Dark Times Serial

[bendu]

This is the first chapter of an ongoing story I plan to keep writing. Use this thread to send me messages on what you think. If interest is high I'll keep on a writin'. Don't be afraid to criticize and tell me what could be improved and such.

Don't be daunted by the fact that its 30 pages. Just take your time with it.

Enjoy.

[sharyntyre]

Good story. I like the characters and the action was writen well.

[bendu]

Good story. I like the characters and the action was writen well.

Thanks.

I love my characters. Sometimes too much. I would like to go into which characters will continue to be prevalent in the series, but I don't want to give anything away now do I?

I'll just say that most of the characters you were introduced to in Facing the Mirror will be seen again, and possibly again and again...again in future installments.

Feel free to ask me things about it. I hope to get some good discussion out of this as well.

[Swamprat_Jedi_Knight]

I only read the first couple of pages, but my first impressions are that it is very well written, sounds profesional, and has excellent character interaction. You have true tallent. I would say keep writing, if only for yourself, you are the only one that knows what the story of your characters will be, the characters you love. I for one would like to know as well. I am busy, but would deffinately like to read the first section sometime. I saved it to my hard drive in case that time presents itself. Good luck.

[bendu]

Bump.

Just trying to keep my story alive. My next chunk will be coming soon. Installments should be coming quicker after that.