Shadows of the Jedi

[Swamprat_Jedi_Knight]

I wrote a Star Wars fanfiction aver a year ago, but only a handful of friends/family have read it. So I thought I would offer it to anyone that would like to read it here.

It is roughly 110 pages long in microsoft WORD, so it only technically qualifies as a short story, not a book. It was my first attept at writing anything more than a couple pages long.

The story is set after the end of Return of the Jedi, about 20 some years after. The story is sort of an action adventure, as most star wars adventures are, with a bit of a love story sprinkled throughout, with several spots of action for battle junkies. I tried to come up with an original storyline that hadn't been done before, and I think I suceeded in even getting a few suprising plot twist in there as well.

So anyway, if you are interested in getting this to read, just post here and I'll get it to ya. Like I said earlier, it is in microsoft word, but if you have wordpad it will go straight into that as well. Hope to hear from ya...:bye:

[Jedi Master 2k5]

Hey I am totally interested in reading the story.

[Swamprat_Jedi_Knight]

Hey thanks for replying! :bye: Sorry my responce has been slow, haven't been around my pc in a while. I guess I can just upload it here, if for some reason the links get broken, let me know again in this thread. I hope you enjoy it. Please !!!! Let me know what you think as you are going along, or what you thought at the end. Please be patient with it, I was feeling my writing style out at the begginning, but I thought it improves at the story progresses. Once again, please let me know what you think!!! I would love any questions, criticisms, suggestions for improvment, etc... I also will post the "cover" I came up with. Thanks, here you go...:happydance:
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[Swamprat_Jedi_Knight]

Sorry, had to cut the book in half, file size whatnot.... This time I mean it, HERE YOU GO!:happydance:
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[Jedi Master 2k5]

That story was fabulous!!!! I personally Recommend anyone who see's this thread read the story it ROCKS!!!!!! rep.points for the awsome story!!!

[Jedi Master 2k5]

Why don't you submit this to DEl Ray book company it' definitly good enough.

[Jedi Master 2k5]

To all fan fic. and sw fans read this story it RULZ!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[Machievelli]

I have been doing critiques for over a year, but i don't have time to read this online. Can you send me a copy at my e-mail address?

[Swamprat_Jedi_Knight]

Jedi Master2k5 I am kinda surprised you were able to read it that fast. Thank you for your compliments, I must admit it feels nice to hear someone compliment your work. Thank you.

[Jedi Master 2k5]

no problem and I read it so fast cuz I'm a very fast reader. I read two sw novels a week.

NO JOKE

[Jedi Master 2k5]

The way you use aden and salara was brilliant.

[Swamprat_Jedi_Knight]

The way you use aden and salara was brilliant.
Do you mean how the story switched back and forth between them? Or the slight "romantic interest" that builds throughout? Curious...

[Jedi Master 2k5]

The way that you switched from aden to salara was amazing.

[Jedi Master 2k5]

Only if more writers could do that like you do.

[Swamprat_Jedi_Knight]

Actually they do. In most Star Wars novels (that I have read), especially the New Jedi Order; the story will follow several plot lines with different groups of characters. Eventually all, or most, of the plot lines with merge together at the end for the conclution of the story. I wish I could claim glory for this style of storytelling, but I actaully borrowed it from the actual novels, and they have been doing it for quite a while.Thanks for the compliments though, I just can't take credit for it.

[Jedi Master 2k5]

I have also read many njo novels but I truly love this story!!!!