Javen
02-13-2007, 10:17 AM
This is an outline for a story I never finished, or started on as of yet. It is only an outline, basically. But you pretty much can see what the story is about. This is the second sci-fi/space story I've ever written. I usually write regular stories that have nothing to do with space. Anyway...enjoy
FOREVER JEDI KNIGHT
A long time ago, in a galaxy far, far away....
100 years after the ROTJ events.
STAR WARS
Ja Vinn Kane, 24, is a young man so obsessed with purpose that he cannot get it out of his mind. When he decides that the Force is not showing him the way he thinks he then finds it on his own, even if he should quit and become a civilian. But what he doesn't know is he is unknowingly being guided by the Force.
Characters
Ja Vinn Kane-Main character
Orion Horain-Ja Vinn's Master
Ateva Savaary-Twi'lek. Ja Vinn's best friend.
Darth Leviathan - Lord Of The Sith
ACT ONE
1.Searching For Purpose.
Ja Vinn Kane,a young man of 24, meditates but doesn't seem to connect with the Force. He gets frustrated and visits his Master to question him for answers. While questioning him his patience doesn't want to hear what his master has to say. He takes out his frustrations in the Lightsaber battle room.
This room is like a boxing type ring place. Only they wear the material used from the Magma guards weapons. It keeps them from getting limbs cut off or cut in anyway. He is a very good swordsman. He rivals all people. But it isn't fulfilling for him. He seems bored and a sense of purpose makes him restless.
His Jedi Master comes back from the OuterRim and has a discussion to him about not trying so hard. That the Force doesn't always speak how he thinks or in how he wants. That he must see the good in all. He decides to go on a journey to make him complete. People and friends try and talk him out of it, but it does no good. Especially his good friend, Ateva Savaary, who he has grown up with him all his life.
She is a beautful Twi'lek. He has come to the conclusion that it's time for a cause. What he does not know, is that The Force is really guiding his feelings. He is so unfocused that he just doesn't see it nor sense it. While on his journey he meets serveral rude people that make him wanna go back home. It makes him rethink what he is doing.
But he keeps going. He ends up in a village Cantina. During his stay a man speaks of gangters that come many times a year to their village and takes their crops and use them as slaves. That they need protection. That the keeper of laws are too busy for such things and can do nothing. But no one wants to get involved, not even Ja Vinn at first. People are leary of Ja Vinn. So at night he sneaks to the man's village to see for himself.
People are working, children playing, things going on as normal. Ja Vinn falls asleep and wakes up early hearing noises from the village. And he gets knocked out. He is accused of being a spy for the villager and that if he returns the people will suffer more. It is the gangsters, but he is outnumbered. He gets roughed up and they do not know he is a Jedi. He then goes back to the town. He begins a program of hiring people to help, but no one wants to get involved.
The next day some of the gangsters come into town and begin to harass a few people. They leave and are on the edge of town when Ja Vinn decides to confront them. He walks behind them. Observing the surroundings. There are three of them and they stop at a graveyard at the edge of town. Ja Vinn finds this an ironic place. But he senses a trap of one more person near by. The three try to surround him. But he takes them out with a few swipes of his lightsaber. Then he loses his lightsaber and must fight this tough gangster alien. He finally beats him after a few rounds of it after it seems he was losing or getting bested. He uses the force to get his saber and cuts the Alien down. The crowd gasps, and is surprised to find out he is a Jedi. END OF ACT ONE
ACT TWO
At his room he hears a knock on his door. He opens the door to a tall man who wants to be his first recruit. Ja Vinn tests his reflexes and find's the man strong and fast. He has a blaster. He is similar to Han. After awhile he recruits serveral people, in all shapes and sizes even a woman. They make their plans on how they can stop the raid of gangsters and know they will be back for revenge of Ja Vinn killing their friends. But what he doesn't know is their leader is powerful in the darkside and is a Sith.
They go to the village and begin to teach them how to fight back. They have watchmen at all times in a tower. They start to live normal lives again knowing they have bodyguards, until the villans showup unannounced. No battle starts yet, but Ja Vinn and the group let them know they won't be abusing their powers on the innocent any longer. So the gangsters take off and one of them tells the town they will be back with LAVIATHAN, the leader and most powerful one they know. The village begins to live in fear again. But they wait on them and for a few days it is quiet.
