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Nightvision90
07-07-2007, 12:40 AM
All low life scum and others knew the station named Dead Mans Point. Some people stated that the station had been around since the birth of the Republic, but truth was that it had only been around for three years. Smugglers and pirates were known to make the dangerous journey past Republic grounds to the sacred moon of Ruusan. A lot of people who had heard of its location considered the people that went there to be empty in the head. Ruusan was considered a wasteland desert up there with Tatooine. Yet even with the sacred haven for illegal and people running from bounty hunters and what not were about to have the galaxy turned upside down. The Republic had been dismantled and what rose from the ashes was far worst. Many people considered the Galactic Empire to be the end of freedom and the way of life. With military growing and new laws taking place everyday many criminals decided that Dead Mans Point was its own government. Lately many hitchhikers and wanted criminals mostly aliens were moving their lives to the station.

The transport Grim Beauty had left hyperspace for what was considered safe land. The captain a Rodian named Gondol was known for causing trouble every time he arrived at Dean Mans Point. Last time he arrived he had caused massive trouble by starting a bar fight with another pirate group. Gondol sat with his arms folded and his dark green head down. A human officer walked over to him as the station came into view.

“ Captain our guest is wondering where we are.” The man whispered. Gondol groaned and looked over to the human.

“ Your kind is slime. I take her out of good will and nearly blow up. That last time I ever make a run on Coruscant. Now Empire make huge ships and shoot any smuggler.” Gondol replied fiercely. The man nodded and walked off as the Grim Beauty docked with the station. The airlock opened and two heavily armed Nemodians walked onto the transport with blasters in hand. One of them also held a vibroblade on its back. They looked at Gondol with their bug eyes and mud faces.

“ Why did you come back? The Overlord doesn’t want you back after last time.” One Nemodian stated. Gondol drew a small hold out blaster and tossed it around.

“ Me have cargo from Coruscant. Took lots of work to get.” Gondol replied. The Nemodians didn’t seem to care and lowered their weapons on Gondol. Gondol laughed and pointed the blaster to a cargo room.

“ Me also have very important item. Item that could make the Overlord very rich. Me have a Jedi Knight.” Gondol added with a cruel tone. The Nemodians dropped their blasters and were dumb founded. Nobody had thought that there were any Jedi left in the Galaxy after the recent rebellion the Jedi made. Now there was only the worst thing to come to the galaxy. Darth Vader. The thing in the black suit. In ways Vader had become a symbol of fear to all those opposed to the Empire. Gondol leaned against a wall and twirled his blaster from hand to hand.

“ The Overlord will see you in the Cantina in one hour. Don’t cause any trouble Rodian.” The Nemodians said at once. They walked off with blasters in hand. The human officer came back with a blaster rifle in hand.

“ You’re seriously going to sell the Jedi to the overlord?” He asked. Gondol stood up and looked the man in the eye. Even though Gondol was smaller than him the man still was afraid of the Rodian.

“ You know how much they pay for her? We be rich after we sell this Jedi. Then we can buy a moon.” Gondol said daydreaming. The man nodded in approval as he made his way towards the cargo hold. His hands were strapped to his blaster rifle as he entered the code. The door slid open and he studied the Jedi. She had to be no more than 20. Her hair was long dark brown and she wore a thick light brown robe. Her lightsaber, which was worth more than the Jedi herself. She stirred a bit and the man jumped. His boots made a pounding noise and she woke up. Her hair covered her face and she wiped it away with her hands. Her eyes were light blue and her eyes looked like she was in pain.

“ Where are we?” She asked quietly. The man leaned down to look at her face to face.

“ Where the Empire wont get us. Dead Mans Point. The pirate and smuggler haven on the moon of Ruusan.” The man answered. She nodded and little and began to stand. Her legs shook and she leaned on the wall for support.

“ So do I get to go now?” She asked. The man whistled to himself and put the blaster over his shoulder.

