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Snake_Judge
01-05-2008, 10:17 PM
one note this story is based ON the Detective comic universe not in it.

Some things are censored for this forum.


Chapter one: Origins
All is quiet in a desert on a distant planet. The wind blows calmly by and there is the distant sound of a city just off the horizon. Suddenly there is a large flash. After the flash there is a giant man standing where the flash had came from. He held his large Shepard’s crook in hand. He then began to speak.
“All who wield the powers are to pick one to be the heroes for a newly created planet, so is the will of the source and the Highfather Izaya”
In Vancouver Canada…..
A young man and his mom and dad are walking home from a trip to visit the site of the new Olympic stadium being built near by. They take a turn witch leads them to a deserted ally. The family had been arguing about the choices of the boy and how he planed on making a living after school previously before coming in to the ally.
About halfway threw the ally a man walks up to the family and sticks a gun to the wife’s head. He says to the father “you do what I say and the lady lives. If you don’t I will kill her.” The father being a brave and honorable man took the chance to throw a bunch at the crook. Unfortunately the man was quick and dodged the punch. The boy stood and watched as the man shot and killed both his mom and dad.
“You should learn from this mistake kid” the man said turning to him “always listen to a man with a gun in his hand” then the man fell to the ground. A tall figure stepped out in to the light. He had an insignia on his chest. He was batman and he just saved the boys life.
“I know how it feels, to loose your parents in one swoop like that” Bruce Wayne said. The boy simply stood in awe “now I have a favor to ask of you. Are you willing to become batman?”
In a suburb of Vancouver not to far away….
In a naborhood mile away the last house just turned off its last light. The family’s are laying down there heads for the night and resting for the next day. There is a sound of something coming in the distance. The sound zooms past the houses and stops. All that is seen is a streak of something moving by and quickly.
The flash looked at the house and said to himself “this looks like a good place. I know no one who lives in this city” the flash opens the door and quietly walks up a flight of stairs and opens a door. A teen age boy is asleep in his bed the flash smiles and says. ”he looks good”
Quietly he advances in the room towards the boy. He leans down and whispers in to the boys ear”when you wake up you will be as fast as you could ever imagine” he then places his lips on the boys and a flash of light fills the room.
In Texas…..
A young lady steps out of her car just out from work and getting home. She looks up to the stars and wishes that her and her love where closer together. Just then a body falls from the sky. The lady looks at the body discovering it to be the body of Starfire. Starfire opened her eyes and with a dyeing breath said to the girl
“Beware…the armored one…” Starfire’s hand glew green and touched the girls head as her soul and powers where transferred to the girl….
Out in the woods of Michigan
A tall boy with red hair walks in to a cave he had never saw before in the woods behind his yard. As he steps in there is a large metal suit with an oddly familiar S on it. As he touches the suit he is engulfed with a white light.
In the near by city of Grand Rapids…
A sleep is over the cul-de-sac in a near by suburb. A boy closes his eyes for a sleep. He suddenly hears screams and the crash of cars. He wakes up and throws some shoes on to see what is the matter. He sees undead Greek soldiers and warriors killing people in there houses. The boy runs to his garage and pulls the first thing he sees. A sledge hammer, he looks at it and says to himself “well if I’m dyeing I’m going down swinging”
He walks down the street fairly franticly as he sees police pull up to a large Blue armored figure and start shooting at it. The bullets don’t seam to phase it. He laughs coldly and shouts “cowards, hiding behind faulty technology” as he swings his axe taking their heads clear off their bodies.
He turned to see the boy standing there in lounging pants and a T-shirt holding a sledgehammer. He walked calmly up to the boy and said “you are brave unlike the others hiding behind their guns. The skill they have in nothing to your bravery of grabbing a weapon that puts you right in the fray of battle. That is why you where chosen. You are to be the new god of war. I present you with this” he extended his hand and held out a large red helmet. The boy reached out and grabbed the helmet and put it on. The large armored man started too laughed evilly….
During the commotion
A boy hid in an ally. He had run to try to find his friend who had gone missing in the woods earlier. A smoke arouse around him as a faceless man in a trench coat walked up to him. He said nothing but handed him a mask. The Boy took it and put it on. The mist surrounded his body as the mask fused to the boy’s skull. He had unknowingly became the new question
In small town USA…
Surveying the area looking for her lost partner raven picks up the telekinetic message from the Highfather. With a sigh she lands and walks up to the first house. And enters. A young woman in her early twenty’s is sitting at a computer browsing forums and ignoring Private messages she receives.
“Can you do me a favor” raven said out of the blue. This startled the lady who had thought she was alone. “I need you to search for a friend of mine”
“….ok” said the lady who was as surprised as one may think.
“good” said raven as her hand glew with magic. “when you wake up all will become clear to you” With that the magic shot at the lady and knocked her cold but also infusing her with the powers of raven.
It is a sunny day here in Chicago the DV droned. A man was sitting on the couch just waking up from partying all night the night before. Just then there was a nock at his door. “who could that be” the man wounded. He walked to the door and 3 hooded men burst in. one put a gun up to the man’s face. The others searched the house for valuables. The man being a fairly accomplished fighter punched the guy with the gun in the face. A whistle was heard as two arrows shot in to the heads of the other two men.
A man with a green hood walked in and smiled. He turned to the man and said”you look good enough”
A young Indian boy had just walked away sadly from his computer that his love in America had not been on for the second day in a row. He felt a chill in the room. Just then he heard a voice.
“Tommy, you are to be the green lantern” With The specter, Hal Jordan, came in to view.
“this isn’t happening “ Tommy said. The Specter was now quiet. He simply extended his hand with the ring of the green lantern in it. Tommy Reached out and took it.
The Sun light was strong. The last thing Evan Remembered was a rock falling on his head at MT. Rushmore. He now stood on a building in the center of a town. His shirt was different too. It had a large shield with an S on it. He thought for a sec. he said to himself” worth a shot” and jumped off the building. Suddenly he didn’t feel like he was falling. He felt momentum going horizontal to his body he was flying. “THIS KICKS ASS!” he yelled.
On the Streets below a man with a red trench coat and hat looked up. Well it seams some one is having fun…..