They get ready for the battle. And in the early morning hours the signal that the raiders are coming and the first battle begins. Serveral people are killed and they have many raiders. Ja Vinn uses the force well, but senses something is wrong. Some children are locked up and made hostages. He cuts through the roof dropping down saving them and taking out the bad men with ease. Then suddenly as fast as they as came in they leave. END OF ACT TWO
ACT THREE
The town now becomes restless and even begins to complain to them at least they had things and only serveral times a year did the raiders come. But now they live in fear daily. They begin to tell them to leave and this disappoints Ja Vinn. He mediatates on this but no answer comes and once again he is frustrated. He begins to have a dream that night about this Leviathan and that he is choking the life out of him. He suddenly begins to fear for his life and feels he has overstayed and not powerful enough to change the peoples hearts and to help them. He feels he failed as a Jedi. He wakes up the next day and the group finds out that during the night the Raiders crept in and the Sith Lord too. They are made to leave. The Sith Lord begins his speech about his power and how the people need to feel safe knowing they are at least taken care of. He uses his mind tricks on the weak in the village to make them believe this lie. Ja Vinn sense his plot but is surrounded. And is made to leave. The Sith Lord tells Ja Vinn that he is no Jedi that all he has ever known to do is just walk away in defeat. That he will never find his purpose and complete it. Because he never finishes anything in life and is a coward. Ja Vinn takes his clan and leaves. When they go for serveral miles. He sees two people sitting by the roadside. It is Horain and Ateva. This makes Ja Vinn happy to see them. Ja Vinn explains his failure and about this Sith Lord. Horain tells him he must face him and that this is his purpose. They talk about how he has never faced but practice opponents in saber duels. Horain tells him that it seems Ja Vinn guided by the Force has showed him that the Jedi has had a servere flaw within the last ten years. That the Jedi has made thierselves secluded from the outside world. And have only thougt of themselves. Horain began to see it the more he thought of it. Ateva says they will back him up. She speaks about how he has not seen the bigger picture how the Force has guided him. The people need to be free and it's his duty and purpose to do it. Horain tells him about how he is a great warrior and he is great with a saber. How it seems the Jedi had become complacent and that none have sought the Force like him and that is why it was his destiny to come here and do this. He tells him that even at times if he doens't see it, or feel it that he is Forever a Jedi Knight.
Time to go back. The group agrees. One is afraid, but says he will die to help set them free. The final showdown is up on them as the fight begins. The Sith Lord smiles and awaits his return. As his gansters die and mostly now the hired group has died. Horain and Ateva run into the Sith Lord first before Ja Vinn gets there and a saber fight ensues. The Sith Lord is well trained for being somewhat young. He force throws Ateva and she gets back up. As she gets killed instantly. Ja Vinn sees this way across the village and he cries out as he runs full speed. But half way across he gets attacked and must fight off many people but his determination and his fueld hurt fights his way through the crowd, as his friends and the village begin to fight to survive.
The Sith Lord and Horain have a servere despetate fight, but the Sith Lord overpowers Horain and cuts him in half. Ja Vin comes close to a rage as he finally gets to him. They begin to say some things to one another, battling wits, as the Sith tries to gain the upperhand by making him feel his sense of purpose is meaningless. That he beat his friends too easily. That he could just as well kill him. That he is already beat. Leviathan begins to force choke Ja Vinn just like in his dream. Ja Vinn closes his eyes remembering when he was a child and met Luke Skywalker. Luke told him when he is the calmest and clears his mind then then the Force will be strong with him. In his mind he sees and senses how to fight this Sith Lord and sees his weakness. Ja Vinn force pushes Leviathan down and he gets back up quickly. Leviathan, surprised stares at him like a showdown in the old west.
The Sith Lord feels uneasy and strikes first while yet Ja Vinn's eyes are still closed and Ja Vinn blocks it. And the duel begins without hesitation. They fight as if they know each other, as if they have studied one another. All over the village they fight and use the force with knowledge. Knocking things down, throwing things. But the Sith Lord makes one mistake as Ja Vinn cuts off Leviathan's saber arm and as he falls to the ground in shock wondering how this is possible. Ja Vinn tells him how he beat him. Because he has no sense of purpose that he has given his life to nothingness and has not foreseen or been guided. And then he tells him that he knows his own sense of purpose. The Sith Lord asks what is it. Ja Vinn says "It's this"and he kills Leviathan. The gangsters then leave fast. Ja Vinn is then celebrated for his heroics he says his goodbyes and he wraps up his Jedi Master and best friend Ateva in cloths taking them back to the Jedi Temple. He is made Master by the council. He then goes back to his room and meditates. The End
FOREVER JEDI KNIGHT
A long time ago, in a galaxy far, far away....