“ Actually not. We’re going to the Cantina for a while then we’ll go.” The man answered. He led the Jedi to Gondol and they walked off. The station must have been filled to the max with smuggler vessels. A Duro was selling arms as they walked by. Gondol waved to his fellow friends as the Cantina came into view.

“ Two years this Empire has been harassing us.” A patron shouted. His friend nodded as Gondol led the others to a table. He pointed to the Jedi to sit at the far end near the wall where no one could see her. Gondol turned to leave and looked over at the Jedi.

“ You stay here. No running or I’ll toss you in space.” He whispered. The man smiled as Gondol went over to the casino.

“ Is he always so enjoyable?” She asked. She ran her hand through her hair and the man saw a scar on her arm. She covered it quickly and looked around. All sorts of scum balls and airheads were talking in the cantina. The one thing that caught her eyes was a man and a Manaan talking at a table. The man had dark black hair, which ran down to the bottom of his neck. He had a blaster on the table and the Manaan also had one with it.

“ That’s Cal and Rictor.” The man sitting with her answered. She looked over at him with a look of wanting to know more. “ He’s been around as a smuggler for two years now. Some say he was something else. Might have been a clone or a Republic commander.” He added. Cal was now gazing at her with his right eye. She felt something from him and turned away.

“ Why does he have a Manaan with him?” She asked. The man pulled out a chunk of bread and began to munch on it.

“ Rictor can hold his on don’t under estimate him. They’re partners they use Rictor’s ship the Ebony. I think Cal saved Rictor from Imperial slavery so that’s how those two ended up partners.” The man finished. Now Cal was walking over towards their table. He looked at the woman for a while and then looked at the man.

“ Well Hudson never knew you could get a lady.” Cal said at no more than a whisper. Hudson shrugged and drank his drink as Cal stared at the woman again. “ How much did he pay you to come here with him?” Cal asked. The woman didn’t reply but gave Cal a stern look. Hudson coughed and looked over at Rictor who was watching intently.

“ We picked her up from Coruscant. Nearly had the entire Imperial fleet on us.” Hudson replied. Cal’s face was now locked on a blank expression. The woman concentrated but couldn’t read his mind. Gondol was back with an armed escort of 10 Nemodians. Hudson didn’t seem shocked as they walked over to the table.

“ There she is ladies and smugglers. A real Jedi Knight.” Gondol said with cheer in his voice. The entire cantina went quiet as everyone now looked over at them. Cal looked at the woman and turned to Rictor. The Nemodians lowered their weapons at the woman and were ready to fire.

Master_Kinnon
07-10-2007, 01:40 PM
Really good start. Love the start and your style of writing. Hope to read more of it soon.

Nightvision90
07-10-2007, 09:13 PM
Really good start. Love the start and your style of writing. Hope to read more of it soon.


