only daughter is dead" you say your a kid its time to have fun how can I be a kid when I am raising your sons? every time I try to break away you pull me back to you I can't take this anymore, your dyeing your sick your hurting for years, you don't even see my pain filled tears, even though your getting worse every day, i don't want to be the one that pays, so the day I leave you all behind you wont be using me again I'll show myself to you and you'll see this nightmare of a daughter this disaster this failure I have become.

I just need to break away from you.



its very long XD

[Cassus Fett]

Good.. not too about what you could call that.

[ForceFlow]

thanks Cassus ^_^

this one i wrote was inspired by the song Sound of The Drum by Suzanne Palmer

obviously the title is Sound Of The Drums

In a World So Cold
Lives A Girl So Young
And All She knows Is
The Sound Of The Drum

War Is Waged In Her
Terror Filled Eyes
Death Comes
Wearing Every Disguise
And All She Will Ever Know
Is The Sound Of The Drum

Dark Clouds Blot Out
Her Sun Filled Days
Her Life Goes By
In A Blood Shed Haze
And All She Will Ever Know
Is The Sound Of The Drum

The Sound Of The Drum
Is Her Mother's Soft Hum

The Sound Of The Drum
Is Her Father's Laugh

The Sound Of The Drum
Was Her Birth

The Sound of The Drum
Was Her First Love

The Sound Of The Drum
Was Her Death

The Sound Of The Drum
Was Her Final Breath

There Once Was A Girl
Who Grew Up In A
Time Of War

Her Familiy Died
A Heavy Burden To Be Bore,
She Was So Very Young

And All She Knew

Was The Sound Of The Drum

[Darill Cyllem]

I don't know the original song, so can't compare... but this gives me a sad feeling (which is the goal, i think).

[ForceFlow]

I don't know the original song, so can't compare... but this gives me a sad feeling (which is the goal, i think).


the original song is not well known i should have thought to post it-so i shall do so now this is the original lyrics by Suzzane Palmer

She sits alone in an empty room
And she don't know what the hell to do
Not knowin' her past or where she's from
All she knows is the sound of the drum

I can feel her pain when I look in her eyes
Knowin' she wants to break down and cry
But she keeps holdin' on 'til the darkness is gone
And all she seems to hear is the sound of the drum

the poem is supposed to give off a sad type vibe because of the fact its about a young girl growing up in war times. thanks for the comment DC.

[Darill Cyllem]

Interesting... i like how you expanded on the theme from the song.

[ForceFlow]

writing a random poem right now cuz i am happy so it may not be darksided XD.

Life seems so hard to me
Sometimes I just forget to breath
I pray the gods would take me away
Here I go again living through my days
My night are Moonless and there is no light

The wind whispers
And the river howls
tells of better days to come
A light on the horizon
Dawn is coming
I can finally see the sun


kinda darksided i'll give but it kinda represents how i felt throughout the whole DYFS thing cuz when your involved with the Gov. not belonging to your parents and always scared its like eternal night with no moon then you see the sun and you know its done so thats just me expressing my happiness XD.

[Darill Cyllem]

A good transition between extreme feelings... captures how something that seems small can change how you feel really suddenly. :thumbs-up:

[ForceFlow]

bad mood = hatred poem

Relent and Regret

loyalty means nothing to me
truth means nothing to me
burn those sons of w-h-ores let them see
the darker side of me
throw away your broken words
toss aside your lies
we all see it is me you despise
forgive and forget?
you'll learn to relent and regret
I won't bid by the rules of petty men
so give up trying to get me to change then
*** -holes-s
liars
deceivers
in the like
i'll carry your heads on pikes
learn to respect or like i said
you'll learn to
relent
and
regret.