100 years after the ROTJ events.
STAR WARS
Ja Vinn Kane, 24, is a young man so obsessed with purpose that he cannot get it out of his mind. When he decides that the Force is not showing him the way he thinks he then finds it on his own, even if he should quit and become a civilian. But what he doesn't know is he is unknowingly being guided by the Force.
Characters
Ja Vinn Kane-Main character
Orion Horain-Ja Vinn's Master
Ateva Savaary-Twi'lek. Ja Vinn's best friend.
Darth Leviathan - Lord Of The Sith
ACT ONE
1.Searching For Purpose.
Ja Vinn Kane,a young man of 24, meditates but doesn't seem to connect with the Force. He gets frustrated and visits his Master to question him for answers. While questioning him his patience doesn't want to hear what his master has to say. He takes out his frustrations in the Lightsaber battle room.
This room is like a boxing type ring place. Only they wear the material used from the Magma guards weapons. It keeps them from getting limbs cut off or cut in anyway. He is a very good swordsman. He rivals all people. But it isn't fulfilling for him. He seems bored and a sense of purpose makes him restless.
His Jedi Master comes back from the OuterRim and has a discussion to him about not trying so hard. That the Force doesn't always speak how he thinks or in how he wants. That he must see the good in all. He decides to go on a journey to make him complete. People and friends try and talk him out of it, but it does no good. Especially his good friend, Ateva Savaary, who he has grown up with him all his life.
She is a beautful Twi'lek. He has come to the conclusion that it's time for a cause. What he does not know, is that The Force is really guiding his feelings. He is so unfocused that he just doesn't see it nor sense it. While on his journey he meets serveral rude people that make him wanna go back home. It makes him rethink what he is doing.
But he keeps going. He ends up in a village Cantina. During his stay a man speaks of gangters that come many times a year to their village and takes their crops and use them as slaves. That they need protection. That the keeper of laws are too busy for such things and can do nothing. But no one wants to get involved, not even Ja Vinn at first. People are leary of Ja Vinn. So at night he sneaks to the man's village to see for himself.
People are working, children playing, things going on as normal. Ja Vinn falls asleep and wakes up early hearing noises from the village. And he gets knocked out. He is accused of being a spy for the villager and that if he returns the people will suffer more. It is the gangsters, but he is outnumbered. He gets roughed up and they do not know he is a Jedi. He then goes back to the town. He begins a program of hiring people to help, but no one wants to get involved.
The next day some of the gangsters come into town and begin to harass a few people. They leave and are on the edge of town when Ja Vinn decides to confront them. He walks behind them. Observing the surroundings. There are three of them and they stop at a graveyard at the edge of town. Ja Vinn finds this an ironic place. But he senses a trap of one more person near by. The three try to surround him. But he takes them out with a few swipes of his lightsaber. Then he loses his lightsaber and must fight this tough gangster alien. He finally beats him after a few rounds of it after it seems he was losing or getting bested. He uses the force to get his saber and cuts the Alien down. The crowd gasps, and is surprised to find out he is a Jedi. END OF ACT ONE
ACT TWO
At his room he hears a knock on his door. He opens the door to a tall man who wants to be his first recruit. Ja Vinn tests his reflexes and find's the man strong and fast. He has a blaster. He is similar to Han. After awhile he recruits serveral people, in all shapes and sizes even a woman. They make their plans on how they can stop the raid of gangsters and know they will be back for revenge of Ja Vinn killing their friends. But what he doesn't know is their leader is powerful in the darkside and is a Sith.
They go to the village and begin to teach them how to fight back. They have watchmen at all times in a tower. They start to live normal lives again knowing they have bodyguards, until the villans showup unannounced. No battle starts yet, but Ja Vinn and the group let them know they won't be abusing their powers on the innocent any longer. So the gangsters take off and one of them tells the town they will be back with LAVIATHAN, the leader and most powerful one they know. The village begins to live in fear again. But they wait on them and for a few days it is quiet.