Chapter Two: Appointment, Murder and Formation
Damon was rushing to an office in the back of the capital. He had just woke up and found out HE was vice mayor. He woke up and had aged 5 years. He was still tall and slender but his hair was clean cut and slicked back. He was a sharp dressed man, it didn’t help him that that was on the radio on the way to work. Butt the singers sounded different….
He knew he wasn’t home because the city was WAY bigger than Grand Rapids, But things where the same. He was glad that there where no starbucks. Though. He finally reached the Door. He opened it and walked in.
“Ah Damon so good to see you this morning” The mayor said.
“I’m sorry sir but you see I took a small fall this morning and I can’t remember your name. Short term amnesia I guess can you please refresh my memory” Damon replied.
“Yea that happens to you a lot it seams. My name is George Hinkelbotum” Mayor Hinkelbotum said happily. “Oh **** I forgot. I have a speech. We will talk later” The mayor quickly turned and ran out to the Veranda.
About ten minutes later a shot is heard. Damon ran out to the veranda to see the mayor shot and dead.
A security guard ran up to Damon and yelled. “Mayor Rettig…lets get you inside…”
*In an ally*
“Another shot another kill”
“Good” Anarky stepped out of the shadows and handed the man a large wad of cash. “Good job Luke”
“ITS DEADSHOT TO YOU” Luke snaped bask at him.
“Whatever” Anarky calmly stated and walked off.
Luke turned to see a large amount of solders running in the direction of the Capital. As Luke turned to walk away he saw standing at the other end of the ally batman.
“You know Murder is illegal here. And you Deadshot are a prime participant in it” Batman Stated calmly. Suddenly a noise was heard and a streak was seen. As it stopped just in front of Deadshot, Aaron saw that he had a white costume with red lightning bolts on it.
“You are under arrest curtsey of the Flash!” the Flash said.
“No I’m not” Deadshot said and threw a smoke bomb to the ground.
When the smoke cleared Batman and the Flash where left alone in the ally.
“You know” Batman said “your voice sounds familiar”
“Aaron? IS that you” the flash said “It’s Me! Jesse!”
“I love this place already” Aaron said and ran towards Jesse.
Tommy looked down at the people, He was a security guard for the mayor. He turned to Damon and said.
“Sir who will be your vice mayor” Before he could answer a man with white hair walked in.
“Ah Damon my friend. Good to see you.” He said and he shook Damon’s hand.
“Hello Jeff how are you?” Damon said
“I’m good. I’m glad you appointed me as your Vice mayor. I have some back ground in politicks. You know. I was in the FBI before you called” he replied with a little chuckle in his voice.
“Yes” Damon replied seriously “a spy is just what I need”
“You ok Sir?” Tommy asked?
“Huh? Yes, Yes. Go on break please Timmy.” Damon said.
“It’s Tommy but ok”
As Tommy walked out he reached in his pocket and pulled out the ring. He looked at it and said. “Well I’m going to need a costume for this.” He walked out and got in his car.
In the mayors office Damon looked at a cabinet.
“You ok Damon?” Jeff asked.
Damon paused then answered with a simple “yes.” He got up and walked to the cabinet. He opened it and looked at a red helmet with gold Trim.
“What is that Damon?” Jeff asked
“You should go Jeff” Damon said coldly. Jeff left with out a word. Damon looked at the helmet. Then reached out and put it on. Suddenly blood red armor grew on him and a large battle axe was at his side. Damon then heard a voice. It was the voice of the large man in blue armor.
“This world was made for you. You are the Right full ruler. That is why you are mayor. You have the power”
Evan landed on a building in town. “flying is sweet” he said to himself.
“You’re telling me” a feminine voice said from behind him.
“Who are you” Evan asked.
“Starfire but you can call me Kathy” she said.
“THERE YOU ARE!” A person in dark blue cape appeared from no where “IVE BEEN LOOKING FOR YOU EVERY WHERE KATHY!!”
“Who are you” Evan and Kathy said at the same time.
“Raven and I’ve been looking for you starfire forever.” She said
“No, no, no your name child” Kathy answered.
“Oh, my name is Madison” Raven replied.
A large silver man landed in front of them he said simply “I’m Blake. I have Steels suit”
Even turned to the other three. “You know we have super powers. We should team up” he said.
“I’ve got nothing better to do.” Blake said.
“sounds like fun” Kathy replied.
“I was told to watch Kathy so I’m in” Madison stated.
Evan Smiled. “Then it’s settled. We are the Justice league!”

