ForceFlow
05-12-2007, 10:27 PM
This story i wrote for Jedi Master Harrison one night when he could not sleep! Ha-ha! The Hero is a girl name Darill who tries to save her sister Cyllem yes those names are from Darill Cyllem she inspiried the older sister figure.
I hope everyone enjoys!
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Deep in the bellows of Courascant a storm rages, but not one of nature! One of crime and villany! The Mob Boss of the courascant moffia is a man by the name of Tozai. He strikes fear into the hearts of many. he has dealt with half of the city no polition has goen through without calling in a favor from Tozai.
It is August 23rd, two girls one in her late twenties and the other in her mid-teens are dragged in from there homes to see the mob boss. Darril and her younger sister Cyllem have not repaied the man his favor! the girls struggle but are over taken they enter a mansioon the infamous HQ of Toza "what do you want!?" snaps Darril nearly jerkeing herself free of her captors vise like grasp "my dear! you have not paid your do!" said Tozai cooly "we did sir! we did!" says Cyllem "If Tozai says u did not u did not!" snaps his right hand man aide "we paid your bloody due!" snarles Darill Tozai walks forward slowly and places his prized revolver on Darill's temple. "you see this darling? it has the deaths of many at its fault!" says Tozai Darill's eyes widen but she shows now fear and kicks he mob boss in between the legs. he falls over and aiden helps him up and threatens Cyllem with a knife. "ok girlie! here is how it shall play out u get us the money some how or Cyllem here is in the harbor!" snarls Tozai Darrils eyes widened and nodded "anything!" the evil man smiled "kill this man and i shall consider your debt repaid!" Darill looked down at a folder handed to her she looked at he picture and name "Anakin SKywalker!? what kind of name is that!"
she asks un thinking "I do not care i want him dead he refused to repay the favor!" said Tozai his voice cold as ice his eyes like dead stars
grudgingly Darill nodds slowly and is given a smalll cylinder. "use it!" snarled Tozai darill nods hugging Cyllem she is escorted to a transport and taken to her her destination
Darril steps out of the transport and is left standing in the rain she waits thinking on what she is about ot do she realizes the transport keeps back tracking wacthing her making sure she does the job. Do it for cyllem! thought Darril as she opened
the door and got on the lift
Back with Cyllem: Cyllem is forced to her knees and a vibroblade has been slicing through her arm. she is tied up and cannot move let alone fight! the torture stops and she is taken back into the other room to see tozai. "now my dear!? do u think
Darril will do it? take a man's life for yours?" he asks "yes i do beleive she will!" spat Cyllem acidly the mob boss smile and punched her in the head.
Back with Darril: she slowly descends the stairs mounting the last step she enters the room of the man who must die. looking at the cylinder Darril presses a button a long thin lazer comes out a smile goes on her face as she creeps towards his sleep
ing figure she holds the lazer sword high above her head ready to take his life she starts to bring it down only to be stopped by another blade!
to be continued!
I hope everyone enjoys!
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Deep in the bellows of Courascant a storm rages, but not one of nature! One of crime and villany! The Mob Boss of the courascant moffia is a man by the name of Tozai. He strikes fear into the hearts of many. he has dealt with half of the city no polition has goen through without calling in a favor from Tozai.
It is August 23rd, two girls one in her late twenties and the other in her mid-teens are dragged in from there homes to see the mob boss. Darril and her younger sister Cyllem have not repaied the man his favor! the girls struggle but are over taken they enter a mansioon the infamous HQ of Toza "what do you want!?" snaps Darril nearly jerkeing herself free of her captors vise like grasp "my dear! you have not paid your do!" said Tozai cooly "we did sir! we did!" says Cyllem "If Tozai says u did not u did not!" snaps his right hand man aide "we paid your bloody due!" snarles Darill Tozai walks forward slowly and places his prized revolver on Darill's temple. "you see this darling? it has the deaths of many at its fault!" says Tozai Darill's eyes widen but she shows now fear and kicks he mob boss in between the legs. he falls over and aiden helps him up and threatens Cyllem with a knife. "ok girlie! here is how it shall play out u get us the money some how or Cyllem here is in the harbor!" snarls Tozai Darrils eyes widened and nodded "anything!" the evil man smiled "kill this man and i shall consider your debt repaid!" Darill looked down at a folder handed to her she looked at he picture and name "Anakin SKywalker!? what kind of name is that!"
she asks un thinking "I do not care i want him dead he refused to repay the favor!" said Tozai his voice cold as ice his eyes like dead stars
grudgingly Darill nodds slowly and is given a smalll cylinder. "use it!" snarled Tozai darill nods hugging Cyllem she is escorted to a transport and taken to her her destination
Darril steps out of the transport and is left standing in the rain she waits thinking on what she is about ot do she realizes the transport keeps back tracking wacthing her making sure she does the job. Do it for cyllem! thought Darril as she opened
the door and got on the lift
Back with Cyllem: Cyllem is forced to her knees and a vibroblade has been slicing through her arm. she is tied up and cannot move let alone fight! the torture stops and she is taken back into the other room to see tozai. "now my dear!? do u think
Darril will do it? take a man's life for yours?" he asks "yes i do beleive she will!" spat Cyllem acidly the mob boss smile and punched her in the head.
Back with Darril: she slowly descends the stairs mounting the last step she enters the room of the man who must die. looking at the cylinder Darril presses a button a long thin lazer comes out a smile goes on her face as she creeps towards his sleep
ing figure she holds the lazer sword high above her head ready to take his life she starts to bring it down only to be stopped by another blade!
to be continued!