They get ready for the battle. And in the early morning hours the signal that the raiders are coming and the first battle begins. Serveral people are killed and they have many raiders. Ja Vinn uses the force well, but senses something is wrong. Some children are locked up and made hostages. He cuts through the roof dropping down saving them and taking out the bad men with ease. Then suddenly as fast as they as came in they leave. END OF ACT TWO
ACT THREE
The town now becomes restless and even begins to complain to them at least they had things and only serveral times a year did the raiders come. But now they live in fear daily. They begin to tell them to leave and this disappoints Ja Vinn. He mediatates on this but no answer comes and once again he is frustrated. He begins to have a dream that night about this Leviathan and that he is choking the life out of him. He suddenly begins to fear for his life and feels he has overstayed and not powerful enough to change the peoples hearts and to help them. He feels he failed as a Jedi. He wakes up the next day and the group finds out that during the night the Raiders crept in and the Sith Lord too. They are made to leave. The Sith Lord begins his speech about his power and how the people need to feel safe knowing they are at least taken care of. He uses his mind tricks on the weak in the village to make them believe this lie. Ja Vinn sense his plot but is surrounded. And is made to leave. The Sith Lord tells Ja Vinn that he is no Jedi that all he has ever known to do is just walk away in defeat. That he will never find his purpose and complete it. Because he never finishes anything in life and is a coward. Ja Vinn takes his clan and leaves. When they go for serveral miles. He sees two people sitting by the roadside. It is Horain and Ateva. This makes Ja Vinn happy to see them. Ja Vinn explains his failure and about this Sith Lord. Horain tells him he must face him and that this is his purpose. They talk about how he has never faced but practice opponents in saber duels. Horain tells him that it seems Ja Vinn guided by the Force has showed him that the Jedi has had a servere flaw within the last ten years. That the Jedi has made thierselves secluded from the outside world. And have only thougt of themselves. Horain began to see it the more he thought of it. Ateva says they will back him up. She speaks about how he has not seen the bigger picture how the Force has guided him. The people need to be free and it's his duty and purpose to do it. Horain tells him about how he is a great warrior and he is great with a saber. How it seems the Jedi had become complacent and that none have sought the Force like him and that is why it was his destiny to come here and do this. He tells him that even at times if he doens't see it, or feel it that he is Forever a Jedi Knight.
Time to go back. The group agrees. One is afraid, but says he will die to help set them free. The final showdown is up on them as the fight begins. The Sith Lord smiles and awaits his return. As his gansters die and mostly now the hired group has died. Horain and Ateva run into the Sith Lord first before Ja Vinn gets there and a saber fight ensues. The Sith Lord is well trained for being somewhat young. He force throws Ateva and she gets back up. As she gets killed instantly. Ja Vinn sees this way across the village and he cries out as he runs full speed. But half way across he gets attacked and must fight off many people but his determination and his fueld hurt fights his way through the crowd, as his friends and the village begin to fight to survive.
The Sith Lord and Horain have a servere despetate fight, but the Sith Lord overpowers Horain and cuts him in half. Ja Vin comes close to a rage as he finally gets to him. They begin to say some things to one another, battling wits, as the Sith tries to gain the upperhand by making him feel his sense of purpose is meaningless. That he beat his friends too easily. That he could just as well kill him. That he is already beat. Leviathan begins to force choke Ja Vinn just like in his dream. Ja Vinn closes his eyes remembering when he was a child and met Luke Skywalker. Luke told him when he is the calmest and clears his mind then then the Force will be strong with him. In his mind he sees and senses how to fight this Sith Lord and sees his weakness. Ja Vinn force pushes Leviathan down and he gets back up quickly. Leviathan, surprised stares at him like a showdown in the old west.
The Sith Lord feels uneasy and strikes first while yet Ja Vinn's eyes are still closed and Ja Vinn blocks it. And the duel begins without hesitation. They fight as if they know each other, as if they have studied one another. All over the village they fight and use the force with knowledge. Knocking things down, throwing things. But the Sith Lord makes one mistake as Ja Vinn cuts off Leviathan's saber arm and as he falls to the ground in shock wondering how this is possible. Ja Vinn tells him how he beat him. Because he has no sense of purpose that he has given his life to nothingness and has not foreseen or been guided. And then he tells him that he knows his own sense of purpose. The Sith Lord asks what is it. Ja Vinn says "It's this"and he kills Leviathan. The gangsters then leave fast. Ja Vinn is then celebrated for his heroics he says his goodbyes and he wraps up his Jedi Master and best friend Ateva in cloths taking them back to the Jedi Temple. He is made Master by the council. He then goes back to his room and meditates. The End