Chapter 3: What a Riot
It was a sunny day like any outer. A small group of elementary students where playing hop scotch in front of a store, unbeknown to them but a group of crooks where in the building. Suddenly I chair was thrown out the window and struck a little girl. The same happened in all the buildings in the area. The crooks started ravaging the streets.
On the other side of town Evan was flying when he heard the children screaming from the other side of town.
“My first act of heroics, this will be fun” he said to himself. In air he pulled out his cell phone and dialed for the other members of the justice league, Kathy, Madison and Blake. He reached all but Kathy. Evan was surprised because Kathy normally was busy. This time she had no service. Even figured she might be on the subway or something and didn’t think much else of it. Blake was already there. He was about to call Evan. Evan had no problem getting a hold of Madison as she was still at home base.
MEANWHILE
“So you have Batman under control Jacob?” Mike asked
“Yes, he will be dead by the end of this” Jacob replied.
“Yes, let’s hope you do more than the real Bane did when he first met Batman” Mike answered and walked off.
In the streets the riot was in full scale. One crook heard a sound and looked up to see a man dressed in green hovering above him.
“I’m afraid you are breaking the law my friend” A green light emitted from his ring and formed a butterfly net. “So it is off to jail you go”. He scooped up the crook and flew off scooping up more rioters and crooks as he saw them.
In a mansion near the city Aaron woke up and turned on the TV. He watched for a second and ran to his bedroom.
“JESSE! WAKE UP!” he yelled. ”THERE IS A RIOT DOWNTOWN WE NEED TO STOP IT!”
“Five more minutes….”Jessie answered sleepily.
“…please wake up” Aaron asked cutely
“Ok” Jessie said as he slowly crawled out of bed.
Blake jumped off the roof. Sick of waiting for his partners he decided that one was better than none. He grabbed his hammer and started swinging.
“Hammer-Time *****es” He muttered.
Back at the mayor’s office there is a nock at the mayor’s door.
“Come in” Mayor Damon Rettig yelled.
“Good morning mayor, I do hope I’m interrupting. You see today you are going to die” a voice responded.
“Mike or should I say Arnaky, you have no idea of my power” the mayor answered with out turning around.
“Now that was a good gu…”
“it was no guess Mike” the mayor interrupted. ”I know who you are and what you have become” the mayors hand started on fire “Now you will leave”
“I’m not scared of you” he ran at the mayor. Immediately the Mayor Rettig turned and planted the flaming fist in to Mike’s chest sending him crashing threw the door. Mayor Rettig walked up to mike and picked him up by the leg. He held mike over him and looked in to mike’s face.
“You listen to me boy.” Mayor Rettig slapped mike in the face ”this is my world now. And you are going to be a pawn in my plan…GOT IT!” mike nodded “good...” the mayor then tossed mike out the window.
Mayor Rettig walked to his desk and hit a button. “Andraia, please clean the glass from the floor” there was no answer. “Andraia?” he asked. There was no answer. “If your there start cleaning out your desk your fired!”
Kathy walked out of a building. Her skin had a greenish tint to it. As she walked her skin turned back to normal. Kathy smiled and flew off towards the riot.
