Rhyming Poetry

[Darth Massacrus]

heres thread where I post some of my poetry.


This is to celebrate my 800th post!

heres a piece called Blackhole:

Blackhole

I am that which grips with might
harkens the night
and silences all that is light


(based on the blade of Ajunta Pall)

[nefertiti]

Sweet.....

[Darth Massacrus]

thank you for taking your time
to listen to this rhyme

[Cydon]

Very...interesting Darth.

[Darth Massacrus]

"very interesting, Darth"
said someone sounding like a man named Carth...:lol:

[huttslime]

It's a little short. Add a line or two and it might sound even better.

[Darth Massacrus]

H.S. says "its a little short"
"another line or two would make it better",
so as a retort,
I'll add many a letter!

[Darth Massacrus]

see the above, and this thread you will love....

[Darth Massacrus]

why am I the only poster,
on this thread of rhymes?
I'd reckoned it be hotter than a toaster,
but instead the lack of posts is worthy of crimes....

oh well....

[Blizzard]

Because you put your name on it and didn't make a thread that everyone could participate in.

I am changing the title.

[Darth Relentless]

There once was a woman from Venis
Whos body was shaped like a....


I'll stop there