Darth Vegas
03-24-2003, 02:03 PM
The Betrayal on Risiang 5 (http://www.galacticsenate.com/index.php?act=ST&f=11&t=4074)
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The Betrayal on Risiang 5 is sort of a prequel to a story arc I began developing 2 years back. I'm just writing this story as it goes, based off of the rest of the story I already mapped.
Feel free to discuss your likes or dislikes about, your feedback is welcome here. style_emoticons/<#EMO_DIR#>/smile.gif
The story is basically about two young Jedi Knights living around the time of the Sith about 2000 years before Episode 1 (as mentioned in the TPM novel). They were born into the ruling class of the planet Risiang 5, there was a conflict over who would be the next king, and a huge war erupted. It was well known that the children were force sensitive, as it had ran through their blood line, and the two kindred families gave the chilren up to be trained at the Jedi Temple on Coruscant, the chilren were the last of their family line, the rest died out in the war.
The story begins with the two Jedi, Kaesheen Tae-Yor and Raiyne Vihnla landing on the planet Nal Hutta with the ex-smuggler Hiram Kennsen, on a mission to infiltrate the crime lord Gorgo the Hutt's fortress and essentially arrest hiim and bring him back to Coruscant. But as the story continues it turns out that Gorgo's treachoury is deeper than slave trading and pirating he secretly has been dealing with the Sith in a plot to overthrow the republic, and it ends with the revalation of the past of the Royal Family of Risiang 5, the current Sith rising has something to do with what happened before on that planet.
Lots of turns and twists happen along the course of this story that'll pay off later. I won't reveal too much right now. I hope y'all like it.
http://www.galacticsenate.com/uploads/post-15-1048454797.jpg
The Betrayal on Risiang 5 is sort of a prequel to a story arc I began developing 2 years back. I'm just writing this story as it goes, based off of the rest of the story I already mapped.
Feel free to discuss your likes or dislikes about, your feedback is welcome here. style_emoticons/<#EMO_DIR#>/smile.gif
The story is basically about two young Jedi Knights living around the time of the Sith about 2000 years before Episode 1 (as mentioned in the TPM novel). They were born into the ruling class of the planet Risiang 5, there was a conflict over who would be the next king, and a huge war erupted. It was well known that the children were force sensitive, as it had ran through their blood line, and the two kindred families gave the chilren up to be trained at the Jedi Temple on Coruscant, the chilren were the last of their family line, the rest died out in the war.
The story begins with the two Jedi, Kaesheen Tae-Yor and Raiyne Vihnla landing on the planet Nal Hutta with the ex-smuggler Hiram Kennsen, on a mission to infiltrate the crime lord Gorgo the Hutt's fortress and essentially arrest hiim and bring him back to Coruscant. But as the story continues it turns out that Gorgo's treachoury is deeper than slave trading and pirating he secretly has been dealing with the Sith in a plot to overthrow the republic, and it ends with the revalation of the past of the Royal Family of Risiang 5, the current Sith rising has something to do with what happened before on that planet.
Lots of turns and twists happen along the course of this story that'll pay off later. I won't reveal too much right now. I hope y'all like it.