Thanks next issue should be up soon

Nightvision90
07-10-2007, 11:54 PM
Gondol stood behing the Nemodians with his arms crossed. You could tell he was smiling even without an exspression. Hudson leaned back in his sight as the blasters leveled at the Jedi. Cal kept looking back at Rictor and back at the Jedi as he turned to face the Nemodians.
" A jedi? Boy Gondol I thought you were smart for your kind." Cal joked. He slowly reached his right hand down and touched the tip of his blaster. The Nemodians didn't know what was going on as one of them muttered something in their native language.
" Dont play stupid Cal. She was on Coruscant and she wears Jedi robe. Overlord want her alive. He sell her to Vader and get lots of money." Gondol replied with a cheer in his voice. Rictor was now slowly standing not attracting any attention. The Jedi noticed the movement and tried to read Cal. She got something from him this time a single thought running through his mind. Steady. The Jedi ran a hand through her hair as the cantina was still deathly silent. Cal ran his hand over his chin and sighed.
" You really are a slime ball Gondol. Dont you realize that by gizing her to Vader that the Empire now knows about Dead Mans Point?" Cal pointed out. The patrons in the bar were now talking loudly. Some of them ran off as fast as they could. The Nemodian guards looked back and forth at one an other going over what Cal just said. He leaned onto a table and smirked as Gondol cursed.
" The Overlord will have your head Gondol. The Empire will blow this place to pieces to get a Jedi." A guard yelled. Gondol stood silent for a moment and then pulled his blaster. Hudson followed and aimed at Cal.
" That's why when Empire arrives we set self destruct on station. We all leave but keep Jedi here. When Vader comes he blows and we all get away rich." Gondol replied. Suddenly the entire station shook and the Jedi made her move. Her left leg swept across the table and nailed Hudson in the face. He dropped his blaster and moaned as the Jedi pulled out a dark yellow lightsaber. The Nemodians screamed and ran off as Rictor held his blaster to Gondol's head.
" I am not bait for you." The Jedi said calmly. The station shook again as an alarm rang and a voice filled the comm.
" All smugglers and fellow pirates. An Imperial fleet has found us and is firing on our location. We can not hold out long. Tie fighters are destroying any ship that is living. You know my rule. If you can get away and live another day,do it." The Overlord's voice rang out. Gondol was shaking with fear as the Jedi looked over at Cal.
" Can you get out of here?" She asked. Rictor gave Cal a dark look as Hudson stood up. He reached for his blaster but the Jedi merely raised her hand and knocked him into a wall. Another blast shook the station as figures in white armor marched into the hallway. They studied the area and turned to face the others. Cal fired a blast smashing a trooper in the chest. The others took cover and returned fire and the blast tore the cantina apart.
" Yeah, but the Ebony is right behind those lovely people. Can you ask them to move by any chance?" Cal asked. The Jedi nodded her head and focused. She could feel parts of the wall falling as her nightmare came back. She was in the Jedi Temple. Smoke filled the air and her lungs. She was afraid. Something she had never felt before. The troopers then came in. Their blasters leveled they opened fire on the Jedi and began their march into the temple. Many of her fellow Jedi died as the others were forced to fall back. The cries of pain as fellows Jedi went down created a shock wave through the Temple. She ran as fast as she could until she reached her master. Kylun Ordd was a noble and braze Jedi Guardian. His face was locked in an exspression of loss as he twirled his red lightsaber around.
" Elaina you have to leave now!" Kylun shouted. He ran forward to a group of troopers and cleaned them all. His robes were torn and now covered with blood as he suddenly was held high in the air. He dropped his lightsaber and grabbed his neck as a man in a dark cloak walked out of the smoke. He was filled with the dark side and he studied the area.
" So you are the traitor." Kylun chocked. The sith kept his head down as he looked at all the fallen jedi. His anger made Elaina shake as more troopers walked in behind the sith. Kylun fought hard as he looked over at Elaina. His eyes were filled with happiness as he looked over her.
" Run padawan. The hope of the jedi remain with you." Kylun roared. So Elaina ran the sound of her masters neck breaking was a sound that remained with her to this day.
" Hey no offense but what are you doing?" Cal shouted. Elaina shook herself from the nightmare and pushed debris down on the troopers. Cal and Rictor fired a few shots and led the way towards the Ebony. It was a armored transport which was small enough to get past the Imperial fleet. Cal took the pilots seat as Rictor ran off to the turrets. Elaina took the navigation station as Cal shot the Ebony off. A massive Imperial Destroyer blocked their way as ties shot over unloading their weapons as they went.
" Got any jedi tricks that could work here?" Cal asked as he made a loop of the fighters. Other smuggler ships were having the same problems as one blew to pieces from the destroyer.
" Nothing that could get us out of here." Elaina replied. The Ebony's turrets opened fire on a tie blowing it to pieces as laser fire from the turrets nailed the Ebony on the engines. Cal cursed as he punched in a hyperspace coordinate. Stars began to stretch out as everything went blue. Rictor walked back in with his head down and leaned against the wall.
" No big deal Rictor. Dead Mans Point wouldnt have laster any longer with the Empire." Cal said. Elania kept her head down feeling the weight of all the deaths on her shoulders. Cal stood up and placed a hand on her shoulder. She sat still as his hand layed there. Her mind went over the code of the jedi over and over. Rictor spoke something and Cal nodded.
" It wasnt your fault. We'll take you to one of our hideouts on a station in Ossus." Cal said leaving. Elania nodded as she looked to the floor. Is this what had become of the Jedi....

