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Darth Vegas
04-20-2003, 08:36 PM
This is just a little tease of an up and coming fanfic, I hope to God I'm right about my little comments pertaining to Episode 3, so spoilers may abound, beware, feel free to comment in this here discussion thread.

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STAR WARS: Ben Kenobi - A diary of the Clone Wars


Time: From the Battle of Geonosis to 15 years after Star Wars: Episode 2 - Attack of the Clones


Main Characters: Ben Kenobi, Anakin Skywalker, Bail Organa, Padme Amidala, Yoda, Mace Windu, Qui-Gon Jinn, Supreme Chancellor Palpatine, Count Dooku

Secondary Characters: Luke Skywalker, Owen and Beru Lars, Qui-Gon Jinn, R2-D2, C-3PO and many many more original characters.....

Summary: 15 years after the Battle of Geonosis, Old Ben Kenobi reminisces about his part in the clone wars and the events that lead up to his current status, and wonders what the future beholds.

Prologue:

15 years had passed since the battle of Geonosis, and in the aftermath of the events that soon followed Ben Kenobi found himself exiled on the desert world of Tatooine, a shadow of what he once was, formerly a great general of the Clone Wars, and a Jedi Knight, a practitioner of the Force, the fabric of the universe that had long since been forgotten.

Old Ben's face had withered over the years under Tatooine's harsh suns, his eyes set back around his deeply wrinkled face, his hair had grayed and thinned out, and his clothes were tattered rags, once the great flowing robes of a Jedi Knight, the kind commonly worn by those that were once a part of the order, before the Dark Times, before the Empire had risen from the ashes of the Clone Wars, and before Anakin Skywalker under the guidance of his new Master, Darth Sidious, who was also once a great Jedi himself, had destroyed the Jedi Order, and everything else that was once good and kind in the Galaxy, under that cold steel might of the Empire.

But they had only achieved such goals in their own domain, and the few systems brave enough to continue the fight against the corrupt government did so, from the political arena and on the battle field.

The old man stood out on a cliff overlooking the dune sea his hands at his hips hanging from his belt his lightsaber hanging loosely nearby. The Lar's Homestead appeared as just a sparkle of light under the high noon suns.

His gaze was fixed out on the young boy who with the guidance of his uncle worked on fixing a moisture vaporator. With a wry smile on his face he turned and walked away from the view, he was always watchful over the Lar's nephew, Luke Skywalker, the son of his fallen apprentice, the boy had just recently celebrated his 13th birthday.

Ben Kenobi kept a slow pace as he walked back toward his hut, he thought about the future, and the wise guidance his old Master Qui-Gon Jinn, he wondered how he would ever be able to redeem his past mistakes and wondered if the Force had a will of it's own concerning Anakin Skywalker.

He deeply regretted training the boy, he always carried with him the guilt of what the boy had now become. But he saw hope in the young boy Luke Skywalker, and his twin sister Leia, who grew up on Alderaan in the house of Bail Organa, hope remained that by Luke Skywalker's hand, and by Leia Organa's words, the galaxy would one day be freed from tyranny, and balance brought back to the Force.

Ben reached the his home and entered through the front door, ducking slightly as he entered, being converted from an old storage shed, the doorway was bit short.

The home was quiet simple, a small kitchen and a table, and a bed to lay his head, and a moisture vaporator set outside, which Ben used to grow small crops in an underground bin.

He removed his cloak and set it gently on his bed, placing his prized lightsaber on top of it as he turned away and walked towards a small box which laid buried in the corner, he dug it out, and took quick noticed of the shiny handle of his Anakin's lightsaber, the former Senator Padme Amidala had asked Ben to pass on to Luke at the right time as his father requested.

He moved it aside, and took out a small round device, a holorecorder, he covered the box back up, and set the recorder on the table, and sat in front of it, pressing a small button on the side.

The holorecorder flickered on, and a small blue visage of his younger self came on.