A large black car pulled up to the riot scene, Aaron stepped out of his bat-mobile and looked at the people. His heart sank when he saw that Bane was standing there looking at him. Bane charged punching an old lady in the process.
“You want a piece of me” Aaron asked?
“NO, I want you in TWO PIECES!!!” Bane yelled as he lunged at Aaron. Aaron jumped back just before Bane got a hold of him. ‘****’ Aaron thought to himself. Just then there was a wiz as an arrow with a boxing glove on the end of it hit Bane in the head knocking him out. Green Arrow was standing on a roof in front of Aaron. Green Arrow waved slightly and went back to sniping off crooks.
Madison and Evan finally arrived at Blake’s location to see all the crooks in his area dead.
“You think I got a little too carried away?” Blake asked sarcastically. The man in green suddenly landed by the three he looked at them and said
“Hi. I’m the Green lantern.”
“And I thought you where the jolly green midget” Blake said almost sounding disappointed.
“Isn’t it so post to be jolly green giant” Madison asked
“Where I come from it is all off brand” Blake answered.
“I hear more fighting over there” Evan said and pointed north.
“Hammer-Time *****es” Blake said. The rest all looked at him, they where chuckling.
“One more ha,ha or ho,ho out of you three and I’l place a hammer in your skull” Blake said coldly. The four then ran off.
Jesse finally arrived on the scene.
“About time” Aaron said
“Sorry its morning I am slow in the morning” Jesse answered.
“What ever” Aaron replied.
“No one is here…I missed it” Jessie said disappointingly.
“He did a lot” Aaron pointed to Green Arrow on the roof. “And so did he” he pointed then to a person who looked like a blue scarab beetle.
“Who is he?” Jesse asked.
“He says his name is Brandon. He calls himself the Blue beetle” Aaron answered
“He is cute in that costume. But your sexy my love” he said turning to Aaron.
“I know” Aaron replied.
Green Arrow jumped down and Blue Beatle walked up to Jesse and Aaron. The four started asking question that no one knew the answer too. During this Bane Quietly snuck away. The four where then approached by Evan, Madison and the Green lantern, Blake was standing in the street looking around. He then yelled at the four.
“BASTERDS! THERE IS NO ONE HERE TO KICK THE **** OUT OF!!!” Blake paused. ”oh well what ever” with that he flew off to look for a place to eat.
The rest of them continued to talk. After awhile they all agreed to become the Justice league. After another debate they deiced that Aaron’s mansion was to be there head quarters.
Back by the mayors office Mike stood up
“Tell me every thing that happened in there” a voice from nowhere sounded.
“And you are?” Mike asked
“If you don’t answer the question, I’m your worst nightmare.” The voice sounded again.
“May I at least see your face?”
“I have no face” he stepped out to reveal a faceless head. “Now answer the question.”
“Now tell me why should I?” Mike asked.
“Because you hate the government, I believe in a fair government and this administration will become corrupt. Now…ANSWER ME!”
“How about…NO!” suddenly a helicopter busted out of his backpack as he flew off. “see you sucker”
“Indeed” The question said to himself”I will see you… I mean I did plant a tracking device on you” He walked of whistling.