Master_Kinnon
07-12-2007, 09:42 AM
Nice update, I'm really liking this.

Nightvision90
07-12-2007, 03:05 PM
Nice update, I'm really liking this.


Thanks I really appreciate it

Nightvision90
07-12-2007, 06:51 PM
The New Imperial Palace was an amazing thing to behold. It towered over everything in the imperial city. Many people only wished to be able to step into the Palace and behold its beauty. If only they knew the darkness and cruelty that layed inside. Emperor Palpatine sat at peace on his throne. His hood covered his ruined face only showing his mouth. Everything he ever dreamed of was coming true. The destruction of the Jedi Order was something he wished he could relive everyday. How the Jedi must have felt when they realized the sith they were hunting was right under their noses. He grinned to himself and turned to the door as an aide bowed to him.
" Emperor we are getting a message from Lord Vader." The aide said still bowed. Palpatine sighed to himself and waved the aide off. Why couldnt Vader ever do a simple task without reporting in? Palpatine wished he could have stopped Anakin from becoming the black suited thing he was now. The image of Vader covered the room as Vader went to one knee.
" Lord Vader. What have you to report of the station near Ruusan?" Palpatine asked. Vader was quiet for a minute. Palpatine could tell he was trying to cover something.
" The station was destroyed master as were many of its people." Vader replied. Palpatine nodded in approval. " Yet the Jedi was able to get away." Vader added. Palpatine was able to see what Vader was mad about. All he had on his mind was finding Obi-Wan-Kenobi. The man who took Vader's old self away. Palpatine thought of how to handle this problem as Vader stayed kneeled.
" Vader. We have discussed this far to many times. You can not keep hunting your old master. The Jedi are gone. No longer do we have to worry about one Jedi getting away." Palpatine said his tone filled with anger. Vader nodded and stood up. " Now word has gotten around that there is a Jedi Haven being established somewhere." He added. Vader's attention rose as He nodded slowly. " I believe this will gain us more support if you erradicate them from their hiding place." The Emperor ended.
" As you wish my master." Vader replied as the hologram finished. The Emperor kept quiet as he turned to face the Imperial city. He did know the location of the Jedi Haven, but he knew this would keep Vader occupied. A figure covered in a thick dark cloak came to stand by the Emperor.
" Darth Kath. I want you to find this Jedi and bring it here. We might be able to add another Dark adept to our cause." Palpatine ordered. Darth Kath a human nodded its head and walked out.
Ossus -
The Ebony popped out of hyperspace to see the planet Ossus in front of it. Cal began his descent through the atmosphere as Rictor stated something.
" Well we could try that but its to risky with Imps everywhere." Cal repleid quickly. Elaina looked at him in silence wondering what Rictor had said. A landing pad came into view as Cal landed the Ebony. Rictor turned and hit a few buttons as a droid walked into the cockpit.
" T5 reprting for duty sir." The droid stated. Rictor said a flurry of words in Selkath. T5 stood perfectly still until the words died down. It then turned to Elania and bowed.
" Master Rictor would like to welcome you to what he and Master Cal call Haven." T5 stated. Elaina stood up and followed the droid out of the ship. Her eyes opened in amazment as she studied the area. Haven was buried to the side of a massive mountain that overlooked a wide part of Ossus. She looked down and saw how far up Haven was as Cal was holding a pack.
" We found this about a year ago. Rictor thinks it was an old Smugglers Castle. Me I think the Jedi used this when they were here." Cal said. His hair was a mess and his eyes were locked on her.
" How many bases do you have?" Elania asked. Cal held up his fingers and began to count. He then dropped his fingers and shrugged.
" No clue ask Rictor. We move from base to base. A smuggler needs a lot of hiding places." Cal replied. Elania nodded as she took off her cloak. She held it for a bit and remembered her many adventures with it. A small tear rolled down her face as she dropped it over the landing pad. Rictor stared at her in silence and walked after Cal.
" Master Cal has asked me to show you some clothes that you may like to change into." T5 commented. Elania raised her eyebrows.
" And how does he have womens clothes?" Elania asked. T5 just stood there for a moment processing the question.
" I believe Master Cal keeps a spare wardrobe for women if they ever come here." T5 repleid. Elania sighed as she followed the droid. Haven looked and felt like a secret military outpost. Computers were all over and maps of the galaxy covered the walls. T5 led Elania to a small room near the end of Haven. She thanked T5 and walked in. A small bed and refresher greeted her as she looked through the wardrobe. Smugglers clothes covered the room as Elania found a black jacket and brown pants. She looked at herself in the mirror and couldnt recognize herself. Suddenly her comm went off. She let it go off for a bit as she picked it up.
" Hello?" She said quietly. Silence met her as she could hear noises in the background.
" Thank the force you're alive Elania." A voice said. Elania felt a stone drop into her stomach. It was Gedon Quin. A padawan that Elania knew her whole life. She sat at peace for a moment recalling the memories as she shook herself from it.
" How are you alive Gedon. I thought the clones killed all jedi out in the battlefields." Elania asked.
" Master Fray sensed the danger before we were attacked. We were the only survivors. All the other jedi with us were killed by those monsters." Gedon said. His voice was filled with anger as Elania felt the dark side around him.
" I'm so sorry Gedon. I barely survived the attack on the temple myself." Elania survied.
" Is Master Kylun alive?" Gedon asked. Elania went quiet for a moment as Rictor walked by with supplies.
" No the new sith killed him." Elania replied sadly. Gedon sighed as she heard voices in the background.
" Master Fray was telling me before he died that there was a secret Jedi haven. Do you know anything about it?" Gedon asked.
" I thought Master Fray was alive." Elania said.