[ForceFlow]

A quick little thing i wrote i was in a very story like mood today XD

The Nightingale
In this time
and In this place
A story I must bestow with haste!
It was a stormy night
In a simple morgue
Our story here begins
All whom are home
Is a corpse beautician
The building creaks and sways
In this violent storm
The Beautician hums along
"We must make you pretty for those who come to mourn"
A young girl who died to soon
Lies on the table dead
Forever cought in her full bloom
In life she cought t the eye of every man
And envy of every woman
Simple death no blood left
The Police Left quite perturbed
When our story is done you will be left
quite disturbed
The beauticion finishes his art
Then up the stairs he goes
To his parlor where a warm fire and sherry awaits
Putting up his feet he sips his drink and goes his good read
When the voice of a nightangale strong and sweet
caused him to jump straight to his feet
Beautiful singing wrose from the cellar of the morgue
where riggered corpses lie in wait
He walks to the stairs to listen
His curiostiy would seal his fate
From the cellar she wrose a wraith an illusion a dream
So perfect
So slender and beautiful
Like nothing he had ever seen.
She danced to him with incredible grace
A pale hand she laid on his face
She consumed him in a tight embrace
Her teeth met his neck cutting in like butter
soft and swift her actions were
his body drained of blood death took its loving hold
She carried him like he were but a child
To leave him in the place of his art.
Leaving the home the Nightangale fled
When the caretakers of the dead would come to see
The beauticion gone to beyond the world
They would tell of a Nightangale
Whom died in her full bloom
But lived forever more
Thristing on the poor
My Children
My Friends
this is where are story ends
But warning be to all of ye
When you walk out at night
You hear the voice of the Nightangale
Make yourself scarce from sight
Because legend says she kills you with her
sweet strong voice
Her beauticion follows her a lover on her arm
Be wary of the Nightangale she surely means you harm.

[Sarah-Leia]

Lovely poetry Cole! Keep writing!

[ForceFlow]

Thanks Sara ^_^

Lord almighty i am so happy my poem on the last page Nightingale may be getting published!!!

This one is simple it has not title but it was to me mates who are dating so its about them

Look to the stars
They tell a tale
Of two lovers
Who's love will never fail
To the north you see
A maiden fare
With sword in hand
She defends whats theirs
To the west you see
A lad bold as brass
Anyone crosses him he kicks there ass
There meeting unconventional
There love blossomed to a shine
There bond shall last
Until the end of time.


Changes for Better Or For Worse

I'm Changing
Into things I don't understand
My mind warps everyday
My beliefs unsure uncharted
I hurt my friends
And I don't know why
I hurt them physically
And I like it
I hate my mother
I never knew I could
Everyday I feel different
Stronger then I ever was
I don't understand myself
And In Turn
I am misunderstood
There are those who try to change me
I hate you all
Your deaths shall not be swift they shall be
Painful
You call me evil
Well maybe I am
But you, all of you wont change me
never
There are those who try to help me
Guide me on my path in life
They are few
But I care for you all
There is one I love
She is my only true companion
And Trusted one
My world is changing
I am changing
For better or for worse
I let myself go with instinct
Shall I choose a darker path?
Instead of the ones lit with light?
Maybe i shall and If I do
I Embrace it all
I am changing for better
Or for worse.

[Darill Cyllem]

Two very contrasting poems!

The first one is very sweet - did you show / read it to your friends?
Lots of raw emotion in the second
:hugs:

[ForceFlow]

Two very contrasting poems!

The first one is very sweet - did you show / read it to your friends?
Lots of raw emotion in the second
:hugs:

yus I did Ashely the female depicted in the poem nearly broke down crying it was so cute. her betrothed Chris was shocked into silence because i'd never shown him my writing let alone one about his and ashely's love. It was so sweet.

thanks ^_^ :hug::hug:

[Darill Cyllem]

^Excellent. I can image how touched they were. :)

[ForceFlow]

^_^

i wrote this to my little sister (bff like sister) Aly she is a year younger then me and I always speak to her like she is sweet.

My sweet warrior girl

Sister dear come sit with me
Listen as I tell you what once was and never will be
Sister sweet do not be scared
You are the only daughter who has dared
To live her life ungoverned by a man
To be yourself and make your stand
Where you come from is far from my home
Your people are different resistent to change
But you are the one who dared not be the same
Warrior blood runs thick through your veins
No matter your heritage
The wolves cry to you from there mountain home
They know you belong with them
You belong with us
Your spirit is beautiful untamed wild
Listen close my Warrior child
This world is harsh and cold to those like you
But hold true to your heart and there is nothing
You can't get through
People will challenge you but never change
Listen to the wolf bay at the moon
Follow there sound and Know there voices true
Embrace the warrior that lives within you

[Darill Cyllem]

That's great, Cole - a very sweet sentiment :)
Every young woman should have a big sister like you to remind them that they are strong.