Raganork8
03-01-2008, 11:43 PM
I posted hurry up and add more so I can read it!!

Snake_Judge
03-01-2008, 11:47 PM
Chapter 4: Mean Girls

The heroes stood in front of Wane Manor. Aaron walked out of the house and extended his hands warmly.

“Welcome my friends!” he said Cheerily “I have 2 rules while you’re here. 1:don’t tell any one about the bat cave and 2.If you hear a noise from me and Jesse’s room just ignore it” the others just smiled. They quickly got to unpacking.

“Sir you may want to see this” Aaron’s butler Alfred said, as he pointed towards the TV.

The mayor was standing in front of a pedestal. He looked at the crowd. He raised his hands and began to speak

“Good citizens! That riot was not from civil unrest. But from freaks in our own town! There are super powered weirdoes walking our streets, they caused the riot and quickly stormed off. They kidnapped the vice-mayor. They destroyed property. They even killed some of our children. I will not stand idly bye as they walk the streets. I now introduce to you the Chief of the newly founded Super Powered Ordnance and Calamity Komity, or SPOCK for short, Mr. Mike Ayers.” The crowd started clapping as a man in a red suit waved.

“BASTERD!” Evan yelled. ”He just turned the town against us!”
“No **** Sherlock” Brandon said
“Where is Katy” Tommy said as he looked around to see they where missing one.
“She was here a second ago” Madison answered. The sound of screaming was heard through the TV. The heroes turned to see large green vines crawling over the buildings. “We got to get there and help them!” Evan yelled as he ran out the door.

A large vine crawled towards the mayor. There where two figures standing on it.

“Isn’t it a little early for Halloween?” mayor Rettig asked.
“Very clever Mr. Mayor” A one of the ladies said. Her skin was greenish and she was wearing leaves for cloths.
“Hey Andraia!” the other who was wearing clown clothing said laughing “why don’t we just kill him now?!” she laughed hysterically.
“Andraia? What happened to you?” Mayor Rettig said, still calm as ever.
“I’M NO LONGER ANDRAIA!! I AM POISON IVY!” She yelled. “now Kai…”she calmed down quickly ”we are not killing him because we need him” she smiled evilly.
“Oh yea!” Kai chuckled.
“NOT SO FAST VILIANS!” the green lantern was first on the scene.
“Tommy!” Kai yelled “I missed you honey!!!”
“K..k…k….Kai!?!” The green lantern was shocked to see her. The rest of the justice league had arrived. Just then a vine wrapped around them all.
“You know her?” Rob asked.
“yea…she is an Ex-Girl friend…” Tommy said.
“You all are here…” Poison Ivy interrupted. “You can come out now Blackfire”
“BLACKFIRE!?!?!?!” the justice league all said. Just then Kathy flew up.
“AH! My friends!” she said
“Starfire you look different.” The green lantern said. Indeed she did. Her hair was now black instead of orange and her eyes glew purple.
“I’m not Starfire silly…I’m Blackfire, and you all are going to die.” She laughed evilly.
“OH! OH! IVY!” Kai yelled childishly.
“Yes Kai….” She said coldly.
“May I kill the lantern?” she asked?
“Only if I get to help” Blackfire said.
“Fine what ever” Poison Ivy replied.
“NOT IF I HAVE ANY THING TO SAY ABOUT IT!” Superman tried to break the vines but was unable to. Infact he felt his powers draining.
“Thanks Blackfire for telling me there weaknesses. That kryptonite bred vine works wonders. “Poison Ivy laughed.
Blackfire and Kai grabbed the lantern and dragged him off to a different area of the town. After they left Poison Ivy looked at the bundled heroes.
“Witch one, Witch one…who wants to be first?” she asked mockingly…she turned to Batman. “AH! You will be first!” another vie wrapped around him when suddenly a bolt of Purple energy shot out and destroyed the vine.
“WHAT ARE YOU DOING BLACK FIRE!?!?!?” Poison Ivy yelled.
“I am not your ally. My allegiance is with Red death. I am his muse. The war bringer is here and you all will be his nights or his pawns” Katy said coldly.