" He was wounded as we stole a ship from Boz Pity. He only told me that there was a haven for Jedi somewhere." Gedon replied fast. Elania felt something was different about Gedon. Yet wasnt she herself different.
" Sorry Gedon. I've never heard of a secret haven." Elania said. " Where are you exactly?" She asked.
" I made my way to Fondor, but there are so many troopers here its hard to move around." Gedon replied. Elania then got an idea.
" Gedon I'll come and get you." Elania repleid hastly.

Jacno
07-12-2007, 08:36 PM
Yet another good one.

Nightvision90
07-12-2007, 08:45 PM
Yet another good one.

thank you

Nightvision90
07-12-2007, 09:22 PM
oh I forgot to tell everyone but this story takes place in An Alternate Universe

Jacno
07-12-2007, 10:03 PM
AU stories are better anyways. (I say this because the story I'm working on is AU)

Nightvision90
07-12-2007, 11:04 PM
AU stories are better anyways. (I say this because the story I'm working on is AU)

thanks. Hey give me a link to your story when its up

Nightvision90
07-12-2007, 11:29 PM
Agamar -
The main hall in the capital city of Uton was a sight to behold. A massive statue of the planets finder an old Jedi knight Riccun Oldford hovered above everything. There were about 12 people sitting around the table as a man stood up.
" I know it was very dangerous for you all to come here but it was well worth the cause." Captain Antilles stated. There was a mummer of agreements and some anger as he said this. He rubbed his forehead and walked around the table. " We have word from Bail Organa that the planter Sullust will now be the base of command for the Republic." He added. The Republic of Free Systems was established only one year ago by Mon Mothma and Bail Organa. It was a small movement in which only three senators signed at the time. Yet over many negotiations and treaties more planets and senators joined.
" Yet you've lost your contact on Dead Mans Point. The one you sent to find the Jedi." Senator Welk Neil from Humbarine said standing up. Antilles sighed as he turned on the holonews.
" The Empire destroyed the station before my contact got there. It seems Palpatine might have heard rumor of our Jedi bunker." Antilles said cooly. the room remained quiet as Senator Gin Dullon from Orboa-Skai took a stand.
" My resources are getting low. I cant keep building our fleet with the Empire hounding me everyday." Gin roared. " Only yesterday did a supply ship from Alderaan was stopped and boarded. It's only a matter of time until an Imperial Armada with Vader wipes out my people." Gin added. Suddenly the doors opened and Mon Mothman strode into the room. Her eyes were filled with tiredness as she took her seat.
" My apologizes. I couldnt get the people of Manaan to join the Republic. I feel the Empire is getting closer to discovering us." Mon Mothma stated. There was a few gasps. " I now ask that you give any warships to the Republic fleet orbiting Mon Calamari." She added. Antilles nodded. Welk Neil seemed skeptical as he turned to Antilles.
" Are you considering making a strike on the Empire?" Welk asked coldly. Gin shook his head in disgust as Mothma placed her right hand on her chin.
" As Chief of the Republic said. Sooner or later the Empire will discover us. I've already made plans with Commander Ackbar to move our forces to Fondor and hit the Imperial shipyards." Antilles replied with a glim of excitment in his eyes.
