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Darth Dookie
09-27-2006, 03:41 PM
The Dark Coffin

Prologue

In the Begining there was life, but in the end was death and the force.
It starts on a dark night on Korriban a lone exile walks through the valley of the dark lords. He had the apperance of a jedi but the look of a monster.
Reception walked towards the sith academy he felt that the place was dead and had no life but that would all change. Reception went into the academy, he walked to the academy archives and pulled up the dark lords that where buried in the valley of the dark lords he accessed Marko Ragnos. He said yes this is the one I need the Sith empire will be back once and for all.
Recetion walked back to the valley of the Dark Lords and entered Marko Ragnos's tomb. Reception ignited his black blade to life and walked into the Dark Lords tomb he accessed hi Coffin and pulled out the remain's of the dark lord. Reption took out a black tablet out of his robe and started chanting a spell of darkness. Reception was chanting as I call the dark lord back to life I sacrifice myself to his will and then he picked up a mask and changed his robes that where dark black and he took his hand put it on the remains of the dark lord and then a green light apperead and then it came up as a soul and it went into reception's body and then reception said yes I feel the power. As do I Reception said Marko Ragnos.

Darth Dookie
09-27-2006, 03:42 PM
Here is the prologue to The Dark Coffin I probaly won't post anymore today.

Machievelli
06-19-2007, 02:37 PM
Posted 22 June 2007 on StarwarsKnights under The Critic returns and LucasForums under the Critic’s Two Cents

Spelling, editing, word usage are all problems with this piece. The basic idea is sound. Now go back, calm down, edit, and tell it to us again.