"I have successfully tracked the bounty hunter Jango Fett to the droid foundries on Geonosis...", the track played, it was the very message he had sent to Coruscant the day he tracked down Jango Fett to Geonosis.

Old Ben watched it all the way through, and thought back on the day the Clone Wars erupted, his actions, and what he felt and sensed through the Force, he pressed a small button, and began recording a new message, and started to speak, "Entry 1, a diary of the Clone Wars, the life and times of Ben Kenobi"....

padmeamidala
04-21-2003, 01:52 PM
Hey cool! I can't wait to read more....keep going!
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catwmnjedi
04-21-2003, 02:13 PM
<span style="color:purple">Yes, cool Bond!

I started one like this on another site... it's more right after his exile while he's still 30-something, when he's still in great pain over all that happened with the Jedi and Anakin. I considered posting it on GS also, but maybe I'll wait. Someone suggested to me to read parts of "Tatooine Ghost", which has excerpts of Obi-Wan's thoughts after his exile. You might check it out too, for reference.

Anyway... keep it up.. I'll read! </span>

Darth Vegas
04-21-2003, 05:36 PM
Originally posted by catwmnjedi@Apr 21 2003, 09:13 AM
<span style="color:purple">Someone suggested to me to read parts of "Tatooine Ghost", which has excerpts of Obi-Wan's thoughts after his exile. You might check it out too, for reference.
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Thanks for your comments, glad you liked it, and I've already read Tatooine Ghost, good read, I wish it had gone a little more into the Tusken Massecre and Old Ben's thoughts after his exile, but anything else probably would be considered possible spoilers for Episode 3, but it was a good read.

His comments about all this stuff in the OT are pretty vague, but enough to form an opinion on just what was going through Ben's mind, delving into his psyche, that's the idea here.

It'll go in and out between him telling the story, and us seeing the story, and the timeline jumps quiet a bit, and I pormise that there will be a few things pertaining to my view of Episode 3 in there, alot of people will disagree, but hopefully they won't start debating those things.

Anyhoo, I'll try to get the first chapter up pretty soon here.

kopernikuz
04-21-2003, 05:47 PM
Originally posted by Agent Bond A.K.A. TK-007@Apr 21 2003, 03:36 PM
but hopefully they won't start debating those things.

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Darth Vegas
04-21-2003, 06:21 PM
Save it for the spoiler section. style_emoticons/<#EMO_DIR#>/wink.gif

Lord Rocha
04-21-2003, 11:17 PM
Not only the signature is good. Also the fan fic is good.

Really Nice Job, Bond.

Darth Vegas
04-21-2003, 11:26 PM
Why thank you.

Chapter 1 will be up some time tomorrow or the next day, err maybe late tonight.

Lord Rocha
04-21-2003, 11:29 PM
Nice, the story is going to be chronological or will have some "swift returns" to the current reality of Kenobi ?.

I mean it really, that is good, I seldom post on this forum - except by the Episode III or Episode VII thread- so it must be very good.

Darth Vegas
04-22-2003, 01:02 AM
It'll go in between Old Ben living out on Tatooine a few years before ANH, and between his life during the Clone Wars.

Erick Landrider
04-24-2003, 12:54 AM
If hope you can write just as well as you debate. Early indications say "YES".

Darth Vegas
04-24-2003, 03:25 AM
Hehehe.

Most of these stories are just off the wall spur of the moment sorta things, so you never know when I'm gonna edit things out, put in new things, change little things around, and most of all, you enver know when I'm gonna post another chapter.

Chapter 1 posting shortly...

Darth Vegas
04-24-2003, 03:32 AM
Keep your discussion here, the other thread is stricktly for the fanfic, thank you: http://www.galacticsenate.com/index.php?ac...t=0#entry208674 (http://www.galacticsenate.com/index.php?act=ST&f=11&t=4534&st=0#entry208674)

Lord Rocha
04-27-2003, 01:16 AM
Nice work on Chapter I, Bond.