" You do know that once that strike is made we will be in a state of war. A war we will very likely loose." Senator Qol Con from Mon Cal added. Her Mon Cal features made it hard to read her exspression. Mon Mothman nodded in agreement as she took the stage again.
" The Empire is destroying the very standards the Republic once stood for. I will not allow this to go on. Any negotiation with Palpatine will fall on death ears." She said calmly. The Senators all agreed and left as Antilles walked with Mothman.
" I'm glad to hear that you're contact found the Jedi." Mothman said at a whisper.
" He was the best choice for the job. Even though his track record isnt the greatest." Antilles replied as he approached the Tantive 4.
" Give Ackbar my thanks. And may the force be with you on your attack." Mothma said as she left.
Ossus -
" You're kriffing kidding me!" Cal yelled when Elania told him about Gedon. " Fondor. You're Jedi friend is a slime ball. Whay would he be hiding on the planet where the Imperial shipyards are?" Cal asked. Elania sighed as she tried to come up with an answer. Rictor and T5 stayed out of the converstation as it passed the hour mark.
" He's a Jedi. I've known him my entire life. We could use his help to find this jedi haven." Elania replied calmly. She ran the code of the jedi over and over as anger built inside of her. Cal always ran her buttons.
" You mean he'll help you. Look we risked our skins for you. Fondor is way to hard to get into." Cal yelled back. They both went quiet for a moment as they let the hot air out.
" If we get Gedon then we might be able to find more Jedi that survived the attack." Elania whispered. Cal leaned against the wall and let out a sigh.
" Did you ever think that if more then one jedi got together that Vader might be able to find you?" Cal asked with anger.
" We might be able to beat him if we make a united front." Elania roared back.
Fondor -
" I've got a bad feeling about this." Cal commented as the Ebony left hyperspace and meet three Imperial Destroyers. Ties streaked past it as a refueling station came into view.
" That's where Gedon is." Elania said pointing. Rictor mumbled something and Cal asked.
" Yeah I wouldnt mind spacing her too." He replied with a laugh. The Ebony docked with the station as Elania stepped from the docking bay. She was tossed into a wall and fell to the ground. She looked up to see a person in a dark cloak. It held a red lightsaber and held it in attack position.
" I've been waiting to kill another Jedi." It whispered happily. Cal was off the ramp and fired a shot as the dark jedi laughed. It raised its hand as sith lighting pounded Cal in the chest. He roared in pain as the dark jedi turned to Elania.
" Your doom will come from Darth Kath." Kath roared. He raised his blade as Rictor tossed a grenade. It detonated and Kath flipped away. Elania stood up and thanked Rictor.
" I should get paid for the things I do." Cal said as he stood up.

Jacno
07-16-2007, 04:41 PM
Eagerly awaiting the next post!

Jacno
07-16-2007, 04:43 PM
thanks. Hey give me a link to your story when its up
http://galacticsenate.com/showthread.php?t=16806
there ya go

Nightvision90
07-17-2007, 11:26 AM
Eagerly awaiting the next post!


thanks