“Great another mad man” Steel said.
Poison Ivy looked at her for a bit. She then shot out “what happened to Kai?”
“She is indisposed….” Kathy said evilly.
Then the vines started retracting. Poison ran off to find Kai, She and the green lantern where lying in a puddle of blood.
“Don’t worry Kai” Poison Ivy said, “we will get our revenge..” she then hopped on a vine and disappeared in to the sewers. Kathy looked at the justice league for a second and flew off faster than they could fallow. Aaron walked up to Tommy and examined him.

“Is he ok?” Brandon asked
“Yes. But he needs medical attention stat.” Aaron responded.

Back at Wayne manor the team was in the parlor talking about the message Kathy had left them.
“You think she is ok” Madison asked.
“That is the least of our problems right now” Evan answered as he looked out the window.


Chapter 5: Allies Fall

Kathy stood in the yard with an army of skeletal Greek soldiers behind her.

She began to speak, “this is your first and final chance. Join the red death or die! Ether way you will serve him in the end”

The heroes stormed out of the manor and where stopped by the mayor walking out of the mass of soldiers.
“Good evening pawns. Have you agreed to join me?” the mayor spoke.
“Join you?” Evan said dumbfounded “what do you mean?”
“I am the red death, I am ARES! GOD OF WAR” Suddenly a helmet appeared on his head and he grew armor. The heroes attacked instantly. An arrow hit the mayor on the head.
“I hate archers” Ares said. He chucked an axe at green arrow. It landed square in his face killing him instantly.
“ROB!” Brandon yelled, “Don’t die on me man!”

Ares lifted his hands and a force blast shot all the heroes back. The skeletal army then lifted there weapons and charged the heroes. As Kathy fired energy bolts down at the heroes. Suddenly bones went flying as Evan flew towards Mayor Damon and punched him in the chest.

“Let’s dance big boy” Ares said as he punched him in the face with is right hand and Evan went flying in to a wall.

“That hurt more than I thought I would.” Evan said then charged at Ares again. They started exchanging blows. As the battle went on Evan’s power was seaming to drain.

“What’s happening to me…” Even said weekly.
“Awwwww you seem to be getting weaker…”Ares said evilly. “you seem to be weakening oh wait what is this…” Ares opened his right hand and turned it toards Evan. “looks at that, kryptonite…. You can keep this” Damon pulled his hand back and jammed the kryptonite in to Evans heart. “

“Good bye heroes” Ares said to them “I’ll see you later. MUAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!” With that Ares and Katy flew off.

The heroes instantaneously ran to Evan.
“You ok man?!?!?!” Blake said, and the heroes franticly tried to get the kryptonite out of Evan. There effort was in vain for superman died with the kryptonite in his heart.

In Wisconsin….

“He is waking up!” a voice said.

Even opened his eyes to see himself surrounded by his family in a hospital bed.