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JackBauer24
02-05-2007, 10:38 AM
Hey, guys. I figured that this would be the best place to post this, since this is the non-SW Fiction folder.

Back before I was writing short stories about guys getting shot on street corners, I spent three and a half years (February '03 to July '06) working on a massive piece of Fan Fiction based on the show 24. Specifically, the first season.

Here's the premise: In the sixth hour of the show, Jack Bauer was ordered to kill his partner, but quickly saved her by giving her a protective flak jacket. Sadly, she later murdered his wife. So the big question became: what if he had never given her that jacket? That's the premise for 24: Altered Universe. Eighteen episodes, all following from that simple question. It's a whole new look at the first season of the show.

For a taste, I've added the first few pages of the story to this post. If anyone's interested in reading the whole thing, I'll add the link to the complete work in a future post. Enjoy!

(sorry for the formatting on the page...didn't have it in a proper uploadable version. The full version is in a PDF that's far too large to post here.)

Cydon
02-05-2007, 02:11 PM
I've only seen 1 episode of 24 and I your story has encouraged me to watch more. Well done.

JackBauer24
02-05-2007, 02:12 PM
Well, great! I would recommend starting from the beginning...it's well worth it.

Cydon
02-05-2007, 05:09 PM
I'll see if I can pick up Season 1 from the library. Thx.

sharyntyre
02-06-2007, 06:18 AM
pretty cool writing man, I'm finding the format a bit difficult, but not impossible. You have done a killer job with Jack.

More would be cool.

JackBauer24
02-06-2007, 10:06 AM
pretty cool writing man, I'm finding the format a bit difficult, but not impossible. You have done a killer job with Jack.

More would be cool.

Great, thank you! :D I know the format's hard, but I think that's mainly because it's in .doc form. For the rest of the story, here's the links:

24: Altered Universe (http://www.24au.blogspot.com) - That's the home page for 24AU. There, you'll find PDF and HTML versions of the first two episodes of 24AU, as well as various behind-the-scenes information and other cool extras.

24AU: The Complete Series (http://characterlist.njoe.com/The%20Complete,%20Annotated%20Series.pdf) - The complete 18-episode series, all in one massive PDF file! This 1,135 page file is more than 41MB, but it's worth it. It's the entire story, from start to finish, complete with a final letter from the author and a "wishful thinking" cast list for the series. To download this file, right-click the link and select "Save Target As." It's definitely worth it.

Beyond that, I do have all of the individual episodes in PDF format; I just don't have them online at the moment. If you're interested in those, let me know.

Cydon
02-06-2007, 02:37 PM
I am. I succeeded in putting Season 1 on hold, btw.

sharyntyre
02-06-2007, 06:35 PM
schweeeeetness

Cydon, season 1 was maybe the best of them all, well last year was a real ass kicker too. take a saturday and watch it in one sitting, bwhahahahaha.

Cydon
02-07-2007, 04:41 PM
I will.