I really liked the details of how one of the Republic Assault Ships was destroyed.

The only thing I didnt like was that Anakin looks like a...hero. ???

Darth Vegas
04-27-2003, 02:02 AM
Originally posted by Lord Rocha@Apr 26 2003, 08:16 PM
The only thing I didnt like was that Anakin looks like a...hero. ???
More of a survivor, but he's just the fighter pilot, the great Jedi Knight we we're told he was in Classic Trilogy.

He did save the day in TPM afterall. style_emoticons/<#EMO_DIR#>/wink.gif But he won't be in this story, and Hayden's whining isn't going to influence me to write the character differently than Lucas himself has set up.

Lord Rocha
04-27-2003, 02:04 AM
Good then, proceed please. style_emoticons/<#EMO_DIR#>/smile.gif

Darth Vegas
04-27-2003, 02:05 AM
Originally posted by Lord Rocha@Apr 26 2003, 08:16 PM
I really liked the details of how one of the Republic Assault Ships was destroyed.
Yeah that was my version of the Super Star Deystroyer crashing into the Death Star, I didn't want Anakin to fly into the Federation ship again to deystroy it, so I just had the deystroyed ship crash into the other one, I'm probably going to edit that little, add more to it, we need to see the Neimodian commanders reaction to this, when he sees the big chunk of metal coming towards the ship, probably pisses on the floor er' something.

Darth Vegas
04-27-2003, 02:06 AM
Originally posted by Lord Rocha@Apr 26 2003, 09:04 PM
Good then, proceed please. style_emoticons/<#EMO_DIR#>/smile.gif
As soon as possible, I'm working on Chapter 3 of my other fan fic, and making some pics for this one.

Lord Rocha
04-27-2003, 02:06 AM
Yeah with more details of the disintegration of the ship and details of how chaotic was the crew at that moment.

Darth Vegas
04-27-2003, 02:07 AM
I was thinking of adding in a little gag with the battle droid crew floating out into space. style_emoticons/<#EMO_DIR#>/tongue.gif

Lord Rocha
04-27-2003, 02:09 AM
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Brian
05-01-2003, 04:06 PM
Check out this fan fic at TCWUS (http://www.starwarz.com/clonewarseu/). Click on the "Fan Fiction" link.

Darth Vegas
05-17-2003, 07:25 PM
Bump...ouch. :look:

Check out my fanfic here (http://www.starwarz.com/clonewarseu/fanfiction/bendiary/bendiary00.htm).

Darth Vegas
06-09-2003, 07:30 AM
Chapter 2 added to the thread, check it out!!!

Darth Vegas
06-10-2003, 09:58 AM
bump

Zane Marit
06-10-2003, 11:40 AM
Aside from the typos...Great story. Original idea thats off to a good start.

Darth Vegas
06-10-2003, 04:25 PM
I only use Micrsoft Wordpad, and it doesn't have a spell check or anything, and the spell checker here doesn't pick up on all the typos.

Don't worry, there's a Special Edition in the works, we'll do away with all those pesky typos--eventually.

Until then stay tuned...

sidious618
06-10-2003, 09:40 PM
Originally posted by TK-007@Jun 10 2003, 02:25 PM
I only use Micrsoft Wordpad, and it doesn't have a spell check or anything, and the spell checker here doesn't pick up on all the typos.

Don't worry, there's a Special Edition in the works, we'll do away with all those pesky typos--eventually.

Until then stay tuned...
is staying tuned

Darth Vegas
06-19-2003, 09:03 AM
Chapter 2 added to www.starwarz.com/clonewareu (http://www.starwarz.com/clonewareu)

Check it out: http://www.starwarz.com/clonewarseu/fanfic.../bendiary02.htm (http://www.starwarz.com/clonewarseu/fanfiction/bendiary/bendiary02.htm)

Darth Vegas
08-05-2003, 03:09 AM
chapter 3 coming soon...